Write What You Know Vol 1 Outline
Added 2023-06-09 09:04:26 +0000 UTCOutline for my new short story/novella thing. It came together really fast and I'm super happy with it. As I've said, they'll be 4 chapter installments.
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1- Nate Alone
- Nate is in the middle of writing an erotic short story. He’s at his desk, dictating the words to his computer. He gets annoyed at his dictation software and corrects something, but he gets snagged on a line.
- He’s been working on this one for two days now and it was going pretty well, but he’d been dreading the sex scene. The story is something fantasy related in a setting he’d done a few works in. It doesn’t sound right to him and he frustratedly ruffles his hair and decides to leave it be for now, kicking off away from his work desk.
- Just another day in the life of haremlit author Max Masters, he sarcastically muses. We get a sarcastic explanation of his pen name.
- He’s not gonna accomplish anything by beating himself up over writer’s block. Still, this is a recurring problem of his. He’d been writing smut since high school (fanfiction) and he felt he hasn’t improved at it, and his reviews have all said as much. Two years he’s been doing it and after around fifty short stories he’s yet to have one title rate higher than three stars.
- Any reviews he got were usually about how lame the sex was, but everything else was ok. Sometimes better than ok. He knows he has the potential to be someone, and then he remembers his uncle’s encouragement. Come on, what’s the motto of shounen jump? Friendship, effort, victory!
- While he wasn’t doing great on the friendship department, being a recluse while most of his friends went off to college, Nate wouldn’t slouch when it came to the effort.
- Nate takes this fact and gets fired up over it. He decides to give it another push and gets back closer to his computer. He tries talking out the sex scene again but it still leaves him in an annoyed mood until he really does call in a night for now. He apologizes to his uncle.
- Nate leaves his office and heads down to the living room, we get a description of the place. There’s a big couch, recliners, a giant tv with tons of game systems hooked up to it, and shelves of games, anime box sets, and manga.
- He checks on discord to see if any of his friends were up for some gaming. Everyone is busy tonight and it just makes him annoyed and lonely.
- With nothing better to do, he jacks off to some hentai and he finds something during his ‘research’ that inspires him enough to pull out his notebook when he’s done and he jots it down. We get an explanation of his notebook. He leaves it on the coffee table for now. And has something to eat.
- It’s still pretty early and he’s a bit depressed. Doesn’t feel like playing a game alone, there’s nothing he really wants to do, and he thinks back to how isolated he’s become.
- Family doesn’t want much to do with him, either cause of his hobby or what happened with uncle, and he’d gotten too used to delivery apps for most of his groceries and junk like that. Not like he wanted to use his crappy Ford escort if he had to, that scrappy thing was practically for emergencies only.
- He was always an indoors person, but the thought of going outside feels weird to him. The pandemic hit people hard in different ways, and this was his lot.
- Before deciding on what to do, he pulls out his phone and gave in to his compulsion. He checks his Amazon reports tab and sees he’s only made a few dollars today in royalties. He’s not hurting for money, but it still stings.
- Nate is feeling a little down. After all the work he’s put in, he thought he’d be further along in his career now. He worries he’s letting down his uncle. He gave him this chance to chase his dreams after he died and now…
- Nate sighs and doesn’t dwell on it. He decides to call an early night and chill out in bed. He takes a shower first, having some good ideas and jotting them down after so he doesn’t forget, then goes to lay down and read. He knows he should be reading other haremlit authors, studying their technique and shit, but he goes with manga on his phone instead.
- He respects a lot of his fellow authors but they don’t always do it for him. He likes his harem stories in a really particular way, and he discovered that early on in life when his uncle first let him read some raunchy stuff out of his collection. Nate smiles at the good memories and lays down to read something he’s been into lately, Chained Slave.
- We hear his thoughts on the series and how it’s mostly a good example of what he looks for in a harem, even if the main girl gets a little too much attention. Some of his hang ups are explained, but not all of them.
- He realizes he’s current with the series way sooner than he thought he was, and now he’s left listless. Nothing feels as empty as getting caught up with a series and wondering what next. God forbid he have to spend any amount of time with his mind alone.
- It leads him to a place of darkness where he’d be better off avoiding, Twitter. He ends up scrolling through some fanart, faving some, wishing that someone would make fanart of his characters eventually one day. This gets him feeling worse and he makes a venting tweet about his writing that felt like he was fishing for attention.
- He regrets it and tries to delete it, but he suddenly gets a response from someone he recognizes. A fan of his who’s been commenting on his work since his fanfiction days. They ask if he needs to talk to someone and he DMs them.
- The other person is very supportive and overly friendly, Nate feeling good about talking to them. He kind of wishes he’d done so sooner. He’s replied to a lot of their comments in the past but they never spoke like this.
- The conversation gets to his talking about his work. The fan says it has a lot of heart but puts it bluntly that his sex scenes aren’t sexy. It hurts to hear that from one of his biggest fans, but they are quick to capitalize on it.
- She asks if Nate has an editor by any chance. He admits no. They say that’s it, you need someone to get really hands on with you and give you lots of advice.
- Nate could definitely afford that with his uncle’s money, but the other person volunteers themselves. He’s surprised by the offer but isn’t sure if they’re a good fit. He’s known them a while, but can they really hack it?
- They ask Nate what does he have to lose? Besides, it’ll be fun and we can hang out. He laughs at the suggestion but shuts up when they say they live in the same town.
- He’s suddenly not comfortable with this, thinking they might be some kind of creep. They tell him to chill and reveal a secret, they went to high school together. Nate thinks it’s one of his bros playing a prank on him but they ask if he wants a hint. He gives in and gets sent a slightly lewd selfie with the eyes cropped off but a lollipop visible.
- He instantly gets hard, but the girl is like omg ive never done that before, you like it? He struggles for something to say but he can’t remember anyone who looks like this girl did, though the lollipop kind of tips him off… but it can’t be her, can it…?
- She pokes him again and tells him to quit jacking off. He insists he’s not, but gets teased that he can if he wants to. Why do you think I sent it?
- Nate is confused, thinking this was about editing. It is, but it’ll be easier to explain in person. Let me know where to come and we can start work on your craft as early as tonight! Or if you’re a coward we can meet up somewhere else tomorrow lol
- He is very weak and struggles for a moment but he keeps scrolling up to look at the lewd selfie. This is really stupid, but his hentai-addled cumbrain sees this as the erotic opportunity of a lifetime. Hell, it’s almost like something he would write himself.
- Impulsively, he gives his address to her and she’s like oh dope be over in an hour! Make sure you get it out of your system before then, then says bye.
- Nate is stunned. He just invited a stranger off the internet to his house and all because they sent him a hot pic and claimed to know him. And she was supposedly coming by in an hour. He didn’t know what to do, but he inspects the picture in greater detail.
- It doesn’t look anything like her, but he wonders if it’s actually possible to be who he’s thinking. Aside from his guy friends, only one person in high school ever found out about his writing.
- The picture gets him worked up and he ends up jacking off for good luck before cleaning himself up and tidying the house a bit, cursing himself for not doing earlier it instead of masturbating. He makes sure to spray something in the living room to cover up his earlier session.
- He’s wondering what’s about to happen. This wasn’t just about editing, was it? This girl seemed pretty loose and like she was looking for a hookup, something he’d never done before. He sighs and asks uncle to look out for him, as this is the first girl he’s had over before. Or the first cat fishing serial killer. Fifty fifty.
- As he’s pacing around the room he hears the sounds of a motor outside in his driveway. A motorcycle? No, maybe a scooter, he thinks. He goes to his door in preparation right in time for the doorbell and after some slight hesitation he opens it.
- There’s a girl right, and he’s stunned. Nicole? She smiles and says she goes by Nicki now. He’s openly gawking at her but not fully for pervy reasons. It really is you? Yes, do I look *that* different? Yes, she does.
- Aside from lollipop.
- She looks like one of those gyaru girls you see in anime and manga, and Nicki agrees saying she loves those girls. He’s surprised she knows the term, then notices her shirt says ‘baka’ and she smirks and teases him. It’s been four years since we graduated, silly. People change. Asks if he’s gonna let his new editor in so they can get to work.
- He makes sure she was serious about that and that this isn’t a catfish. She teases that she didn’t come here to rob him but if he wants to give her money it’s not like she’ll say no.
- Nate is finally trusting after her humor and lets Nicki. She looked different now, but she was still the same friendly girl he remembered and it felt really nice to see her after so many years. She gives him a suggestive hug and says it’s good to see you too. Boob squish.
2- Nicki Comes Over
- We get a description of the kind of person Nicki used to be in high school and Nate’s relationship with her back then. Beautiful, popular, super smart. Since she was like that she talked to everyone regardless of their social caste and everyone loved her, but she was out of everyone’s league. She and Nate had a lot classes together and she talked to him quite a bit after a little mixup they’d had.
- Now she’s a gyaru, somehow, and she’s at his house. It was either a really bad time to have a gyaru fetish or a great one.
- Nicki compliments the house, wondering how he got such a nice one on the kinda money his stories make. That hits where it hurts but she retorts back. He tells her it’s his uncles place. Nicki is suddenly worried, he’s not here is he? Oh, no. He’s dead and left it to me I just still don’t really feel like this place is mine, y’know.
- Nicki apologizes but he says it’s been two years, he’s ok now. Nicki still reassures him with a shoulder pat and it makes him happy. They leave the foyer and head into the living room. Nate apologizes in advance that it’s kind of nerdy.
- She jokes about his old fiction. Nerdy? Coming from the guy who wrote whatever? He shuts up and leads her in, where she sees all the huge collection and loses her shit. She starts to freak at everything and is super excited, going around commenting on figures and pieces of the collection, but Nate is surprised. He asks point blank, so, you like manga now?
- I always did, Nicki insists, I just didn’t have much of a chance to consume it much until I moved out. He says their school had a lot of manga and she could’ve borrowed some back then, but she says her mom would’ve killed her. It’s satanic, didn’t you know?
- He laughs but apologizes, he shouldn’t laugh at that. It must’ve been hard for her. Eh, it’s all good. Doing better nowadays. That makes Nate remember shouldn’t she be in college? Last I heard you got that scholarship and-
- Shit happens, she shrugs. I was only there for about a year, and now I live with my two bros. But I didn’t come here trust to give you a recap of how my life’s been going.
- He sits down. So what did you come for? That pic was…
- Nicki stares at him and smirks. You jacked it, didn’t you? She points out the febreeze.
- He’s honest and says that was for an earlier session.
- Earlier? So, you did?
- …was I not supposed to?
- She likes his answer and that he owns up to it. Has always liked that about him and then sits down on the couch next to him. She then wonders if he ever did it to her back in high school, and he says he’s gotta keep *some* secrets, doesn’t he?
- She laughs, then Nicki tells him to forget about the picture for a bit, then she puts her hand on his knee and asks if he wants to vent about his writing a bit before they get into it. She has a serious expression. Sympathetic. Really brings out her gentle features and stirs something in him.
- He wants to know if she’s really been reading his work this entire time. Yep, every last word. But why? It’s not like we were close or anything. She gasps, but we shared that secret!
- He elaborates. We bumped into each other in the hall that one time and swapped notebooks. You got all my story notes and found my pen name at the time I guess, but we traded it back the next day. Hardly a secret.
- She asks how many people knew he wrote back then? Not many. Then it’s a secret!
- Her simpleness charms him. What’s next, you gonna tell me you had a crush on me?
- Dude I sent you a half titty pic of the girls and I came over to your house at night. Draw your own conclusions, she says as she plays with her lollipop.
- Nate is shocked and says he thinks he needs a drink. She’s excited, asks what he’s got. He makes them something and Nicki has gotten out of her jacket now, revealing her crop top. He hands her the drink and sits back down.
- He asks if she really wanted to talk about his writing or if that was just an excuse. She does. He elaborates on how he’s been feeling and some of the junk with his uncle. He gave me a bunch of money and the house when he died so I could chase my dreams and not have to worry about anything else for a good long time, but it’s been two years and he hasn’t made much improvement, he feels.
- She’s supportive and he asks her what she thinks of his writing. If she’d still be reading it if it wasn’t by him. Nicki says there’s a lot of good stuff in his work, yeah. He has good ideas, fun characters, and interesting set ups, but the problem is his execution. It’s flat and lifeless, y’know. Especially-
- The sex? He lowers his head. Exactly. You write like a total virgin whenever things get down and dirty. There are always a lot of interesting ideas *in* the sex scenes, but they’re a slog to get through cause the presentation isn’t exciting enough.
- Nate is shocked at her good analysis but she reminds him of her GPA and she was majoring in lit before she gave up. She has what it takes to be a top notch editor and she isn’t just messing with him. Nate feels really reassured by her.
- He then finishes the rest of the drink and admits he is a virgin. Yeah, that’s my point. She recalls a creative writing teacher they both had, Nate thinks of her fondly, (possibly later harem member if the teacher was in her first year of teaching, maybe?) and says she always said to write what you know. You’re writing shit you don’t know anything about, shit you haven’t lived! No wonder you aren’t selling, dude.
- You can’t possibly think it’s that simple, do you? He laughs it off but is blushing.
- She thinks he’s underestimating the power of experience, and now it’s time to prove it. Excited and a little afraid, he asks if she has something in mind. She tells him not to get too ahead of himself, she wants him to write a little prompt for her right now. She notices he has a tablet nearby and hands it to him, says to use the notes app or whatever.
- What, right now? She’s fierce and says yes, now.
- She gives him the prompt of a virgin getting sent a lewd selfie from a hot girl. It’s the first time he’s ever gotten one, and he’s excited and nervous about what to do about it. Describe how he feels.
- Nate looks at her. Did you really plan this that far ahead? She smirks, all according to keikaku.
- Nate is amused, but then asks how long she’s been planning this. Nicki is put on the spot and admits she’s wanted to talk to him a lot sooner, but I dunno. Emotions are weird. Now stop trying to get all touchy feely with me and do the prompt!
- Are you just gonna watch me while I work? No, I’m gonna go through this. She shows him his notebook that she swiped along with the tablet and he’s shocked. He says that ones way different than the one she looked through years ago.
- It’s where he keeps all the fantasies and dirty things he wants to write about- and do? …Yes, and do. She smirks. Even more reason to go through it if I’m gonna be your editor.
- He relents and they start.
- Nate is shocked at the speed he’s going. The words seem to come to him as he describes the tension and intimate feelings, remembering the sight of Nicki’s underboob. His lower half stirs while writing and he’s done in like ten minutes. Throughout the session he keeps peeking at Nicki and she seems to be really into what she’s reading, and is visibly surprised a few times. It’s kind of hot having a girl read through all the fucked up shit he fantasizes about, but he tries not to think about it and he finishes.
- He announces he’s done and she’s like whew, you’re even more of a fucking perv than I ever thought. Lot of good ideas in there, though. Would love to read more sometime real soon.
- He says it’s rough but she’s like yeah yeah lemme see. She does, and before she says anything, she asks how he feels about it. He reiterates how easy it felt and is actually kinda optimistic about it.
- Nicki confirms that for a rough, it was actually pretty damn good! And she’s not just saying that. She can feel the guy’s tension. The desperate way he’s coming to terms with how bad he wants to fuck the girl who sent the selfie.
- There’s an awkward moment, but they both laugh it off and she praises him. Asks if Nate sees what she means now.
- Yeah, it definitely had an impact and he can’t deny it. But… what now? She asks what does he think.
- He thinks Nicki wants him to get more experience. Things are quiet for a moment and she scoots closer. Her hand rests idly on top of his erection. Don’t you want that, too?
- He’s insanely excited and admits that he does. And not just because he wants to be a better writer.
- Nicki is happy but she teases he shouldn’t get the wrong idea or anything. Don’t go getting feelings for your editor, silly. He teases back that it might be too late. He’s a harem fetishist, he imprints on cute girls left and right.
- She laughs at this and says that’s a much nicer way of calling himself a manslut. I am what I am, he insists. Nicki gets serious. There it is again. Always so unashamed of who you are.
- Nate inquires about this, asking if that’s why she had a crush on him back in high school. No, silly. It’s why I *have* a crush on you. Inspired, he takes her hand and holds it. He asks why she never told him.
- Wasn’t allowed to have boyfriends, she shrugs, and back then, I still cared about listening to my mom. Besides. Nate was chasing after someone else back in high school, wasn’t he?
- He gets quiet about this. That didn’t really go well. It probably would’ve been for the best if he hadn’t wasted all that effort on Shizuka.
- Nicki tells him not to think about the past for now, or what could’ve happened. Instead, focus on what’s happening right now. She mounts him on the couch and leans in, smiling teasingly. She has a business proposal for him.
- He’s listening. Yeah, I can tell you are, she teases and puts some weight on his cock. Holy shit- he’s glad he jacked off before she came over. She teases him back and continues her proposal. She leans in and whispers into his ear.
- If you let me be your editor from now on, I’ll make sure every last thing in your little sex note comes true so you can write about absolutely anything you want.
- His excitement almost gets too much to bare and he points out that he’s a harem fetishist, reminding her like 70% of the stuff in there requires more than one girl.
- She huskily whispers all in due time and that every harem needs its first girl, doesn’t it?
- Internally Nate is having a minor nitpick about his problem with ‘first girls’ in harem stories and how they’re either always the ‘favorite’ and get more love than everyone else, or even worse about how they’re the one the MC picks in the end, but at the moment… Nate doesn’t really care about any of that.
- He tells her you’re hired. She thought he’d say that and then right as he tries to lean in for a kiss she gets off his lap and stands up, saying to hold his horses. He asks if kissing isn’t allowed.
- No, he can kiss her all he wants, but she asks wouldn’t he rather start off with something from his sex note? He gets up after her and asks what she has in mind. She found an idea in there that’s perfect for his first time. Well, our first time, she specifies, but you get the idea. You in?
- Definitely. She teases him for being happy about the virgin thing, pointing out how it always seems to be a thing in his writing. He says it’s part of the harem fantasy, now do you want me to take you to the bedroom, or not?
- She does and he leads her there. She admires all the posters and anime shit in his room. Nicki takes the initiative and sits down on the bed, telling him how this is going to go down.
- He wrote about wanting to play with a girls body while she lays there motionlessly, obediently taking whatever he wants to do to her without complaint. She thought it was perfect, what better way to get hands on experience than an all you can grope buffet?
- Nate is going through another holy shit moment and Nicki takes it he likes her idea. Yes. Good, so… I’m gonna lay down… she does so- and you’re gonna come over on the bed with me. After that, go nuts. Free use. Do anything you want with me with the condition that I’m not going to do anything to help you. If you want something, you gotta do it yourself.
- Think you can handle it? Not gonna chicken out, are you?
- Nate hesitates before getting on top of her on the bed. He reaches out and takes the lollipop from her mouth and puts it in hers, surprising her.
- I’m not backing down here of all places, he says. She whines about her candy a little, explaining sexily that she always gets uncomfortable if she doesn’t have something in her mouth to suck on. It’s an anxiety thing, she teasingly insists.
- Nate feels bold and starts the play session with by saying he can help her with that, reaching down and putting his thumb against her lips. She takes it in and starts to suck.
3- Naughty Stuff
- Nate is overwhelmed by what it’s like for a woman to suck his fingers. The idea always aroused him, but he thought it was just a visual thing. The sheer rush it gives him, the way it makes him tingle down there and the way it feels linked to his penis is insane.
- She finally lets go and gives it another lick, asking if he’s too overwhelmed after they’d just started. She says she’ll suck his thumb as long as he wants, but thought he was kinkier than that.
- He reaffirms he’s gonna do more, he’s just getting started. Nicki gives him a sarcastic response making it clear that she’s waiting on him.
- Nate looks down and takes in the sight of her body knowing that he can play with it however he wants. Nicki thinks he’s totally thinking something along the lines of to think that the hottest girl in high school is right there waiting for me to do things to her. He calls her awful chatty for a free use toy, she points out she’s yet to be used.
- Nate starts casually by running his hands down the curves of her body, taking it all in. She feels soft. Softer than he ever knew. He repeats this process several times, with Nicki staring up at him patiently. Gentle.
- His hands run down her tummy and back up again, taking the first plunge under her shirt and groping her for the first time over her bra. He’s like oh my god when doing it, and she’s happy. She’s proud of her assets and talks them up, and he rolls her shirt up over them.
- Her bra is leopard skin and tight with a front clasp. Nicki thinks it’s adorable how transfixed he is and reminds him he can do anything he wants as soon as he stops staring. He counters back that she’s the excited one for rushing him, giving her aggressive grope. She happily squeals and suggests he might be right, saying she’s his toy and of course she’s excited to be played with.
- This makes his blood boil and he undoes her bra, exposing her nipples as he drinks in the sight. He’s drawn in by them and immediately lowers his face onto one, clamping down with his mouth. Nicki is grateful he’s ramping things up, starting to feel good as she moans beneath him and squirms.
- Nate is feeling powerful, getting a reaction out of her like this. He continues to grope and play with her breasts, getting her even more worked up. He comments on this and learns she’s very sensitive, which Nate can’t get enough of. He gets a bit rougher, and she moans about it a lot.
- When he looks up he sees how panting she is and that her mouth is slack, dripping with saliva. Moreover, her lips are appealing. He leaves her breasts and scoots in, commenting on she wasn’t kidding, she looks like she really needs something to suck on.
- Nicki asks what he has in mind. A few things, but he wants to start with this. He kisses he, his mind is blown by how good she is and he’s overwhelmed with the new sensations. Nicki is aggressively good at kissing and he can’t keep pace with her at all. She’s fucking him with her tongue. He thinks about what it would be like to shove his cock in there, and the thought makes him so painfully hard that he starts grinding himself against her.
- Nicki moans louder into their kiss, showing she likes it. She also starts bucking her hips against it, giving him a little pleasure. When he pulls away he’s breathless and he sees what a sloppy, panty mess Nicki is. She looks up at him with pleading eyes, asking him for more. Now that she knows how good kissing is, she isn’t sure lollipops will be enough.
- He summons his courage and asks her what about something bigger, to which she is open to find out. It’s surreal to Nate but he’s desperate to whip it out and he gets up. Nicki calls him out for being so cute, and he counters she’s making him this way. Every last part of her is so insanely fuckable that it almost hurts.
- She giggles how that’s the sweetest thing anyone has ever said to her. Nate undoes his pants and Nicki sees the huge bulge, surprising her. Didn’t tell me you were packing hentai-sized heat in there, you know. He tells her she hasn’t seen anything yet and strips further, revealing his huge cock to her.
- Now she’s the one hypnotized. Nate grabs it and taunts her with it, watching her eyes follow it like a cat waiting to pounce. He teases her and she responds by asking if he believes in destiny. Not really, why? She’s feeling as if from the moment she was born, her mouth was fated to worship that fat fucking thing.
- He warns her if she talks like that he’s not gonna be able to hold back. So? I’m your toy. Yeah, but…
- Nicki reassured him that she’s had some practice with her dildo and he doesn’t need to worry. Just use her how he wants. He draws closer to her and she’s overtaken by the scent of it, but she breaks composure suddenly with a request.
- She needs a picture of this. She takes her phone from her shorts and hands it to him begging. Wait, seriously? Nicki says it would turn her own so much if he dropped it on her face and took a pic. Then realizes it might make him uncomfortable, but then she sees how hard he’s throbbing. Nevermind, you like the idea, don’t you?
- He says he has a lot of filming and pic taking ideas in his sex note. Great, let’s cross out some more! Take as many reference photos as you want. Nate lowers his cock onto her face, feeling her hot breath on him. The anticipation is killing him and he places it against her tongue, making him shiver.
- He warns her that since this is his first time he probably won’t last long, but she gives him a gentle kiss and says she won’t go all out. She wants him to savor it so he remembers it every time he writes about a blowjob. He can’t hold back and finally inserts it into her mouth.
- Nicki starts to suck and he’s losing it. It’s so good. But true to her word, she’s not going at it like she did with the kiss. It’s a lot slower and more methodical, dragging her tongue around. She produces so much saliva it’s crazy. Just being in her mouth feels like he’s getting a bath.
- She’s not moving though, so he asks if he’s supposed to do it. She looks up at him with eager eyes begging him to get started and he slowly starts to fuck her face. It’s only a few inches at a time, but the suction and drag of her lips is the best thing ever. He can’t believe it’s so tight.
- He notices behind him that Nicki is grinding her legs together, realizing how hot this makes her. He really wants to give her some attention, but he can’t look away from watching her suck his cock. He promises to do something for her as soon as he’s finished.
- This excites her and she starts moving her head on her own, surprising him. She gets faster and faster, ramping up. He’s not gonna last long at all at this rate and he warns her that he’s gonna cum again second. Her eyes look up at him, still begging.
- He instinctually grabs her head and cums as he passes into her tight throat, shooting the biggest load of his life. Nicki is shocked that he keeps going and going, but the biggest surprise is that she’s able to take it and keep on sucking even as he cums. He has to force himself out of her mouth, cumming his last few drops all over her face.
- He struggles to say anything and Nicki breathless says picture. He snaps one of her and is super aroused, seeing what he did to her. He comments on how he can’t believe she handled it like that. Nicki was already confident about it, but now she’s sure her mouth was made for his cock. He calls her a natural and she hopes it gave him some inspiration.
- More than you know, he says as he maneuvers down to her legs. He undoes her button and unzips her denim shorts. He’s bolder, more confident and not hesitating. He pulls them off and fully exposes a matching leopard print panty that he remarks on. Holy shit, just from the outside it looks almost as drenched as her mouth.
- Well duh, what kind of toy doesn’t make itself good and ready, she teases. He teases back let’s see how ready you are and strips her panties. The bare pussy is insanely arousing, but so are the panties in his hand. He takes a sniff of them and she calls him a perv, only for him to stuff them in her mouth and say here’s something to keep your mouth busy.
- She grinds her thighs together and moans, suggesting she really liked that. Nate then spreads her legs apart and takes in the view. Beautiful description. Though it was near blasphemous to admit, porn and hentai don’t do the real thing justice. At least not when it’s right there in front of you.
- He tests the waters by pushing his middle finger inside an inch, only for her to get really horny. He finds she’s tight but there’s no resistance, remembering she said she had a dildo so he probably didn’t have to worry about hurting her. He pushes in deeper and starts to fully explore. Messing around with her and watching the way her body twists around.
- He is learning so much, but the biggest thing he’s learning is how beautiful and perfect Nicki is. He’s immensely grateful for her doing this for him, and he wants to give back what he’s gotten.
- As he fingers her, he peels back her clit and after admiring it starts to worship it with his mouth. She’s moaning like crazy into her panties now, and it seems like she’s just as sensitive down her as she is up there. It doesn’t take long until he feels her constricting down on him and letting loose.
- His face gets splashed a little as she cums, which he’s surprised at but very much into. He keeps going through her orgasm, guiding it to last longer until she gives out and he stops. He takes the panties from her mouth and she’s staring at him with a slutty look.
- He teases her but she’s very to the point. The time for playful back and forth is over. She needs him in her and she needs him now. He’s already returned to full hardness by now and is raring to go, and he’s a bit intimidated by the raw sexuality of her. It’s only now that he realizes he doesn’t have any condoms.
- She’s on the pill, duh. Besides, you never write sex scenes with condoms. You need to experience the real thing. He jokes that every word she says is making him fall for her harder and harder. We’ll see how you feel once you’re inside, silly boy. She urges him to take a before and after pic.
- Nate gets into position and pushes her legs back, which Nicki breaks her motionlessness to hold in place for him. Fair. At this point, all that really matters is the sex. He shoves it inside of her and is shocked when she cums again right away, and by the pussy itself.
- He’s taken away by it, savoring his loss of virginity, but Nicki is annoyed. Flattered though. She starts rocking her hips without waiting for him, telling him how bad she needs it. It’s so good and he forces himself to start thrusting, feeling like he’s on the edge already. Her tongue is lolling again and she’s staring at him expectantly.
- He hesitates. If he kisses her, he’s afraid of losing control. Her kisses feel really good and there’s no way he could hold off.
- But then she starts begging for him to kiss her and his reluctance melts away. She hugs him close and he can deal her long nails digging into his back as he fucks her and makes out with her. It’s overload, overstimulated. He was right and he starts furiously carving himself in and out before whimpering and cumming. He feels her squirt again so his pride is satisfied, and he’s left in a daze where all he can think about is Nicki.
- She’s trembling underneath him. She tells him how good it feels to be full of him, still surprised at how much he cums. Are you trying to knock me up? He points out that impregnation sex is in his sex note, and she licks her lips at that.
- Nicki apologizes. She can’t hold back anymore, she’s not good at being a toy. He asks what she means and she flips him over with surprising strength, lust in her eyes. Once wasn’t enough. She wants more.
- She starts to ride him wildly, and he’s overstimulated cause he just came. Nicki is going on about how long she’s wanted this- wanted him- and he watches her huge tits bounce as she fucks him and he does his best to not let her down.
- It’s torture but he keeps up, fucking her and making her moan until she can’t hold herself up and plops onto him, her breasts falling on his face. He loses it and grabs her ass really hard, pumping himself into her harder and harder with every thrust.
- They cum again and Nicki lies on top of him near unconscious. Holy shit is all they can both say. She says forget about her mouth, she’s his now. All of her. There’s no way she’s letting go of him after that.
- He’s exhausted and tells her that he’s happy to hear that because he needs an editor still, and Nicki kisses him and says she’s thinking about something a little closer than editor, but there’s no need to rush.
- Nicki rolls off of him and says she’s gonna crash now. Says if sleep sex is in his sex note he can knock another one off the list later if he feels like it, but he says he would rather take cuddling after the list. She blushes and calls him a cheeky bastard, and they embrace each other.
- It isn’t long until Nicki is sleeping and he reflects on everything that happened. It all feels like a dream, but she’s here right in front of him. He’s exhausted and expects to fall asleep soon after, but the longer he lays there with Nicki, the more his mind starts to pulsate with ideas.
- He can’t stop thinking and the chapter ends with him sitting up and looking at a laptop on his bedside table.
4- The Next Day
- Nicki wakes up the next morning to the sound of typing. She sits up in bed and wipes her eyes, realizing Nate is awake and writing something. He’s super into his work and Nicki says something cute to him but he doesn’t notice her immediately. She reminds him there’s a hot naked girl with a womb full of his cum right next to him and he snaps out of it and says sorry, hey. Morning.
- She has a needy moment where she says she’s expecting her good morning kiss, which he’s happy to give. There’s a joke about experiencing morning breath.
- Nicki then gets up in his business and is like a cat laying across his laptop, asking what he’s working on. He couldn’t sleep. Nicki is insulted after how hard she fucked him. Says she’ll have to try even harder next time. He says he was eager to put what he learned to good use, gets asked how far he is, and he admits he’s almost done and has written nearly 10k words overnight.
- Dude what the shit, were you possessed by the spirit of Alexander Hamilton? He laughs at this and asks if she can do him a favor- there’s a coffee maker in the kitchen-
- Nicki is like yeah sure do your thing and finish up, I’ll go get acquainted with the kitchen. He tells her how he likes it. Seems like I’m gonna be staying over a lot from now on so I might as well get used to the place.
- Nate watches her walk away, loving her ass, and she spanks it while looking over her shoulder with a smirk. He tells her to stop trying to distract him, and she counters that if she was trying to distract him she would do this- and then bends over and pulls her cheeks apart to let him see his cum flowing out of her from last night.
- He is equally inspired and turned on. The sight makes him work even harder and he barely even notices Nicki come back until she’s shoving the coffee in his hands. He has one sip and sets it down, still typing away. Nicki pulls her panties on and sits on the bed, watching him work with a smile.
- He’s done in just a few minutes, reclining. He feels better now that it’s out of his system and Nicki yanks the laptop away, assuming it’s cool for her to give it a look through. She does, and the story is about a couple experimenting to spice things up and engaging in free use role play almost verbatim from what happened.
- Nate has never had anyone read his stuff in front of him before, but it fills him with an addicting anticipation worrying whether or not she’s going to like it. Nicki is a fast reader and it doesn’t take her long.
- She asks if he wants to hear it bluntly, and he does. It’s great. Rough, but great. Obviously he still needs to edit it, but she’s proud to tell him that it’s his sexiest work yet. He’s so relieved to hear that, and he tells her he couldn’t have done it without her.
- She pinches his nipple and smirks, and don’t you forget it. He’s surprised by this but laughs. Nicki points out there’s a pretty big problem with the writing though, and he only included stuff they did last night. Luckily, the solution is obvious. They just keep doing nasty shit together until he can use the collective experience to mix and match whatever he wants when writing.
- That sounds great to him, but there’s some doubt lingering in him. He reiterates that harem play is his main fetish and he really likes Nicki so he doesn’t want to-
- She stops him with dude it’s 2023. You can fuck other girls if I’m cool with it- it’s only weird if you let it be.
- Hell, you mind if I send some of last night’s pics to some of my gal pals? I think a few might be interested if I tell them what’s up. Nate almost spits out his coffee.
- He’s not sure he’s ready to just jump into that, but Nicki talks him into giving permission when he plays out how hot it would be for other girls to see what he did to her. She sends the photos to some girls on discord and says now we play the waiting game.
- In the meantime, how are you doing? She takes on a gentle demeanor. You stayed up all night. Do you need a nap? Is there anything I can do for you?
- Nate insists he’s ok and that he stays up all night often enough. Not usually because of inspiration, but still. Nicki let’s it go and then proposes they get something to eat together. Nate tries to say he can order something but she’s like nah let’s get out of here and stretch out a little!
- Nate is hesitant because of his shut in ways but after Nicki inquires about it, she is convincing enough to make him give it a try. They get dressed together and Nicki insists they ride her scooter instead of his car, which he would be cool with except that they only have one helmet.
- Nicki relents but jokes his car wouldnt be any safer. He says there’s an IHOP only a few blocks away and suggests they could walk. Think a shut in like you is up to it? He’s open to try. Nicki is pleased with him and they hold hands, something that takes Nate some adjustment to but is very nice.
- He makes a joke about how they’re doing this backwards, with the sex first and the date second. Are you complaining? Not specifically. She quips how that vitamin D is treating him and he could ask the same. Walked right into that one.
- They enjoy the walk. It’s spring which doesn’t mean much in northern Iowa so it’s still jacket weather, but it’s nice. Soon enough they’re seated at IHOP and as they wait for their food, the start to have a chat about the years since highschool. Nate already told her most of everything and he doesn’t have much to say about it and he’s way more interested in hearing about her.
- Nicki isn’t happy to talk about it. College sucked. Classes sucked. Without her mom around to yell at her, she realized she didn’t have to do any of this anymore. Getting away from her made Nicki realize she didn’t have to be scared of her anymore, so she dropped out and came home.
- Nate asks doesn’t your mom still give you shit? Nah, I’m all but disowned, same as my big bro. What’d he do? Marry a twink. Ah, that’d do it.
- Nate says he likes learning about her life. Why, gonna put me in one of your stories? No, it’s just… good to get to know someone. He missed this. She asks if he gets any socialization and he admits to playing games with his friends still but other than that, uh…
- Well, we’ll work on it. She smiles brightly. Just you wait, soon enough we’ll have you mingling and fucking all kinds of pussy! Nate draws her attention to the food which is here, and the middle aged woman is staring unamused. Shit. Nicki apologizes.
- They eat and Nate thinks to himself how crazy this all is and if Nicki really is going to rope other girls into all this. The idea excites him but right now he’s happy with her and wants this to last.
- When they’re done, Nicki asks what his plans are for today. He should probably sleep, even though it’ll fuck his schedule up. She says he’s self employed and who cares? True. What about Nicki? She needs to head home for now, check in with her brother. Then she’s got a shift later.
- But hey, after I get off… would you maybe wanna get some experience in binge watching anime while cuddling with a cute girl? Y’know, just in case you wanna write a story about it sometime.
- Nate is more than open to the idea and we leave off on this adorable note.
Comments
Based and harempilled, will read the rest eventually
PunishedKom
2023-06-10 22:49:39 +0000 UTCYea as he would say he is 4 timing
AzureXIII
2023-06-10 17:05:17 +0000 UTCdoes the MC in Kanojo mo Kanojo date the other two girls then, need to know if it's worth finishing lmao it's a shame there aren't that many harems that fit the standards I look for
PunishedKom
2023-06-10 06:29:42 +0000 UTCI have read an caught up on all of those or finished them and now I am reading chained slave I don't know what chapter I am on but thanks I am really enjoying.
AzureXIII
2023-06-10 04:40:32 +0000 UTCIf you want my recommendations for what I consider as harem that first *my* standards- as in the MC loves all of them equally and isn't forced to pick one- I also recommend Mushoku Tensei, Kanojo mo Kanoko(haven't read fully so idk if he dates girls 3 and 4 yet at the end) and especially The 100 Girlfriends who Really Really Love You
PunishedKom
2023-06-10 03:32:51 +0000 UTCThanks I will give it a read
AzureXIII
2023-06-09 23:37:07 +0000 UTCIf you mean the bit where I talk about Chained Slave, yeah, I was literally just inserting a review for a series I recently read lmao. Tl;dr So there are portals to another dimension in Tokyo and only women have superpowers. Women control society now cause of this. The MC stumbles into this world and gets picked up by one of the defense Corp captains, whose power is making things her slave. To escape danger she uses it on him, but it resonates with him and he gains a monstrous form. Her power has a drawback and whenever she uses it she has to provide a suitable ‘reward’ for her slave afterward. Anyway he joins them and the all female defense corp start falling for him one by one and by lending the slave power they all start giving him ‘rewards’. Really great stuff and he mostly values his harem equally.
PunishedKom
2023-06-09 21:29:20 +0000 UTCI am excitied to see this story can't wait. On another note since things like twitter and amazon and shounen jump are real is the manga you mentioned real. If it is what is it kinda about and do you recommend it as I am always looking for new stories to pick up
AzureXIII
2023-06-09 18:20:02 +0000 UTC