Breeding Madness - Story Idea
Added 2023-04-27 05:00:43 +0000 UTCRandom story idea I had. I would eventually like to have an ongoing story for most of my major fetishes, but the hardest one to do that for is breeding/impregnation since I don't want to progress time so fast in stories and it would just have a lot of difficulties. I thought of a fun potential way to do it randomly the other day.
Like most of my main characters, the protagonist would be a failure of some sort. This time a mage who attended the Magicademy in Tior but was not accepted into the college program, instead getting kicked out after the equivalent of a high school diploma. The reason for this is his very middling skills. That, and he had always been obsessed with dark secrets and forbidden knowledge to the point where he continually snuck into the forbidden section of the school's library. There'd be a funny comedic twist to that. He wasn't kicked out because he kept going into the forbidden section- he was kicked out because he kept going into the forbidden section and somehow failing to become any stronger with any of the arcane knowledge he accessed there. Why the fuck would a magic school have a forbidden section if they didn't want to encourage the students to look at it?
Humiliated, he'd screw off and leave the province before settling up in Hollobell- a town on the border of two provinces, Rhoivan and Drerland. While not mentioned often in Coye, Drerland has had some important exposition all the way back in RotGM. It's one big swamp with tons of Lovecraftian eldritch shit going on. The entire place is infested with the taint of outer gods, precisely the kind of thing the protagonists had always been interested about.
He'd wind up as a court mage for a very unimportant noble, has a very shitty job and is just full of spite for the world. Immensely negative person. Somehow or another he would come into possession of an eldritch tome that would resonate with him and over time convince him to become one with the presence. It would give him promises of power and authority, the chance to become the man he always wished to be.
It wouldn't take him long to accept but he'd be thrown a curveball after and asked to sacrifice the lord he served to show his devotion. I should mention that the story would have dark tones but they'd be comedic- the lord would definitely have it coming and the sacrifice would probably be botched in some way to give it a comedic angle. Still, this is definitely a villain story but with my traditional touch.
Either way, it would sort itself out and the abominable presence would be pleased with his offering and mentally impart the knowledge for the protagonist to come and become one with his new God. He would flee and head into Drerland, panicked but excited for his new life. After wondering through the swamps for weeks and being pulled apart in a thousand different directions by the many eldritch forces at play in those lands, his God guiding him every step of the way, he would finally wander into the destination he had been searching for.
It'd be an empty swamp town devoid of life built around a large lake, and after reaching it he would be compelled to show his devotion yet again by drowning himself in the lake. Obviously, he's pretty loopy at this point and thinks nothing of the request and willingly submits himself. He takes a boat to the center of the lake and throws himself in, even as water filled his lungs he doesn't stop believing in the entity. The last thing he sees is a horrifying palace beneath the water.
He would wake inside said palace. It's about what you'd expect. Fleshy, wet, humid, by organic mass growing everywhere, non-euclidean geometry or whatever the fuck Lovecraft calls it. He would find himself called to the throne room after wandering these halls which is where the big reveal would take place.
His entity is not some all-powerful great old one but a much, much, much lesser on the totem pole abomination known as a lowly one. Contrary to her extended family, the girl, who is very fuckable and tentacled, is very much knowable and not madness inducing if she doesn't want to be. She's actually pretty chill and down to earth, as much as a Lovecraftian entity can be.
The initial reaction would be pretty funny as he processes everything he knows as wrong. He's a little disappointed, but when she asks him that, she's so cute that he doesn't want to upset her. He wants to know why he was summoned here, is worried that everything was for nothing. The sacrifice made her feel really good so it wasn't for nothing, and she has him remember how it felt to kill him. It felt good for you too, didn't it? Very much so. Exactly.
She goes on to explain she doesn't have to be supremely powerful to give him everything he ever wanted, and she's still very young and like every lowly one she has the potential to become a true eldritch God- but she can't do it alone.
She is one of the uncountable offspring of a shub-niggurath (actual lovecraftian name, don't blame me) stand in. To those not in the know, that entity is something of a cosmic brood mother, and she has many of the same powers in a much weaker form. Putting it bluntly, the heroine is a cosmic baby factory and the protagonist is her fated partner. She tries to explain how that a thing, but whenever she gets into knowledge his mortal mind can't comprehend he starts hallucinating and hearing shit- played for laughs. Oh, sorry. You'll probably get used to that after we've been together for a while and you've built up some insight.
Anyway, he is to become the father of horrors and the leader of her cult. What cult? That's a sore topic for her and tells him the one you're going to build for me, duh. Did you think that he town there was just for show? You're going to fill it with worshipers, but that's for later. She then sweetly asks if all of this is agreeable with him. He doesn't get the feeling that there's a choice, and she reassures him that there is the illusion of a choice. Isn't that good enough?
He's starting to like her, and he bows before her and submits himself to her for the rest of his life.
She's very cute about this and is incredibly excited. She's watched him for years- long before she ever made sure he picked up the book and she'd been waiting for this ever since. The protagonist would then wonder when they would get started on the whole breeding thing, and she would get uncharacteristically embarrassed about it and says these things can't be rushed. Besides, lowly or not, she's still something of a God and he has to prove his worth before they can consummate their new relationship. He suddenly starts worrying because he's not exactly worth much as he is now, but she asks him if he has a functional penis. Yes? Good, you're worthy. Tomorrow you will receive my blessing to aid you in your task.
He then says he's ready for anything and to tell him what he needs to do.
She summons her maids- a pair of mindflayer girls who are also incredibly fuckable. They are introduced to him. One is smaller, bubbly, dopey. The other is tomboyish and instantly hates the protagonist. This is him? Kind of thing. Dopey girl is much more into him and thinks he's cute in a pathetic way. He's a bit lost and is not sure what he supposed to do here to prove himself.
Heroine wonders if all that madness is getting to his head because it's pretty obvious that he's supposed to fuck them and not only make them pregnant- but completely subjugate them and make them loyal to his will. Make them recognize him as their new king. Dopey girl smiles, tomboy is irritable but says nothing. The first day would end on that revelation.
The next day he would be given the blessing, which would be a semi-lewd scene with the heroine as she gives him foreplay before injecting him with her essence. Real Lovecraftian shit, his body is pierced with tentacles and it turns his cock into an inhuman monstrosity. Big, purple, wriggling bits, just overall weird shit going on with it. She'd get him off with a handjob but this is the last time he'll get any relief from her until he's proven himself and he is given free reign to start seducing the maids- who both confirm this is alright with them and that they were born to serve their Mistress.
He would then work on them both starting with the friendlier one and then the tomboy. This isn't a detailed story synopsis, I'm just trying to get across the premise so I'll just say he is successful, consummates his relationship with the heroine, and becomes her equal. First pregnancies are resolved- as his cock is a magic cosmic breeder cock, anyone knocked up by it goes through a rapid cycle lasting only a few days before birthing a cosmic horror. Funny scene where he comes in after the labor and she hands him a swaddled squid with stars in her eyes. Look at him, isn't he beautiful! Our first son! As weird as it is, squid dad is very happy with life now but this isn't the end of his story.
There are a bunch of directions it could take- namely building the cult and bringing the heroine into conflict with the other cosmic powers in Drerland who are on her level. Building the cult would need to be done very carefully- I don't want to get in trouble with hypnotism rules or even hint at the R word- but I think I have a pretty good idea for that. It's stressed that converting humans is much more effective when you do it without brainwashing them and so any girls he brings back to the village would be consensual after essentially converting them to the religion. Still pretty iffy but I think I can pull it off in a non-creepy and more funny way.
As for the kids, some of them would stick around the village and Castle, others would be sent into the astral horror dimension to expand their mother's psychic influence on reality. Not sure if/when I'll be moving ahead on this- the character designs needed are difficult and I don't know who I could get to do them the way I picture them. Either way, I wanted to get this out of my head and record it just so I have it down somewhere.
Comments
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PunishedKom
2023-04-27 22:53:19 +0000 UTCThank you for letting me know. It’d still be more darkly comedic than actually dark, but yeah.
PunishedKom
2023-04-27 20:04:33 +0000 UTCI like the idea & wouldn't mind a darker premise
Bobby Wazelle
2023-04-27 18:09:00 +0000 UTCYes I realize that. I'm not expecting that on this series, but it's something I would like to see. Maybe a bit more slow paced. Like retired adventurer on one last outing and such, is together with a party member for a quite some time and forgets to take birth control cause reasons. In the middle of the outing the morning sickness starts and they have to be extra careful. They retire to a quiet place but they made enemies along the way and they want their pound of flesh. Dad goes full on "get off my lawn" mode and mom needs to learn how to slow down. It would be funnier if the mother was the barbarian/warrior and the father was rogue/mage chars since it would make them even more off balance. Mother has to slow down which is hard cause Barbar weapon goes brrrrr and dad has to Frontline a bit. I know, I know my writing needs to get a noble prize
João Pereira
2023-04-27 11:48:19 +0000 UTCYou realize that’s a logistic nightmare and I am never going to do that right lol it’s been like 6 volumes just to cover one month happening in Coye, you are asking for a character to be out of commission for… 54 volumes at that rate lmao also thanks for resubbing
PunishedKom
2023-04-27 11:21:45 +0000 UTCyeah this would be great, although i would love a series where pregnancy isn't just used for kink and dont have a MacGuffin to magically prevent pregnancies but has an actual downside. Like imagine if Sam got pregnant. They woud have to change the dynamic of the party, she couldnt go to every outing and would have to take a more support role so she doesnt put the child a+t risk. i would love stuff like that, a setback and having to work around it
João Pereira
2023-04-27 09:42:03 +0000 UTC