Dawnstead Arc Outline (HUGE SPOILERS)

It'll be more of a joke versus something that is actually relevant to this arc.

PunishedKom

So it’s going to come up later? Or will it not be as serious seeming.

ThisClown

You don't worry I'm pretty much dropping the serious part of it. This was a really, really rough outline.

PunishedKom

I agree that GM should show a little more anger to the situation, Im aware it's an outline but it seems GM did more apologizing then her for some reason. He needs to stand up for himself more and not be choosy unless your going for all around submissive MC

Her leg situation will surprise you, if you want to know spoilers just dm me for it lol. If you expected them to be normal nobles, then you clearly don’t get my style by now hehe. Joking aside, I’ve planned them out like this for ages now and am excited to finally debut them.

PunishedKom

As for Opal, expect it to be much more developed. This is just rough outline.

PunishedKom

Good plot! Any scenes with opal is a plus, the gloomcrest family aren’t your typical nobles which is refreshing, abilgail will be a great addition to the harem with her necromancy ( maybe she can get some new legs from our favorite drawf) and pimpington is actually a cool guy (hopefully he can join the guild like as community service)

Eroyla Drago

The only major feedback I have is how GM responds to Opal manipulating his life and potential love life. I imagine he would at least be way more passive aggressive about, even if he isn’t mad at her. Similar to how he was with Snow after the whole flirting debacle. What Opal did seems like it would be way worse then what snow did. Otherwise the best stuff was the interactions between him and Abigail, very cute and also quite interesting. Even the description of her hand has me very intrigued. Also her getting a concussion made me laugh. The set up for the notebook and more chance for interactions is quite fun as well.

ThisClown