It was a great fight, but I would have liked to see Momo win the match before the punishment was administered.
sts
2024-12-18 05:59:23 +0000 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Jazz Mazz
2024-12-18 05:38:47 +0000 UTC
Fantastic work skar! From start to finish, can't wait to see the next fight in the series!
StrongBid
2024-12-18 05:24:09 +0000 UTC
It was really nice but the ending felt kinda rushed and forced obviously you couldn't make it too long but ending felt kinda abrupt
spartan 1137
2024-12-18 04:36:37 +0000 UTC
Just wondering if this is the end of the fight or if they will be a humiliation page still
Gideon Neil
2024-12-18 04:05:25 +0000 UTC
I hope so! She needs to crush Momo and work herself to facing Toga! :)
Amira
2024-12-18 03:14:39 +0000 UTC
That’s ok. Keep up the amazing work Skar!
Aarush Gupta
2024-12-18 02:58:42 +0000 UTC
Definitely did a good job of that
Uraraka was definitely in character, getting back up even if she was pretty much done for and Momo showed off why she's tactically the smarter fighter, along with her meanstreak
Can't wait for the rematch between these two
jimenezjad12
2024-12-18 02:57:13 +0000 UTC
Love this fight and love bondage! It feel like a Hibana vs Orochi, great fight till the end, looks like Uraraka luck to ko Momo didnt help her! xD
Destroyer123
2024-12-18 02:43:04 +0000 UTC
Haha, maybe in the Future. In another tournament or another comics ^^
SkarPleassure
2024-12-18 02:40:54 +0000 UTC
In fact, I would have discarded page 21 (although I loved the drawing), page 19 was the original final movement I had planned for this chapter. But I really wanted to work a bit more on the narrative and the relationship between the characters for this chapter, and honestly I liked the end result, even if it was anti-climactic (I agree with that). So I'm very happy and thank you for your honest and polite feedback, it's always very important to me.
SkarPleassure
2024-12-18 02:40:13 +0000 UTC
Honestly? One last panel of Ukaraka being wrestled to the ground would probably be enough. It’s up to you but seeing the narration of “they fought hard” with them fighting I think would make this perfect. I don’t need much, we got the pike driver, I just need one image of the fight happening before we get to the end.
Again though: that’s entirely my opinion. You’re the artist: continue to make good art and I’ll pay for it.
Fravelflav
2024-12-18 02:38:45 +0000 UTC
Yes, the piledriver was indeed the last page of that fight, it was the "real ending". The two pages that came in sequence were just a whim of mine, to try to add more narrative to this fight, and show a little more about the relationship between the characters. In the end, I'm still learning how to improve my storytelling to deliver comics with a little more quality than just the visuals (which I also try to improve every day), so I appreciate the support and welcome the feedback from all of you. Thank you very much.
SkarPleassure
2024-12-18 02:33:22 +0000 UTC
Yeah, I know...I really wanted to do more pages for this fight, I think it deserved it. In fact, my intention was to finish the fight on page 19, which is why on Discord I called page 20 a "special page", because I still wanted to show a few more things with this fight, so it couldn't just end after the piledriver. But I accept your criticism, and partly agree with it. Thank you very much.
SkarPleassure
2024-12-18 02:30:20 +0000 UTC
Both girls did their best, but in the end, only one could win. Uraraka fought well till the end
SkarPleassure
2024-12-18 02:25:22 +0000 UTC
Rematch! :(
Amira
2024-12-18 02:21:32 +0000 UTC
You mean this as 20th and 21st being punishment? This is the 21st, he just misnamed it on the upload. (I agree with you, the last panel makes this feel off).
Fravelflav
2024-12-18 02:15:32 +0000 UTC
Bruh, this would have been better as the 19th panel with the 20th being a punishment panel
Aarush Gupta
2024-12-18 02:12:36 +0000 UTC
Even if she got back up, that piledriver spelled the end for Uraraka
Great submission win for Momo
jimenezjad12
2024-12-18 02:02:34 +0000 UTC
This feels a bit… anti climactic? I don’t know, I would have liked to see how Momo got her like this. It feels like we skipped… a lot.
Fravelflav
2024-12-18 01:58:54 +0000 UTC
She fought a great fight. Uraraka will get her next time! 😊