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House Sitting - Pg. 18 (Starcross Ch. 5)

Sarah has a peaceful morning while Ash gets a bit of a rude awakening on his second day inside her belly!

House Sitting - Pg. 18 (Starcross Ch. 5)

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I feel like at this point she could dogest him soon

Bruh Bruheimer

Just wanted to say I love reading your analysis of these pages! <3 I try not to get too bogged down in story details during the writing process, but it always makes me happy when I see someone comment on one or more of the implications or deeper ideas that I *did* want to convey in the story, even if just subtly. Makes me feel like I’m doing *something* right. :)

Starcross

Star may need to take a rope to help him. Similar to the watermelon.

Reve Steven

It’s been established in chapter 4 that occupants in her stomach don’t need to eat, nor does she. Seems like she still has to drink though. Granted, she doesn’t have the pendant on her, these are just the latent traits.

PrivateXimmy

Now star will have to probably have to swallow some food so Ash can eat something since he's currently in Stars stomach which is keeping her full Ash will need will need something to eat so that way he won't starve to death while in her stomach.

Pokemonboy101

I wonder if she will try to swallow her girlfriend instead of sitting on her

loyd

I wonder if she will realize that she can throw him up

loyd

Also, god that fourth panel is so good. While I personally do love fat fetish stuff, I *adore* the juxtaposition here in a wholly different way. Her naturally thin profile complimenting the massive bulge hanging down in front of her offers such an *electric* view of her frame. Like it dominates her figure so fully that it feels like this tiny warden is sort of “cradling” her occupant. Really goes a long way to highlight the dynamic she has going on right now wish ash. She may be tiny, but as long as she’s got him in there? He’s *hers.* The faint look at the bottom where he is, with her positioned above in frames 5 and 6 also adorably highlight this.

PrivateXimmy

Also, her pride in the final panel is just adorable.

PrivateXimmy

Interesting how natural this is all coming to her. Almost makes you wonder if this is closer to what the *actual* desire she had was that the pendant responded to. After all, at the time, she *was* stressing about not being close enough with her girlfriend anymore. Maybe a (mostly) permanent passenger would be the endgame of that desire? Idk I’m just speculating. Either way, she’s got the perfect little subject to bounce personal ideas and thoughts off of privately, I’m sure Ash can keep a secret. ;) A lot of folks earlier were complimenting the belly on the first page (it’s a solid set liner for day 2), but god I really love all the ones after it. The gentle “hang” of ash in her stomach makes such a defined outline, and seeing it faintly bulge when he moves around is so damn intimate. The faint noise accompanying her movements really add to that feeling of our bottom boys ever present gastronomic bloat resting in her. It’s just *really* great. Like you compare how it looks now compared to the “balloon bulge” from chapters 1-2, and it’s just night and day how much you’ve improved over time. Keep up the good work!

PrivateXimmy

Soda, hot coffee, pizza, cake, candy... anything is possible.

lofis

Oh my god, she can intentionally tease him with cold and hot water: this could get lowkey saucy

PrivateXimmy

So round it breaks the 4th wall! ;)

Starcross

that belly in the first panel mwah chefs kiss ❤️

pl0nt

He didn't even feel it coming

jiri frazier

Even if star doesn’t let him exit that way I wonder if he’ll stick his arm up and poke his hand out?

ArtTheGreat

Oh damn, that really, really hot.... or cold ! 🤣

DrBeerMaker

Now Ash is in the crossfire to anything Sarah swallows.

lofis

Now that’s how I wanna start every morning. Now the question is, which position, Sarah or Ash? Answer: yes

Minty Cecily

It was a thought

Britney

Don't think that happens in this comic.

Furtherbean

Hell of a way to start your day. :P

Starcross

Loved it, the reaction was hilarious. I’m so curious what will happen now that he’s in the stomach. I wonder if he’ll get absorbed?

Britney

Poor Ash haha xD

ImKike19


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