House Sitting - Pg. 18 (Starcross Ch. 5)
Added 2025-02-01 01:37:27 +0000 UTCSarah has a peaceful morning while Ash gets a bit of a rude awakening on his second day inside her belly!
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I feel like at this point she could dogest him soon
Bruh Bruheimer
2025-05-17 05:49:00 +0000 UTCJust wanted to say I love reading your analysis of these pages! <3 I try not to get too bogged down in story details during the writing process, but it always makes me happy when I see someone comment on one or more of the implications or deeper ideas that I *did* want to convey in the story, even if just subtly. Makes me feel like I’m doing *something* right. :)
Starcross
2025-02-24 21:54:12 +0000 UTCStar may need to take a rope to help him. Similar to the watermelon.
Reve Steven
2025-02-23 23:58:38 +0000 UTCIt’s been established in chapter 4 that occupants in her stomach don’t need to eat, nor does she. Seems like she still has to drink though. Granted, she doesn’t have the pendant on her, these are just the latent traits.
PrivateXimmy
2025-02-05 22:29:55 +0000 UTCNow star will have to probably have to swallow some food so Ash can eat something since he's currently in Stars stomach which is keeping her full Ash will need will need something to eat so that way he won't starve to death while in her stomach.
Pokemonboy101
2025-02-04 17:51:02 +0000 UTCI wonder if she will try to swallow her girlfriend instead of sitting on her
loyd
2025-02-02 05:54:52 +0000 UTCI wonder if she will realize that she can throw him up
loyd
2025-02-02 05:52:02 +0000 UTCAlso, god that fourth panel is so good. While I personally do love fat fetish stuff, I *adore* the juxtaposition here in a wholly different way. Her naturally thin profile complimenting the massive bulge hanging down in front of her offers such an *electric* view of her frame. Like it dominates her figure so fully that it feels like this tiny warden is sort of “cradling” her occupant. Really goes a long way to highlight the dynamic she has going on right now wish ash. She may be tiny, but as long as she’s got him in there? He’s *hers.* The faint look at the bottom where he is, with her positioned above in frames 5 and 6 also adorably highlight this.
PrivateXimmy
2025-02-01 16:34:18 +0000 UTCAlso, her pride in the final panel is just adorable.
PrivateXimmy
2025-02-01 12:36:26 +0000 UTCInteresting how natural this is all coming to her. Almost makes you wonder if this is closer to what the *actual* desire she had was that the pendant responded to. After all, at the time, she *was* stressing about not being close enough with her girlfriend anymore. Maybe a (mostly) permanent passenger would be the endgame of that desire? Idk I’m just speculating. Either way, she’s got the perfect little subject to bounce personal ideas and thoughts off of privately, I’m sure Ash can keep a secret. ;) A lot of folks earlier were complimenting the belly on the first page (it’s a solid set liner for day 2), but god I really love all the ones after it. The gentle “hang” of ash in her stomach makes such a defined outline, and seeing it faintly bulge when he moves around is so damn intimate. The faint noise accompanying her movements really add to that feeling of our bottom boys ever present gastronomic bloat resting in her. It’s just *really* great. Like you compare how it looks now compared to the “balloon bulge” from chapters 1-2, and it’s just night and day how much you’ve improved over time. Keep up the good work!
PrivateXimmy
2025-02-01 12:34:32 +0000 UTCSoda, hot coffee, pizza, cake, candy... anything is possible.
lofis
2025-02-01 11:42:27 +0000 UTCOh my god, she can intentionally tease him with cold and hot water: this could get lowkey saucy
PrivateXimmy
2025-02-01 11:29:58 +0000 UTCSo round it breaks the 4th wall! ;)
Starcross
2025-02-01 08:47:10 +0000 UTCthat belly in the first panel mwah chefs kiss ❤️
pl0nt
2025-02-01 07:56:47 +0000 UTCHe didn't even feel it coming
jiri frazier
2025-02-01 04:56:57 +0000 UTCEven if star doesn’t let him exit that way I wonder if he’ll stick his arm up and poke his hand out?
ArtTheGreat
2025-02-01 04:44:19 +0000 UTCOh damn, that really, really hot.... or cold ! 🤣
DrBeerMaker
2025-02-01 04:01:07 +0000 UTCNow Ash is in the crossfire to anything Sarah swallows.
lofis
2025-02-01 03:40:00 +0000 UTCNow that’s how I wanna start every morning. Now the question is, which position, Sarah or Ash? Answer: yes
Minty Cecily
2025-02-01 03:06:15 +0000 UTCIt was a thought
Britney
2025-02-01 02:16:23 +0000 UTCDon't think that happens in this comic.
Furtherbean
2025-02-01 02:08:35 +0000 UTCHell of a way to start your day. :P
Starcross
2025-02-01 01:45:56 +0000 UTCLoved it, the reaction was hilarious. I’m so curious what will happen now that he’s in the stomach. I wonder if he’ll get absorbed?
Britney
2025-02-01 01:41:01 +0000 UTCPoor Ash haha xD
ImKike19
2025-02-01 01:40:36 +0000 UTC
