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Thanks! Good reunions man

Eliel Taskinen

Yeah, I guess Kosnik meant any Saturday.. why am I not surprised even a little..

LongtailedOne

Again, he didn't say which Saturday it might get posted. :-(

M. Lampi

Welcome to the club!

Straven

It's amazing how time can affect a person: until today I was waiting for a new chapter without even checking Patreon, but today I started checking the page every hour again Waiting for another chapter of the masterpiece

Fortuner

I feel you. In my mind though we are all circling the authors house like a gang of unspayed cats, yowling at their windows. Its undignified and yet... The heart wants what it wants.

Valderan

Please good sir.... I can't take it anymoreπŸ’‰πŸ’‰πŸ’‰

Laurent Catudal

Alguien me pasa el enlace de discord

Brayan :v

Yeah they're home!! Pacore is gonna be tickled they became besties! I can't wait for more crafting nonsense and for everyone to freak about the materials they brought back. Making a map of their trip might get Aliyah a level or 2 in drawing.

Nickie Schmiers

Aww this one was good. They're really going to have to work hard to earn those levels huh?

Riddley

Thanks for the chap

Annora D.

Hope you had a good holiday.

Orange Thistle

Thank you for the chapter. Definitely the best map you have made so far. Really enjoyed General Pitz's reaction.

Orange Thistle

Yeah, as the new country's easiest access to the newly connected high mana zone it's gonna get a lot of visitors and growth soon.

Tjark

Reel

Mortal_Tormenta

Thank you for the chapter! The map is very detailed too. Somehow Aaliyah's home in exactly the spot where i thought it should be. And Tabitha's report is fun too. Did she played it in her head while pretending not to help with their baggage? lol

Fortuner

That would be funny.

Michael Weis

Thanks for the chapter you need someone to say it felt like they where gone for the amount of time you where on haiatus for.

Neko Mew

FYI, (for one of the earlier paragraphs), sighing "exasperatingly" means it's done in a way to make OTHERS exasperated by the sigh. Sighing "exasperatedly" is to sigh WITH exasperation.

Kyfe

One thing I hope we address (well, two in a way) is Aaliyah's paternal grandparents and/or any uncles, aunts, or cousins she might have. Her parents aren't from Spotter Creek, iirc, and we've never heard of her dad's extended family, just how he was a teenager trying to make it as a Woodsman in a city when he met her mother. The main thing I'd like to see is meeting up with them (if they're alive) before leaving, and the second issue: it would he cool if Aaliyah starts wearing a Feather or two right away when she meets them for the first time and there's a slight misunderstanding where they assume she's some foreign noble instead of their granddaughter, lol.

Kyfe

A lot of people are going to be wanting to see Aliyah. I'm not sure how we feel about shipping, I don't think that's necessary, but I am interested in knowing if knife guy is aware of what it is he was feeling when he was first upset about hearing Aliyah was gone from the village. And see, you have to bring him back, I'm losing names. I barely remember the two apprentices

Devin Williams

Yeah the great return! thanks! And chances are she just broke through Charms Lvl 50 test. No wonder Higher level people are so overdramatic, they're just another set of skills to level.

Endymion2314

Good chapter.

Thedevilsdemon

Thanks for the chapter! Love this story!!!

Undead Writer

Tis not just you. I only had a box as well until I read the chapter on the authors page.

White Neko Knight

Well, that's a city in the making.

White Neko Knight

Thank you for the chapter! The map looks great. Edit suggestions: and holly crap has Spotted Creek Village ==> and holy crap has Spotted Creek Village through in the magic-dense region. ==> through in the mana-dense region. brought her along this time too,” ==> brought her along this time, too,” tells me. Let them believe they are ==> tells me. "Let them believe they are the magic-dense region is just ==> the mana-dense region is just β€œAaliayh! Tabitha!” They roared over ==> β€œAaliyah! Tabitha!” They roared over my parents, patently waiting for me ==> my parents, patiently waiting for me "I'm Happy to be back," I tell him ==> "I'm happy to be back," I tell him β€œNo, Master knows your back.” ==> β€œNo, Master knows you're back.”

M. Lampi

Thanks for the chapter!

Mortal_Tormenta

Whoops, I fixed it. Thanks.

Kosnik4

Home at last, yay! Me too on a blank box for the map, though.

Mike G.

Thanks for the chapter You say you spent too long on a map but I think it got left out... Editing suggestion: > "I face Pacore, standing in all his invisible glory." Should be "I face Pacore, standing there in his armor and all its invisible glory" At least I don't remember Pacore being invisible... lol

Alex Rosen

Thanks for the chapter. Also missing the map. Edit: the map is in. Looks great!

WanderingPB

Thanks for the chapter! Also, map no load.

Hyperion

Hate? F that love every chapter you bless us with including this one! Thank you so much, bout to hit the sack only to recheck and see this beut begging for a reading!!!

Straven

Great chapter. Is anybody else having trouble viewing the map? I just see an empty box.

Hamfist

Am I the only one that sees an empty box where the map is meant to be? I know Patreon did some changes to text formatting recently, wondering if it had an effect there or if it's just me.

TooOldForThisShit

Thanks for the chapter. That reaction from Pitz was great!

Justin

Let's go! New Chapter!

Lionheart Copperhead

Wooooo!

heh

Nice! That was a great start to the reunion, I can just see the curiosity beginning!

Sean Carter

Happier than I've ever been in my whole entire life

Calla Ryan

Woo it's here

Sam Castilow

Let's gooo!!!

Laurent Catudal


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