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Love Interest End Story: Dimitri - Part II

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I could see Dimitri being together with Henrik’s younger sister in the future. They've both dissapointed their families, so they might bond over their shared experience.

Sinful

I think it was more the hostility that everyone still held. For a few, namely Robert and Fiona, it's understandable. But for Ilyana and Sonia? Maybe they just had a nicer image in my head than the sides that were displayed here. It takes a horrible amount of energy to keep being actively rude to someone, especially when they don't fight back and just take it instead of retaliating and giving more fuel to the fire.

Vance Tenorio

I think it's 5 years since Tori & co graduated Lycee, so 23? Dimitri was a year behind them due to his suspension and then spent 4 yrs at university. Anyway, enjoyed it 👍

SiriB

Most of his "punishment" was self inflicted though. And as someone who's had anxiety and depression issues this is mainly just an accurate representation of the effects of someone with self destructive/self flagilatory behavior, but 16-21 and a year off of school is not the worst outcome. Some people 😵 or stumble through life regretting a single set of mistakes wallowing in dead end jobs because they don't buckle down and go back to school.

Sdff

Man, I feel a bit conflicted about all of this. While I agree that Guthry has a lot to pay for, I also believe that his treatment here is a bit too harsh to be fair. I might just be forgetting things he was involved in, but there was just something about this chapter that surprised me with how... cruel, maybe? I can't think of a better word right now, but yeah, how cruel everybody was being. Even the resolution felt a bit too quick. Still, Thank you for the chapter, and I'm looking forward to what else you put out!

Vance Tenorio

Maybe, but I, for one, would like to know what happened to the rest of the gang in the long run. Did Hendrick's long distance relationship work out? Did Illyana get together with Kassan, or find someone else? I'd even like to know what happened to some of the minor characters like Tiff and Senior Southland. I also picture a scene where Tori is teaching her kids that they need to judge people based upon facts, not rumours, otherqise they'll end up like their uncle... While Gideon is in the room, but that could only happen if we see the distant future 🥺

Shannon Livingston

I assume they will be in parallel rather than picking up from this one’s end point

bob50000

It's been quite a jump, so I'm trying to get the timeline right in my head... I think the crew is around 21 at the end here, Piers 26ish, Fifi 10 and even Val is 5 😯 If the other LIES continue on from here I think we'll see some fun interactions soon! 😺

Shannon Livingston

To the surprise of absolutely no-one, except maybe Gideon 😁. Now I'm wondering what the proposal was like. Did Piers try to make it epic, as you're "supposed to", or was it more like: Well, it's (enter year and date) and according to our plan if neither one of us has changed their mind... No? OK then, we're now engaged.

SiriB

It's the onion ninja's... they sneak out and wave them around then hide again before you can blink! sneaky things they are!

Cymi

Gosh darnit. These onions. Why must I be cutting onions as I read...

Apollo Above

Satisfying. Well done indeed.

SquiddlyWinks

Thanks for the chapter! Did not expect the ship between Annika and Dimitri. I have the small fear that you're going to end this series of chapter by a rebellion fomented by Tom but time will tell.

CentaureHeart

“Hello, Madam!” Fiona said. “I am here with your oldest son and he would like to talk to you and your husband about his repressed emotional trauma.” That line would be devastating from anyone but coming from a 6 years old it's... Utter destruction

CentaureHeart

The ship was perfect, pure Guntry I never thought I say those words...

The shippers will be happy

patreon_username

Fiona: expert psychologist to chickens and Dimitri. It looks like the next generation of Gueveras is going to be as frightening as the current one

Shannon Livingston

Good. Also heh, looks like Tori and Piers are officially engaged by that point.

Summercat


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