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Chapter 492 - Interlude - Legata Katerina - Military Machinations

Something was wrong.

Katerina’s [Legata’s Imperial Intuition] was hounding her. Telling her something was not right, and if she didn’t figure it out, they’d die.

That simple.

Water levels of Shuixi higher than usual for the time of year.

Annual festival next week. Likely to be held with additional vigor, due to surrendering and paying tribute to Zhao She and Wang Jian. Army participating.

Estimated 40,000 tons of raw clay in. 35,000 tons of pottery produced. Water is 20% of raw clay by weight. 3,000 ton discrepancy.

Iron composition of the Legion’s new armor: 84% iron, 8% bronze, 5% copper, traces of titanium, aluminum, tin, and other metals.

The Sixth Legion was attached to Zhao She’s army, who’d met up with their old employer, Wang Jian to siege the city of Shuixi. After some threatening and posturing, including threatening to let the ‘barbaric Ironside Brigade loose upon the women and children of the city’, and a three-day siege where the armies conspicuously built siege engines outside the wooden walls of the city, they’d capitulated with barely a shot fired.

High civic pride.

8% more cows than usual. 3% fewer sheep.

Utter lack of dinosaurs or other scaled animals.

Mountain snowcaps melting.

Katerina chewed on the inside of her cheek, a nervous habit, as she reviewed dozens of documents and thousands of pieces of information, debating if she needed to call a full officer’s meeting or not.

No, no. It’d be impossible to explain every piece of information she had available, and trying to corral the dozens of razor-sharp minds into a solution would take more effort than it was worth. If she knew what the problem was, she’d call the meeting in a heartbeat to find a solution.

City claims to have been founded on the remains of a slain celestial serpent. Densely packed, built up high as a result of the legend.

Primary export: leather and textiles.

Army’s food reserves: 20% pre-tribute, 80% post tribute. Legion reserves: 60%.

Mosquitoes seem unusually thick in Shuixi. Reported pests with levels.

Shuixi scents their streets with oregano.

Bridge tolls on three of four bridges.

There was something hiding in the vast reams of data she’d gathered. Some combination of effects trying to warn her of a tragedy.

It was hidden deeply, otherwise her skill would be highlighting it and screaming the details into her ear. Wasn’t the first time she almost had all the pieces of the puzzle and needed to work it out, wouldn’t be the last.

Primary construction material: wood.

Place reeks of leather chemicals and dyes.

Drills have been up 28% from normal. Friendly rivalry between Wang Jian and Zhao She? Burning off energy after prepping for the siege and not carrying through?

Legion morale at medium-high. The people spoiling for a fight are mad, the majority are relieved to have skipped a full battle.

The last datapoint had Katerina use [Of Two Minds] to think about the aspect in more detail.

We’re approaching three years, and the troops are tired. Should head home at the end of this season. Don’t tell anyone, they’ll be like horses smelling the barn. Too eager to get home, won’t do a damn thing properly until then.

“Get me Optio Coral, Optio Ardenus, and Tribune Hazel.” Katerina ordered one of her [Messengers]. They were out the door in a flash, the three officers making their way to the command structure.

Siege weapons being dismantled by Zhao She, but not burned.

Starvation likelihood over the winter for the city: near guaranteed. Problem is far future, not immediate, wouldn’t trigger [Intuition].

Library is regionally famous.

The officers entered and saluted, waiting for Katerina to acknowledge them. She gestured to the table, wordlessly asking them to join her.

“Something is wrong.” She said without preamble. “Coral, Hazel, Pierce. I’m calling an audit. Lean on Dawn, she’s got terrifying information processing abilities while being properly independent. Ardenus, I want all your scouts out on patrol. Tap a few extra lines from the 3rd cohort if you need the bodies. I want the patrols fast and light. Don’t get me full breakdowns of hostile forces, I just want to know if there’s any trace of a hostile force. Lastly, I want every scrap of information that hasn’t yet made it to my desk, and any ideas what could be wrong. Go.” The Legata ordered.

Offensive mage distribution is highly unusual for the army. 31% base Earth, 54% base Metal, 22% Wind, 13% Light, 8% Dark, 6% Wood, 5% Water, 4% Fire.

The distribution naturally didn’t add up to any nice number. Lava, for example, was counted in both Earth and Fire, while pure Metal was only counted once. The counting methodology was odd, but as long as it was standard, deviations and variations stood out in large sample sizes.

Correcting for Dullahan cultural quirks, the difference is more reasonable. Wind, Wood, Water are up, Fire, Dark, Light are down.

Full moons tonight.

Northerly breeze.

Rain likely tomorrow.

Pterodactyl migration season.

Immortal Cache discovered nearby.

“Legata. I have one unusual detail to report.” Tribune Hazel volunteered.

“Speak.” Katerina ordered. Hazel licked her lips, and Katerina prepared to suffer a less than amazing piece of information. Hazel was excellent at her job, but anything new would likely come from Coral or Ardenus.

“Wang Jian has invited us to participate in the Lunar Festival next week.” She reported. Katerina lifted an eyebrow, not wanting to reprimand Hazel for stating the obvious, but letting her know she wasn’t impressed. The tribune hurried to make her point.

“We’re mercenaries, or so they think. We never get invited to participate in things. Why now? Why here? The city’s just surrendered, they don’t want us ‘barbarians’ ravaging the poor townsfolk. Usually they’d give us busywork sixteen miles away, not invite us to join. Not invite us to make lanterns for them. Granted, that’s busywork too, but a third of the Legion is busy making those red paper lanterns they love so much.”

Katerina drummed her finger. She’d made similar noises back when the invitation had been extended, but as uninspired as Hazel’s information was, she decided to look at it in new light.

Main gate is double barred with a murder corridor. Still taking down the siege barricades.

Leather consumption up 11%. Boot repair primary culprit.

Legion has taken a liking to yak.

Zhao She’s banners have been torn, are under repair.

Average recruiting age is down.

Arrow production is up.

“Walk with me.” Katerina ordered, clasping her hands behind her back and strolling out of the command structure.

Circling round and round in the same environment was getting her nowhere. A change of pace, a pair of fresh eyes on the various elements could be just what was needed. That, and a thought had occurred to her, a famous lesson every officer of Exterreri studied.

War Sentinel Flood had gained her moniker for a reason, and the combination of flat plains, snowy mountains, high water levels and impending rain had Katerina concerned that they might be flooded out. Looking at the situation could give her new perspective on the matter, able to identify if the Legion was about to be flooded out, potentially devastating the Legion.

The Legata climbed up onto the walls, her guards escorting her, while her scribes followed along dutifully. Reed, second-in-command Pierce, and the rest of her command staff came along.

“Legata. Legata.” Pairs of soldiers snapped to crisp attention as she passed, throwing enthusiastic salutes.

“At ease.” Katerina replied with a smile to each one.

Adjustment: Morale higher than before.

The nagging sense of doom didn’t diminish with the new information. Instead, it was only going stronger.

Katerina looked out onto the field around Shuixi. The armies had almost entirely encircled the city, and now that the siege was lifted, hadn’t bothered to reform back into a tight tent, instead choosing to simply party where they were.

Booze rations down significantly across the board.

There was far less drinking and alcohol flowing than Katerina anticipated, leading her to think that maybe the reports they’d gotten on how much tribute had been paid were wrong, or her estimates of their reserves were off. That, or they were anticipating one huge party at the festival itself.

Was that the missing piece of the puzzle? Was that what was wrong?

The sky darkened and the moons rose, full and foreboding. As red as the lanterns they were designing. Wang Jian himself came along with a large escort and collected a batch of the lanterns. It grated a bit to be used as base manual labor like this, but what could they do? It was part of the cover, and it was more fun than thousands of other tasks they could’ve been asked to do.

Katerina forced herself to remain stately. To pace at an appropriate speed. Everyone looked to her to see and set the mood, and if she was running in a panic, the Legion would get into a panic. If she was seen as calm and in control, the Legion would be calm and in control. Panic beget panic. Calm beget calm.

Katerina scanned the Legion, picking out dozens of faces and names out of the crowd. Always-reliable Wren noticed her glance and waved. Tribune Callus was laughing with his centurions and a number of other members, all of them making the red lanterns as an activity and drinking. Dawn and Auri had made their own, although the phoenix - a phoenix - had decided to light her own a little early.

It promptly went up in flames, like everything a phoenix did. Katerina smiled at the pair bickering like an old married couple, the Sentinel losing to a non-stop stream of brrrpts.

Her smile faded as she got the last piece of the puzzle. As it all clicked together.

As a thousand lanterns all along the south side of the encampments were lit.

As a thousand burning torches took to the sky.

The resisting city. The densely packed wood. The [General of a Thousand Jade Scrolls]. The slight increase in Wind mages. The city not being a Wei city, the sheer brutality of a civil war.

They were going to burn the city to the ground.

With everyone still inside.

And that meant…

Katerina whirled on Optio Coral.

“Population of Shuixi! Now!” She ordered.

Coral stammered out a number.

Katerina swore and put a hand on Reed’s shoulder. He could let her ‘borrow’ his skills, at the same time he could borrow hers. It worked nicely, and she roared out to the entire Legion, damn the diplomatic consequences.

They didn’t matter at this point, not if they all died.

“Sixth Legion! TO ARMS! Full assembly! Every last one of you, get out there, now!

“Get me Dawn.” She snarled at Reed, and a little click in her ear let her know the channel was open.

Flighty, bleeding-heart Dawn wouldn’t be able to resist trying to save the citizens of Shuixi, and Katerina grudgingly approved. It was the same instinct that had led to her current power level, and one here again, gone again Dawn was still worth more than an entire line of Optio Henrietta’s.

It didn’t mean Katerina wasn’t going to try and steer Dawn to protecting the Legion, and with the right knowledge, she would.

“Dawn, when you get the notification, immediately return.” Katerina ordered.

Only the fastest [Speedsters] were assembled on the field outside the fortress, but it was enough. Enough for Katerina’s trump skill [Empire of Nightmares, We Fight In The Shade, We Are Masters Of the Darkness, Rise Up, Shadows of the Legion!].

Arise!”


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Got a little bit of a note on this chapter. I wrote (mostly) this version, then went back and edited in ~1500 words. I tried something new, something possibly interesting. Betas HATED the new version, so I reverted because I'm not a stubborn old goat and I can listen to feedback. However, I kept it around - if you want to read it, it's here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i9LH9onNO70g8eTLcG5EvCeLRv0vuzqaCM0SkCszVHA/edit

Comments

I agree and disagree with cirvante. Some of the information seems frivolous but possibly useful in posted chapter but very out of place given the distinct threat categories. Like with her just mulling things and noticing 5000lbs of clay missing that could be being used as arms by earth mages. But didn't feel relevant in the list. The more obtuse peices of information seems like something better listed before she starts methodically going through likely threats. With the threats I feel like she should be going through them In order of likely hood or reverse likelihood until she stumbles onto the realization. Those two things I feel would make it more immersive and less like she's having intrusive thoughts while worying about the death of a legion. Personally I prefer the Google doc version. I like the lore being cannon that the legion has an official list of way entire legions can be destroyed and that's it's being reviewed apathetically. It contrasts how while we watch dawn this glowy perspective we get with the reality of how dark the world truly is. Isteri has seen whole legions be lost and has enough data points to have at least 13 ways that they know work. In the Google doc I love how she got to the immortal threat and immediately dawn comes to mind. "What immortal threats do we have around?.. dawn" chefs kiss for the word play. Loved the seamless transition from giving atmosphere and setting to legatas realization of the threat.

Jett Hardin

The problems with the alternate version is that the threats are out of order, kind of disjointed and don't really fit all the intel listed under them. An army general would go through a checklist of threats methodically from first to last. Something you should have kept from the longer version is the realization that they are deep in hostile territory and that the city is about to be reclaimed by an enemy faction in short order. This is necessary information to conclude that Wang Jian is going 'scorched earth' on the city, both to level, deny his enemies resources and possibly betray the 6th Legion. After the disjointed bits of intel in Katerina's mind, you should have quickly listed the relevant bits again upon figuring out the threat and given us insight into what exactly her plan is. Is she getting the legion ready to defend itself against retaliation from Wang Jian for Dawn's interference? Is she using her trump skill with the speedsters to launch a preemptive strike against Wang Jian before he can begin the massacre to keep Dawn with the Legion? This whole 'keeping things mysterious for maximum cliffhanger' is annoying as fuck when the chapter was already this short. If you allowed us to know the full context of what is about to go down, it would be more satisfying and still work as a cliffhanger.

Cirvante

I'm a bit confused as to the implication that it will take some time for Dawn to get the Legata's message since the Legata just saw Dawn and Auri working on and burning lanterns. ... Katerina smiled at the pair bickering like an old married couple, the Sentinel losing to a non-stop stream of brrrpts. ... “Dawn, when you get the notification, immediately return.” Katerina ordered.

M. Lampi

As a former military person I like the official posted version. The internal dialogue follows the train of thought of approaching a bad feeling with what facts do I have available to me and what don't I know that is going to bite me. I think even the person bringing up the fact that they were invited to participate when they normally are sent far away is good.

Bradley Weyers

Very clearly this is going to invite the wrath of a certain Valkyrie. Dawn also, but I'd expect Iona to be oath bound to deliver justice to the leaders of those armies.

Jason Hardman

If I'm not mistaken, the legion started the war with 4096 fighters, but there are support personnel, so apparently that becomes about 5000 in total in the legion. And the other armies are much more numerous.

Shoto

How large are these armies? It has been hard to get a sense of scale of this campaign.

Cormac

I like some of the additions, for example the rumor of dawn healing a plague over night and showing the effects of her presence in numbers. But maybe I'm dumb, but I don't get the numbers and why they are mixed order.

NoReTr3aT

Exactly my first thought

NoReTr3aT

I think the posted version is better, although it is missing the "#12, Disease and Plague" part. I like that part.

Dira

Oh wow. Yeah, I can see why the posted version was chosen. Hmm. I think it was the numbing that disrupted the flow? I'm not sure exactly what it was, but Katerina came across as more confident and competent in the official version.

Stephanie Washburn

Liked the extra information on the docs. Only thing that bothered me about it was some of the points not seeming to relate directly with the information she was reciting. For instance #6 internal cohesion of the army/legion has nothing to do with the town being mostly wood and smelling of chemicals? Or is that supposed to be the legion’s fort that you’re referring to? Also, out of order, military checklists are typically done in order so nothing gets missed. Structured that way to avoid mistakes. Otherwise I definitely think the longer one would be better.

Klistofklades

Didn’t read the alternate version but here’s what I’m expecting: Their current faction is ready to grab the crown and make peace. What better than a bit of good old fashioned “let’s blame the strangers” to unite the country. Burn down a city you don’t care about, blame mercenaries, unite the plebs. And as a bonus the mercenaries killed one of those fancy generals from an opposing faction so by blaming (and slaughtering them) you can also appease the leadership of that faction. The two factions combined are probably the reason why they believe to be able to grab the crown in the first place. In the short term there’s nothing Katerina nor Dawn can do about the blame, even if the city survives. Either they get blamed for burning it or they’re traitors who broke their contract on an important feast day. Blame will be stuck on them, they will have to fight. Of course they’re better than the Dullahan expect and have the person who’s being groomed for Valkyrie leadership (“let’s make your house our comms hub”) on their side. I doubt the high leveled Valkyries will simply stand by, especially as they too will be targets of the xenophobic hate. Being strangers and such. Which wouldn’t be too much of an issue for the Dullahans given how far the Valkyries are spread if everything goes to the Dullahan’s plans but when the Valkyries can rally around the retreating (and innocent) legion it’s going to be a different game. Dawn also has two extra cards up her sleeve that she can and will play if I’m not mistaken. The legata is likely to die, our favourite characters will make it out with plenty of levels to spare. Not sure whether this is the start of the next immortal war though.

Simon Hoerder

The city and the Legion aren’t loyal to the leaders. And the legion is both clearly powerful and has a over leveled healer with them. Take them all out and you get a ton of xp for the one in charge

Veklov

Where did you get that? And when did BTDM add the possibillity of a fourth class?

Tsorov

Maybe a blend of the two would be best? Honestly, I really liked the numbered list of potential threats. I'd never peg fae as a threat to armies but it makes sense in some ways.

Wizard Tim

Hmm. Honestly I liked the original better than the official. Gives a better idea of a commander's list of primary concerns in warfare in this setting and seems to fit Katerina's perspective. Not sure why the hate either. Only difference I really saw was the numbered points of potential threats. Couldn't quite follow Katerina's thoughts in the official. I had considered flood and also disease as high threats (mosquitoes and heavier rains) but Dawn would've snuffed disease out before it even thought about hitting. I'd never think of fae as a threat. Firestorming a city after it surrendered and paid tribute though? With the Legion inside it? Why... Though I feel like the higher threat of flooding is going to become super important soon enough.

Wizard Tim

I am glad the alternate was cut out, it wasnt terrible but certainly more boring than the patreon one

Elevator3799

At the mention of the library, I thought that the problem was going to be Dawn doing a mission impossible and breaking in causing all hell to break loose or something.

Kennyevilmonkey

The alternate seemed fine. The current version builds tension a little more, but the alternate version gives us an interesting insight into Katrina's thought process that seems to fit a little more with the impression I've gotten of her so far. The alternate chapter gives more context/information and could connect more to other things in the story, the current version is a little more exciting/thrilling to read. That may make it better for posting as a serial, but the previous version may be something that works better as part of a whole when you sit down to read a while book at once.

a passing Fnord

Thanks for chapter.

Weebeedee

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

This version definitely builds up more tension as you try and figure it out.

DireGoat

It seems like they plan on using the legions lanterns to burn the city, and then blame them for so they can betray the legion.

George

I suspect a kill notification for Wang Jian. He intends to kill everyone in the city in order to rapidly level. Dawn will have... objections to this.

Olly

Not sure how the city burning down would harm the legion are they inside? that was not conveyed 100%

Deltoren

What notification is the Legata expecting Dawn to get? At first I thought one of Katerina’s own defeat, but Elaine shouldn’t get a system notification for that if she isn’t at least partially responsible.

Lance Platt

I liked both chapters, maybe the alternative more because it was more information

julian

good chappie

Elaine

Thank you!

Andrew

I skimmed it and I thought it was good, it added a little more context to trying to find the issue

Luther bittinger

I will say on a personal note, I would have loved it if you included something about the memetic threat in this version. It's such a small detail in the alt version that expands the scope of threat discovery and analysis katerina has on display

rizen

Alternate version seemed fine, the legata's thoughts were easier to follow with the outline.

John Lentner

this was a great chapter. understanding katerina's thought process over what seems like a couple minutes was really interesting. This chapter and the alternate chapter linked both have different implications. This one implicates katerina as capable of taking in raw information and coming up with insights without a systematic approach, vs the alternate uses the "13 classes of threats that can destroy a legion" thought process to coordinate her response. If you want to use "13 classes of threats that can destroy a legion" more later on, then this is the right time to show the chekov's gun. but if you don't then you have to balance katerina, the superbly strong raw information intuition leader, and katerina, the by the book deducer that was taught what to look for. I like this one more, but I like the latter in case those 13 ways comes up as relevant later.

rizen

Can we get next chapter early I'm at edge of seat here

Tiffany Miller

Alternate version was fine. 🤷

Michael Neal

I much prefer this version. It's a lot more fun trying to figure out what the data is pointing to, like a mini mystery, than having it immediately spelled out. Maybe something like the final version but with an added line or two about what each set of data helped rule out as a thought or regular text would work. Alternatively going with "lines my mentor said about what can kill a legion" and then the conditions that make each unlikely would be a better way of doing the version in the google doc.

Orzamil

Wait how old is she, she has 4 classes

Isaac Allen

Damn straight into battle. Feels like elaine is about to level a lot from saving the city.

Hughes Andrew

I like it. I’m spending the whole chapter at the edge of my seat wondering what the big disaster is and I think the length was just enough for the tension to rise properly

heh

5m

Captdeth

I will note that I didn't hate the alternate version!

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