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Arc 3

Not sure who among my patrons read my previous work before I started rewriting, but Arc 3 was fairly slow in progression.

I was thinking about condensing some of that. Making the testing chapters down into a single chapter or two, etc...

So I figured I would get an opinion.

Comments

An idea though no clue how feasible is giving him an earth's knowledge skill of some kind that let's him pull from the internet or something so he can bring more earth knowledge tales music art etc to this new world

courtney hyland

If your talking about testing the adventurers then maybe a good way to shorten it, if you decide to do so, is to just list what the tests are about rather than the party going through them.

Skyler Jarrard

The ways he’s don it so far has been yeah. Its now just waiting for delvers to arrive, so he might as well experiment more and find new things to do with dungeon powers and prepare some more. I like trying to find more things to do with the systems available and both test the limits and figure out work arounds if some limitation exists. Hence my sometimes lengthy comments of things to try.

ZCochraine!%

I enjoy hearing about how things work and Caden figuring things out, but I'm also a lore hound and have been called a pedant so take that with a grain of salt.

Munirah Hutchinson


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