202405 fine-tuned version
Added 2024-07-02 05:44:06 +0000 UTCThank you for your continued support! I am Akuochisky-SENSEI!
Today I'm uploading a fine-tuned version of Blue Icicle's comic that I updated in May, in which I adjusted some of the lines.
Adjustments
(1) The timing of "Ryunosuke-san was ●rainwashed" was a little before (not just before).
(2) The color of the lines in the speech balloons.
(3) English translations and drawings for the parts of the latter half of the page that were not written in English.
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Due to a wrinkle in the work, the panting of the drawn characters in the latter half of the story was left in Japanese, so I fixed that.
I have given up translating onomatopoeia into English because of time constraints, but I want to change the dialogue as much as possible because it is related to the story.
I thought it would be easier to read this way. I thought it would be easier to read the lines in the black speech bubbles, so I changed them to white text. I was reading a manga and found a black speech balloon with white text (I had previously used black text with a white border), so I decided to follow the same pattern.
I'd appreciate your feedback on that if you'd like!
This month's update will be a manga about Ryunosuke being remodeled in some space.
It will be a continuation of the monster version I drew in April.
As for the timing of the update, it may be a little late because I have a manuscript for Comiket.
I will do my best to make it a good remodeling manga, so please continue to support me!
