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Mech Magic (v1)

One of the longer CYOAs I've made in a while. This was a bit more experimental, using more than one colour for options and trying to mix things up. Let me know what you guys think, and I hope y'all enjoy.

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EDIT - Added how many points you start with and cleaned up a double up

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Ah kk. Thank you!

This refers to Head-slot, Arm-slot, and Body-slot, which is how many weapons can be put in each of those areas

Dragon Jak

Quick question, er what is HS, AS, or BS in the Pg. 2 External Aesthetics?

Thank you and I look forward to your future works dude. Keep it up dude! Good luck and stay safe in these times.

I love it! That's a fantastic idea. I've put it in the design document for the second version. I've got a few more projects to do in the mean time, but it's definitely going in once I get around to it.

Dragon Jak

Well the Control "Mind of it's Own" with the Mech Aesthetics "Cyborg" was what made made me wonder about a Hybrid option. Cause maybe some kind of option of some sort could be made in order to allow for a person be able to take control somehow despite the "Mind of it's Own" control being one where you relinquish control to another being. So that one could be basically living in another person them living their own life with you occasionally taking control from them for whatever it is you want to do. With a person choosing another control setting along with "Mind of it's Own" for in what form they take control. The "Perfect" control would be a fun one to be able to use with "Mind of it's Own" with you feeling everything the Mech is feeling even when not trying to control. Also while the "Mind of it's Own" does normally award points it should probably if a Hybrid mode is made for this specific control is made subtract points in some way instead I would think unless there's some other stipulation of some sort. Man I tried to keep this short but I tend to ramble on a lot when I am unsure if I felt like I got my point or idea across. So uh... yeah. It's the "Mind of it's Own" control that made me want a Hybrid mode. Oh yeah also maybe Hybrid can include something so that a person can (for the other types not "Mind of it's Own") just be able to change what mode of control shifting control modes or something maybe if a person wants to freshen things up a bit in how they go about trying to control their Mech for fun. So er um, thank you for your time and efforts. Also what are your thoughts on this?

Thank you for bringing those to my attention! Always need a second or third eye to get these things right. The first two issues have been fixed. As for hybrid options, you are able to combine styles if you can think of creative ways to put them together, but there are no explicit hybrid options. Did you have something in mind?

Dragon Jak

I really like this one. You planning on finishing this one soon? Cause you accidentally repeated one of the control centers them being the constant perfect onto voice commands being the same description. Also just curious how many points are there going to be and will there be any kind of Hybrid options of any sorts for the control center or other sections? Er sorry if I am over stepping my bounds here but I was just curious and excited.


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