Rewrite the Stars V || Page 17
Added 2024-07-24 08:37:03 +0000 UTCWhen the light fades to rain.
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Yeah... they're pretty much done for.
CipherRage0909
2024-10-14 03:20:48 +0000 UTCApparently, he never checked their passports and noticed they had the same last name.
Blazzore
2024-09-05 18:37:47 +0000 UTCNo es broma, llevo unas noches teorizando de como podrían reaccionar
Hugo Sanchez
2024-08-01 15:23:14 +0000 UTCUnderrated... Nos podrías dar una fecha para la siguiente parte? La reacción por lo menos de estos dos padres ante esto🫶
Hugo Sanchez
2024-08-01 15:22:46 +0000 UTCI’m really wondering what will happen next since the cat is now out of the bag 😔😔.
Double Gron
2024-07-30 17:56:53 +0000 UTCLincoln fought to convince Lynn to give their relationship a shot. Will Lynn not fight to keep it and Lincoln? (Not physically)
Paul Hoon
2024-07-25 00:32:59 +0000 UTCSo, this is why its called "Separation." Now, I'm wondering, is it just the parents separating Lincoln and Lynn, or are they separating themselves from them to be together?
Paul Hoon
2024-07-25 00:30:41 +0000 UTCI'm not ready 😭😞
C.E. Zim93
2024-07-24 19:57:27 +0000 UTCDear Lord, the gall of this Canadian BASTARD…! 😭
Spawn
2024-07-24 19:37:09 +0000 UTCFacts
TLSM 115
2024-07-24 19:19:31 +0000 UTCHe didn't realize they're related... He thought it was teens being teens
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:17:45 +0000 UTCOoooooh boy. Things are gonna get messy I feel like
Uni
2024-07-24 18:17:41 +0000 UTCThey still can't process it
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:17:06 +0000 UTCOh, we still have like 40 pages left lol
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:16:40 +0000 UTCI think she's unable to react, her fight or flight turned into freeze. This isn't something she can punch her way out of...
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:16:25 +0000 UTCAnd scene. Time for act II.
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:15:35 +0000 UTCBig family, thin walls...
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:15:14 +0000 UTCSe viene una charla demasiado importante
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:14:52 +0000 UTCYou have no idea...
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:14:32 +0000 UTCNo more secrets, there's a big elephant in the room now...
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:14:25 +0000 UTC😔
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:13:22 +0000 UTCGet the tissues ready...
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:13:13 +0000 UTCOh, absolutely. Lincoln and Lynn are in for a trip that will feel longer than their journey to Scotland. Thank you as always for the kind comments and your analysis.
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:12:58 +0000 UTCCreo que desde la perspectiva de Lynn y Lincoln está muy difícil reaccionar, ni siquiera para salvarse. Son sus peores pesadillas haciéndose verdad.
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:11:31 +0000 UTCMuchísimas gracias! Este es el proyecto más ambicioso que he hecho hasta ahora, me alegra que les guste. Mucho drama está al caer, abróchense el cinturón!
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:10:40 +0000 UTCNo te das una idea...
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:09:21 +0000 UTCThe parents are still trying to process what they heard... It's tough. Thank you!
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:09:03 +0000 UTCThey were too shocked to react 😔
UnderratedHero
2024-07-24 18:08:05 +0000 UTCI was like "ok they could lie their way outta this still. The mountie is probably gonna come back" but to go an tell their parents all of that, BRUH. This guy 😔
Kevin
2024-07-24 18:02:57 +0000 UTCThings get dark when the lights go out
Thuren Miller
2024-07-24 16:20:07 +0000 UTCLynn and Rita are speechless
Thuren Miller
2024-07-24 15:09:16 +0000 UTCAnd… it’s over 😬
Uni
2024-07-24 15:07:33 +0000 UTCSince Lincoln’s crying, I bet Lynn’s reaction is going to get defensive and angry.
Paul Hoon
2024-07-24 14:53:43 +0000 UTCAnd so the curtain falls 😬
Jack
2024-07-24 14:25:11 +0000 UTCOh boy 🫣 please tell me the sisters don’t find out. Please tell me the parents don’t tell them.
Paul Hoon
2024-07-24 14:23:30 +0000 UTCNoooooo, maldición la verdad salió a la luz pobrecito de ambos tanto Lincoln como Lynn 🥺🥺😢
Juan Carlos Juarez
2024-07-24 13:12:30 +0000 UTCThings about to get real intense…
Antn100Q
2024-07-24 12:56:56 +0000 UTCWell, it looks like the cat has been out of the bag. I guess they’ll be grounded, and their siblings will be flabbergasted when they hear about this, it’s like spending more time with one another than your family and friends.😔😔🙁
Double Gron
2024-07-24 12:45:17 +0000 UTC😱
Mia Roman
2024-07-24 12:02:31 +0000 UTCOh shit!! That ranger just told on them!! Things are getting intense! I'm interested to see how this goes
C.E. Zim93
2024-07-24 12:00:14 +0000 UTCDamn that Mountie and his big friggin’ mouth. Now of course Lynn Sr. and Rita are going to want to know what Lincoln was doing to his “girlfriend’s” body! Just had to keep kicking them both while they were down, eh? Well, once Lincoln’s extended ban expires after these next three years, I’m sure he’ll still never go back to Canada again. It just breaks my heart that one moment of unbridled passion between Lincoln and Lynn ended up being the thing that did them in. I feel so terrible for Lincoln; his tears say it all. He knows things will never be the same again for him and Lynn now that Lynn Sr. and Rita know what is going on between him and his "girlfriend." So, this is how the dominoes begin to fall. It’s going to be a looooooong drive back and an even looooooonger discussion once Lincoln and Lynn get home.
I.O. Penner
2024-07-24 10:42:53 +0000 UTCChale. Ahora sí los agarraron con la masa. Solamente se salvarían los dos si Lynn jr inventa que se estuvo besando con un chico canadiense y que doblé cita a escondidas
El Pinche Barry
2024-07-24 09:54:36 +0000 UTCDios ahora me dejas con mucha más intriga! La continuación de sus reacciones, las defensas de estos dos, LA REACCIÓN (si es que hay) DE LOS DEMAS, la consecuencia que tendrán ante esto, etc... Underrated, mis diez de diez a todo porque me encanta tu historia de estos dos, las cinco partes son increíbles y un diseño de historia e dibujo perfectos. Drama y suspense 💯
Hugo Sanchez
2024-07-24 09:48:44 +0000 UTCNo me j... Este emoji lo he sentido al ver el: "Lo siento... ¿Que?" De Lynn Sr, creo todos sabemos que el va a ser el que se cabree más que ninguna otra persona...💀
Hugo Sanchez
2024-07-24 09:45:21 +0000 UTCOye está muy lindo este 🚂. Dejen busco un asiento cómodo que va ponerse turbulento el viaje.
Aztrux
2024-07-24 09:05:26 +0000 UTCThe look in Rita and Lynn Sr eyes says it all, confusion and shocked. Were as Lincoln and Lynn are just shocked. I swear my heart was beating faster as I read this page, great work man keep it up.
Happychap2628
2024-07-24 08:49:16 +0000 UTCDAMN just straight up like that I would have bodied him oh I can't wait for next chapter
TLSM 115
2024-07-24 08:40:25 +0000 UTC
