The Fluffer - Page 10

I'm still pretty shaky on drawing horses, so it's cool to hear someone likes how he turned out here. A nice confidence boost. :P Thanks man! It's a bit hard to explain, but the way I set up the skeleton of my characters leaves a bit too much room for 'slop', the final character doesn't sit rigidly on my setup right now which leaves room for things to rift around. This is why sometimes the head looks too big or small, or sometimes the torso ends up too long or and stuff like that. It's a bit of a fundamental issue with my drawing that I've really gotta iron out. Maybe I'll have that figured out by the end of the comic. x3

Ruaidri

I applaud your creativity here, at least! :P

Ruaidri

I’m just picturing the next frame of the comics the dude is like ... “Did you drug her? You f-ing drugged her.” and the cops come, and there’s a trial, and the fennec ends up in federal pound-me-in-the-ass prison... PLOT TWISTS. x9

Sasha Fox

"Musta worn her out. I on the other hand...." *cheesy porn music starts, boss turns the camera on*

The horse actor came out really well in those middle panels. Loving his expressions and eyes! I'm very excited to see where the story turns in the next few pages; the stage is set for our little fennec, but just how is he gonna weasel himself underneath the stallion? Not much else to critique that wasn't said in the sketch, so just try and watch out for making Kyle's neck a little long! I think it comes down to the perspective and understanding of his collared shirt, since his actual shoulder line and collarbone are hidden under it. Maybe that won't be a problem in soon-to-be pages since he'll probably appear sans shirt from now on, but hey! Great job as always!

Bloudin Ruo

Toootally not suspicious! XD

Kirien Fost

You know who can handle a horse no problem? FOXES!!! xD

Matsi

Not exactly... I guess I never really put a ton of thought into making him likeable. I'm super new at writing so I've been so focused on putting together a plot that makes some degree of sense that thinking about the characters much sorta fell by the wayside, I guess. :P That said, I guess I wasn't exactly aiming for him to be super relatable or anything either. He just wants some fuk, that's sorta the beginning and end of his point as a character. So for what it's worth it's not hard to see why he might not appeal to some folks.

Ruaidri

I don't know if it's just me, but I find the main character fox very unlikable. Is that intentional?

Amber