The Ballerina Dad Full FEATURE (Early Access)
Added 2023-08-15 07:11:57 +0000 UTCAaron's working hard for his family but neglecting them too. After not attending his daughter's birthday party, A wish is made and he finds himself now in the body of a small girl. He's gone from Husband to daughter!
Will he learn his lesson!? Will he change back?
Comments
I was getting worried in the middle there. Glad the family is back together! Excellent writng!
Leslie Deana
2023-08-15 19:33:23 +0000 UTCThank you Stephen, I really appreciate that π thank you for commenting
GenderPlay Books
2023-08-15 15:24:24 +0000 UTC"Ballerina Dad", I had fun with this one. Seeing it as a complete story, with the voice actors, and background, just really felt right. You chose a wonderful cast of Vocal talent, and whether you want to believe it, or not, your writing was very good. This story makes one think about what's important in life, and the value of family. The Easter eggs, alluding to a certain 60's sitcom about a family of witches, just added a fun little spin to the whole story. The AI assisted art works well for this although I kinda miss your own style, so I'm glad to see it in so many other of your stories. Keep the good work coming, but don't burn yourself out.
Stephen Dollahan
2023-08-15 14:56:43 +0000 UTC
