Pale pink Packet part 9 (Early access video)
Added 2023-08-03 18:09:30 +0000 UTCPhoebe gives Aiden a telling off and makes him understand why she wants to fight
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"Pale Pink Packet" part 9, I think I've commented on this before, but I like the way you're tying all of this together. Aiden is finally getting some truthful answers from her mom, and more of the whole saga is being explained. As I've already read part 10 I know you're throwing in a couple of real plot twists. I'm looking forward to seeing it all come together, and see how you work in "Mittens" and" The Makeup Curse", with the other three storylines. I don't count "My Second Chance" as part of this saga although it is about the same home-worlds.
Stephen Dollahan
2023-08-08 17:12:42 +0000 UTC
