Chapter 20 of No Joy in Command is out for Squires!
Added 2025-05-19 06:37:57 +0000 UTCA bit late. Some aftermath. Some drama, but not too much. The chapter went somewhat faster than I expected, to be honest. It doesn't feel like I wrote 6k words, but here I am. Anyway, let me know what you think in the comments.
You can read the previous chapters in the collection.
Comments
Amusing crow skin changing troubles
Garri Sarkisov
2025-05-22 17:24:05 +0000 UTCHow about no hmm? just kill it, no offense, but the entire idea is just pure stupidity and a waste of time when Jon has bigger concerns like Vhagar snipe Denys Vermithor tears smoke then retreat to deal with Vhagar another day if he has no support
TYRONE!!!
2025-05-20 21:49:04 +0000 UTChere is my petition for keeping Seasmoke alive!!! don’t do away with such a good boy, kill Denys fuck him but even losing Syrax hurt BUT Syrax and Rhaenyra’s bond was strong so it’s understandable that the yellow dragon went mad when her rider died. Denys and Seamoke’s bond is new so can you pretty pleaseeee (fingers crossed) anyways… can Jon send vermithor to deal with denys by skinchanging into him? That way Jon can stay in KL. Just some rambling thoughts lol thank you for another great chapter!
Winterrrose
2025-05-20 07:32:59 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the chapter. Jon handled the Jaehaera well. Poor kid was in shock. Rhaena’s reaction was understandable but she might want to reconsider public demands of Jon. They made her look cruel/weak to the spectators. Ser Willis Fell is a good knight, so Jon did well getting him on side. I did think Jon was cruel to Alicent, but a king does need to be seen as cruel now and then. It keeps people in line. Jon’s councilors advice is good. He can’t be gallivanting around the kingdom until he settles things. The good news is that Aemond will come to him. The bad news is Silver Denys is in it for himself. What happens if he starts thinking what Braavos might pay for a dragon rider? Aemond, with back up from the Redwynes, is doing the world a favor by purging the Ironbron. They are horrible knock off Vikings. Real Vikings would be embarrassed to be compared to them.
stevem1
2025-05-19 14:20:16 +0000 UTCThe damned dragon skull heart tree is going to be infamous by the time this war is over. With how things go in Westeros, it needs a name. Vermithor flying with that huge dragon skull tree in his claws must have been quite the sight. If there's any other banner or order that needs rebranding or a symbol, a weirwood growing from a dragon skull would go hard.
AlisGlaciei
2025-05-19 11:33:02 +0000 UTC
