Brokering Trust
Added 2023-04-14 04:09:18 +0000 UTCHere's the first 4000 words of the new story, Brokering Trust.
A scientist is granted a once in a lifetime opportunity to travel to the Trappist system, home of the Brokers, where no human has set foot before. A seemingly simple expedition grows more complicated as he is forced to balance the interests of his government and those of the enigmatic aliens who have requested his help.
Read along here:
https://snekguy.com/stories/pinwheel/brokering-trust/
The lovely concept art featured comes courtesy of Intrastele.
Comments
I'm currently unable to stay online long enough to actually post an update on the website, but rest assured that editing continues. Today I skipped ahead a bit to complete chapter 25 and the epilogue. All that's left to do now is a short section of the last sex scene.
Snekguy
2023-10-13 23:51:44 +0000 UTC10,000 words, chapter 23 is done and some of 24.
Snekguy
2023-10-11 21:41:53 +0000 UTCChapter 21 and 22 are complete. Completion has reached 90%.
Snekguy
2023-10-10 23:00:31 +0000 UTCThe audiobook is finished and has been uploaded to my distributor. It’s currently undergoing QC, but it should be ready soon. I also had time to do some editing today, another 5000 words of chapter 21.
Snekguy
2023-10-09 23:05:45 +0000 UTC5000 words, chapter 20 is finally done. Now, it's a straight shot to that second sex scene. Fingers crossed I can wrap it up by next week. Tomorrow is my day off, but I may not post an update on Monday, because the audiobook is ready to be uploaded and I need to get that done ASAP so it'll be available for Halloween.
Snekguy
2023-10-08 02:51:52 +0000 UTC3000 words, lots of new content.
Snekguy
2023-10-07 00:54:15 +0000 UTCAnother update, lots of new content.
Snekguy
2023-10-06 01:06:43 +0000 UTCAnother 2600 words, including a lot of new content.
Snekguy
2023-10-05 00:26:21 +0000 UTCAnother chunk down, alien PP design has been finalized. Overall completion has passed 70%.
Snekguy
2023-10-04 02:50:07 +0000 UTCAnother chunk of content down today, the chapter is about halfway done. There will be some all-new content to replace the next scene tomorrow. I also finished the review and editing process for the audiobook today, so that’s ready to be uploaded as soon as I have the time.
Snekguy
2023-10-02 23:42:14 +0000 UTCNot a lot of forward progress today, I wanted to go back and give that last scene another pass, and found some issues I wanted to correct. I also updated the Hetero version with a few small fixes and improvements I made to the Gay version.
Snekguy
2023-09-29 23:09:55 +0000 UTCThanks, I do my best.
Snekguy
2023-09-29 02:40:57 +0000 UTCI'm honestly impressed by your work ethic, you are really dedicated.
ElephantTalk
2023-09-29 02:01:55 +0000 UTCAnother chunk of chapter 20 is done, and I added some new content. I’d say the scene is about 40% complete.
Snekguy
2023-09-27 22:11:19 +0000 UTCThe first chunk of Chapter 20 is done. This is the big sex scene, so this process is going to be quite involved, as I will both be editing existing content and adding in new content.
Snekguy
2023-09-27 04:01:48 +0000 UTCChapters 18 and 19 are done. I also updated the human wiki page yesterday with a bunch of artwork and writeups that I've gotten since it was last updated. The Battleship, Beewolf, Dropship, Kodiak, Timberwolf, and Yagda have all been updated and expanded with new content.
Snekguy
2023-09-25 21:52:22 +0000 UTCChapter 17 is done.
Snekguy
2023-09-24 02:14:19 +0000 UTCChapters 15, 16, and some of 17 are done.
Snekguy
2023-09-23 03:43:47 +0000 UTCChapter 14 is done. This one required a bit more extensive editing. There probably won't be an update tomorrow, as I have to listen through the finished Widow's Welcome audiobook!
Snekguy
2023-09-20 23:17:31 +0000 UTCChapters 12-14 are done.
Snekguy
2023-09-19 21:34:37 +0000 UTC9-12 are complete. I'm about halfway done.
Snekguy
2023-09-18 22:15:46 +0000 UTCChapters 4-9 of the gay version are complete.
Snekguy
2023-09-15 20:16:04 +0000 UTCThe first four chapters of the gay edition for Brokering Trust are live. This is going to be a little more involved than I was hoping, so please bear with me as I work my way through it. I would also welcome any feedback about errors or weirdness that you come across. Both versions of the story are now accessible via the merged page.
Snekguy
2023-09-14 20:19:00 +0000 UTCAll editing phases are complete, that should be it for this version. Next step is rewriting a few scenes for the gay version. Weaver dialogue formatting is still fucky but I need to experiment with how that shows up in ebooks and on other sites before I commit to a fix.
Snekguy
2023-09-12 18:27:55 +0000 UTCI'm back from my space vacation. 6 chapters finalized today, 5 left. Editing on the hetero version should be done tomorrow. I also received the final versions of the files for the Widow's Welcome audiobook, which I will be reviewing as soon as I have time.
Snekguy
2023-09-11 22:10:42 +0000 UTCThanks dude!
Snekguy
2023-09-08 15:23:26 +0000 UTCHappy Birthday! Enjoy some much needed rest, and enjoy starfield I know I have been! Thanks for another amazing chapter in the Pinwheel series, cant wait to see the next chapter in your adventure making!
Paul Martinek
2023-09-06 21:47:01 +0000 UTCThanks!
Snekguy
2023-09-06 03:02:07 +0000 UTCHappy birthday dude, and enjoy yourself. I can’t wait to play it!
Saro13
2023-09-06 02:40:26 +0000 UTC20,000 words. Chapters 23, 24, 25, and the epilogue are done. That's it! The proofreading phase is finished. I have some more Grammarly passes to do on some chapters but the editing is pretty much complete. This isn't quite the end of the project, as I promised a gay version and will have to rewrite some scenes and make some changes for that, which will take a few more days. It's my birthday, and Starfield just came out, so I'm going to take the rest of the week off to visit family and play a little. Stay tuned, because I'll be running some Patreon polls over the next few days so you guys can vote on what I work on next.
Snekguy
2023-09-06 02:05:57 +0000 UTCAnother 10,000 words, chapter 22 is done.
Snekguy
2023-09-05 00:50:25 +0000 UTC15,000 words, Chapter 21 and some of 22 is done. We’re at 85% completion.
Snekguy
2023-09-02 17:51:27 +0000 UTCAwesome!
ElephantTalk
2023-09-02 01:26:07 +0000 UTC24,000 words, chapter 20 is edited.
Snekguy
2023-09-01 21:11:56 +0000 UTCAnother 10,000 words, Chapter 19 is done and some of 20.
Snekguy
2023-08-30 14:07:01 +0000 UTCChapter 18 is done, another 10,000 words. 60% complete.
Snekguy
2023-08-28 20:44:56 +0000 UTCChapter 17 is done, another 10,000 words. We're past the halfway point.
Snekguy
2023-08-25 00:58:39 +0000 UTCChapter 16 is done, 7,000 words. I also added in a museum exhibit section about predation that slipped my mind during writing.
Snekguy
2023-08-24 02:52:52 +0000 UTCChapter 15 is done, 5000 words. Just a heads-up, I'm going to be entertaining family and traveling to a wedding over the next few days. I intend to keep editing, but updates may come at unusual times.
Snekguy
2023-08-23 02:58:44 +0000 UTC12,000 words, chapters 13 and 14 are done. I’m trimming some of the exposition dump scenes and tightening those up. There’s some cool stuff that isn’t really related to the plot in any way, and that’ll be explored more in future entries.
Snekguy
2023-08-21 23:49:10 +0000 UTCLovely work
ElephantTalk
2023-08-20 23:10:32 +0000 UTC12,000 words today, chapters 11 and 12 are complete.
Snekguy
2023-08-20 01:00:16 +0000 UTCChapters 9 and 10 are done, another 10,000 words. I moved the scene where David accesses Selkie's terminal and merged it with one of the intranet sections, which should improve the pacing and keep it digestible.
Snekguy
2023-08-19 01:47:38 +0000 UTCChapter 8 is done, another 10,000 words. Editing is approximately 30% complete.
Snekguy
2023-08-17 22:27:56 +0000 UTCHad to work on some audiobook stuff today so I didn't have time for editing. The reshoots are all done and the editing is nearing its final phase.
Snekguy
2023-08-17 04:31:20 +0000 UTCChapters 6-8 are done, another 10,000 words. I had some feedback about moving David’s first nocturnal excursion outside his habitat to a little later in the story for a more natural progression, so bear with me while I tweak that section.
Snekguy
2023-08-16 05:38:12 +0000 UTCChapters 4-6 are done, another 17,000 words.
Snekguy
2023-08-15 01:19:36 +0000 UTCThe first 20,000 words are edited, chapters 1-4. Please note that Weaver’s dialogue will be a bit fucky during this process, as the HTML hates it and it has to be tweaked manually for correct spacing.
Snekguy
2023-08-13 02:54:47 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I have my moments.” Finished! Final word count is just shy of 198,000. I’m going to take a break for a day or two to recoup, and then I’ll start the editing process. It should take around a month, and I promised you guys a bi version, so I’ll have to take some time to write those new scenes too.
Snekguy
2023-08-09 04:14:31 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “It is hard to imagine that there could be so many,”
Snekguy
2023-08-08 01:45:48 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I am exhausted,”
Snekguy
2023-08-06 03:46:14 +0000 UTC2300 word update, new content at “I am not so fragile,”
Snekguy
2023-08-05 05:20:02 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She broke off her kiss'
Snekguy
2023-08-04 03:53:09 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘Flower pounced on Selkie’
Snekguy
2023-08-03 04:59:39 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Glad to hear that you’re not leaving all of those employees high and dry.”
Snekguy
2023-08-02 02:31:51 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'More Hazard teams arrived'
Snekguy
2023-08-01 00:34:55 +0000 UTCCheck Mate
ElephantTalk
2023-07-30 06:32:45 +0000 UTCUnfortunately I had to attend a family function today and ran out of time for an update, but hopefully some fanworks will tide you over.
Snekguy
2023-07-30 01:44:49 +0000 UTCclassic David
Sparky
2023-07-29 16:04:42 +0000 UTC2600 word update, new content at “I have no choice,”
Snekguy
2023-07-29 02:08:49 +0000 UTCThis story has been a real odyssey, I can’t wait to see what happens next
Saro13
2023-07-28 12:05:40 +0000 UTC2400 word update, new content at “I strongly advise against this course of action,”
Snekguy
2023-07-28 00:11:24 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I can remote into those systems from here,”
Snekguy
2023-07-27 01:18:31 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Every door along the way was shut'
Snekguy
2023-07-26 02:14:52 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Contact your circle and inform them of our plan,”
Snekguy
2023-07-25 01:37:06 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “What can we do now?”
Snekguy
2023-07-23 05:14:02 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I do not imagine that the Disciplinary Board will be lenient in his case.”
Snekguy
2023-07-22 02:28:38 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Look at the logs on the terminal!”
Snekguy
2023-07-21 01:46:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “This is very unorthodox,”
Snekguy
2023-07-20 02:19:46 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “That’s enough,” Looks like pinned posts are working again so I'll put this back here.
Snekguy
2023-07-19 22:00:22 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “That’s enough,”
Snekguy
2023-07-19 01:27:23 +0000 UTC2800 word update, new content at “You think it should come out, then?”
Snekguy
2023-07-18 04:37:45 +0000 UTCI had to tackle quite a few projects today, including getting the timeline running, some audiobook stuff, and some art stuff, so unfortunately I ran out of time for an update.
Snekguy
2023-07-16 02:24:25 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I wanted to tell you sooner,”
Snekguy
2023-07-14 22:57:21 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “David, are you ready?”
Snekguy
2023-07-14 03:44:49 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Private sims?” Big reveal time! Please be careful not to post any spoilers.
Snekguy
2023-07-13 04:58:14 +0000 UTC2200 word update, new content at ‘Sunlight spilled in through the open windows’
Snekguy
2023-07-12 03:42:44 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I want to feel that heat inside me,”
Snekguy
2023-07-11 05:36:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘She lay down on his chest’
Snekguy
2023-07-09 03:48:22 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “You lied when you told me that you were no poet,”
Snekguy
2023-07-08 02:41:49 +0000 UTC2300 word update, new content at “You don’t owe me anything,”
Snekguy
2023-07-07 00:19:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘He kept it up for a few minutes more’
Snekguy
2023-07-06 02:18:27 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Ingest?”
Snekguy
2023-07-05 01:29:06 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “There are other things that we can do while we wait,”
Snekguy
2023-07-03 23:44:34 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘I dunno what you’re doing down there’
Snekguy
2023-07-02 02:38:41 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘She had found a steady pace’
Snekguy
2023-07-01 05:37:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Compatible?”
Snekguy
2023-06-30 03:57:01 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They chatted as they ate'
Snekguy
2023-06-29 05:10:33 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “So, what can you tell me about this place we’re going?”
Snekguy
2023-06-28 04:08:05 +0000 UTCSomething tells me Davids unknown contact isn't being entirely truthful with him either.
ElephantTalk
2023-06-27 05:19:41 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “The distraction is very welcome,”
Snekguy
2023-06-27 01:54:27 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “It had better be a fucking good plan,”
Snekguy
2023-06-25 05:04:20 +0000 UTCDescribing David as a "90s kid" got a chuckle I gotta admit
The Glimmering Warlock
2023-06-24 14:50:30 +0000 UTC2200 word update, new content at 'Cool water poured over David’s head'
Snekguy
2023-06-24 05:56:44 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Your suit will fill with water if I unzip it any further,”
Snekguy
2023-06-23 02:46:36 +0000 UTCOkay sweet. Will definitely give them a read. Hope to see more of this development of a story or two in the future. Have a good night
Grainger
2023-06-22 02:49:01 +0000 UTCHi Grainger, thank you for the support! Indeed the story Worlds Apart 2 is all about that subject and features it very heavily, so I recommend reading that one (and WA1) if you're interested.
Snekguy
2023-06-22 02:46:48 +0000 UTC2400 word update, new content at “Still, it must be nice.”
Snekguy
2023-06-22 02:43:47 +0000 UTCHey cool artwork. I was curious to ask if out of all your story’s you have made does the women ever get pregnant? I am relatively new and have only read longhunter, conjunction, and am workin on heart of the mountain. I just like the idea of human and non humans having children. Have a good day
Grainger
2023-06-21 23:07:04 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Perfection quickly becomes boring,”
Snekguy
2023-06-21 04:29:52 +0000 UTC2200 word update, new content at “We’re not going back to the city?”
Snekguy
2023-06-20 02:34:45 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'David dared to move a hand to her torso'
Snekguy
2023-06-18 04:23:27 +0000 UTC2300 word update, new content at “You are red again,”
Snekguy
2023-06-17 03:27:54 +0000 UTCI am only now noticing the similarities between the relationship of Mountain & Snow and Selkie & David, beging infatuated with another bound to an environment they that is hostile to them. Hopefully they have a happier ending.
ElephantTalk
2023-06-16 06:59:05 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He suddenly became aware of the sound'
Snekguy
2023-06-16 04:36:14 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “You are trying to teach it human ethics,”
Snekguy
2023-06-15 05:23:23 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Alright, time to get to work,”
Snekguy
2023-06-14 04:22:29 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Not a pillow – an egg sack.”
Snekguy
2023-06-13 05:38:15 +0000 UTCWonderful
ElephantTalk
2023-06-12 15:32:40 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “The Administrator will be angry if we arrive late!”
Snekguy
2023-06-11 03:40:53 +0000 UTC1500 word update, new content at “How old are these?” Little short today because I've been working on art stuff.
Snekguy
2023-06-10 05:52:51 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “You seem tired,”
Snekguy
2023-06-09 04:27:11 +0000 UTCSeeing all the time and hard work you're doing is amazing, looking forward to reading
Giggles fun time
2023-06-08 21:57:39 +0000 UTCExcited to see this conspiracy unfold
ElephantTalk
2023-06-08 18:29:57 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Something didn’t add up.'
Snekguy
2023-06-08 04:53:29 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “It’s nice,”
Snekguy
2023-06-07 03:47:41 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “How about we have our game up in the habitat?”
Snekguy
2023-06-06 05:31:30 +0000 UTCThe interactions between Selkie and Flower are extremely endearing, and seeing Selkie slowly come out of her proverbial shell around David has been a treat so far
ElephantTalk
2023-06-04 16:41:55 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'David pulled himself out of the tunnel'
Snekguy
2023-06-04 04:38:19 +0000 UTC“underwater tentacle cuddles”, as a concept, sounds like a pleasant experience. It would also make for an interesting band name.
estaenlasombra
2023-06-03 10:23:56 +0000 UTC2700 word update, new content at “We have to gain its trust,”
Snekguy
2023-06-03 04:55:39 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “How did you know that?” I’m not wholly satisfied with the section about fallacies and paradoxes. They’re extremely complex, and I ran out of time, so I may go back and add to/iterate on those.
Snekguy
2023-06-02 05:26:05 +0000 UTCMan what a cliffhanger, I had a feeling things had been going too smoothly for David.
ElephantTalk
2023-06-01 04:32:13 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘The view shifted to show what looked like a chain of islands’
Snekguy
2023-06-01 03:15:24 +0000 UTCThe cook having to dress like they’re working a forge, when it’s only a bonfire, is an awesome detail
Saro13
2023-05-31 12:04:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “This arrangement has been taxing on both of us,”
Snekguy
2023-05-31 05:15:14 +0000 UTCWonderful work, flustered Selkie is pretty adorable
ElephantTalk
2023-05-30 08:30:54 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at “Do not spoil the scene!”
Snekguy
2023-05-30 02:36:46 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘From the shimmering water ahead’
Snekguy
2023-05-28 02:50:52 +0000 UTCHad to do some audiobook-related work today and ran out of time to complete the update, unfortunately. Good news is it's coming along very nicely and I should have some cool teasers for you guys to check out soon.
Snekguy
2023-05-27 04:20:35 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'I’ve been staying with you for the better part of three days'
Snekguy
2023-05-26 03:14:41 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'David returned to find Selkie hunched over her terminal.'
Snekguy
2023-05-25 01:45:44 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Do you speak Krell?”
Snekguy
2023-05-24 02:47:48 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘It was a lot of information to absorb all at once.’
Snekguy
2023-05-23 00:53:12 +0000 UTCVery excited to see the intricacies and oddities of Broker society!
ElephantTalk
2023-05-21 06:56:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘Not sure if he wanted to pry any further’
Snekguy
2023-05-21 02:07:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Public displays of emotion are discouraged,”
Snekguy
2023-05-20 05:57:22 +0000 UTC1500 word update, I was a little busy with art stuff today. New content at “I aim to please.”
Snekguy
2023-05-19 05:21:38 +0000 UTC4000 word update, new content at “I have ordered food,”
Snekguy
2023-05-18 02:33:48 +0000 UTC1500 word update, I was a little busy today. New content at “Then, let us continue.”
Snekguy
2023-05-17 05:27:53 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I am willing to excuse your alien eccentricities if your efforts bear fruit,” Just a heads up, Weaver's dialogue is fucking with the HTML formatting on the page, which is oddly meta, so I'm working on fixing the spacing. Shouldn't impact readability a great deal.
Snekguy
2023-05-16 04:46:44 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “How should we respond?”
Snekguy
2023-05-14 03:46:02 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I’ll try to keep it that way,”
Snekguy
2023-05-13 04:18:26 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at ‘After glancing warily’
Snekguy
2023-05-12 03:44:29 +0000 UTCI've had a pretty bad flu for the last couple of days and I slept for most of today, so I'll pick it back up tomorrow.
Snekguy
2023-05-11 00:25:05 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Indeed.”
Snekguy
2023-05-10 04:35:20 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I had no idea,”
Snekguy
2023-05-09 02:23:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “How old are you?”
Snekguy
2023-05-07 04:36:41 +0000 UTC1600 word update, new content at 'Selkie opened her mouth' The update is a little shy of the mark today because I lost several hours to developing a new timekeeping system and mythology for the Brokers. It required an unpleasant amount of math.
Snekguy
2023-05-06 04:10:16 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Are you really going to have a panic attack' The initial dinner scene in the apartment was a bit of a lore dump, so I moved the section about the Broker government and how it functions to later in the story to improve the pacing, and I replaced it with a short conversation about housing. If you see that part repeating in this update, you're not crazy, and if you'd like to read the new section that was added in, you can go to “Not bad at all,”
Snekguy
2023-05-05 00:32:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Okay, this is getting interesting,”
Snekguy
2023-05-04 04:28:21 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “What do you propose we do first?”
Snekguy
2023-05-03 02:05:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Too valuable to just whack with a sledgehammer.”
Snekguy
2023-05-02 04:14:49 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at ‘Sensing that she might finally’
Snekguy
2023-04-29 23:58:00 +0000 UTC1500 word update, new content at “I’m guessing that you own one of these PMCs?” Ran into a bit of an issue today and had to rework some things, but we should be good.
Snekguy
2023-04-29 05:40:46 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Before they could approach'
Snekguy
2023-04-28 05:06:35 +0000 UTC2200 word update, new content at “A submersible,”
Snekguy
2023-04-27 03:51:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She popped one of the seeds into her mouth'
Snekguy
2023-04-26 02:12:24 +0000 UTC2100 word update, new content at ‘She passed the open container back to him’
Snekguy
2023-04-25 02:42:37 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Indeed,”
Snekguy
2023-04-23 02:59:30 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at ‘The Broker began to swim up the shaft’
Snekguy
2023-04-22 04:23:57 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “The program is my responsibility,”
Snekguy
2023-04-21 02:40:19 +0000 UTC2300 word update, new content at “They sound important.”
Snekguy
2023-04-20 03:30:53 +0000 UTCAll of these matte-white walls remind me of the Kaminoans, the cloning aliens from the second Star Wars prequel. The had similarly blank white walls in the “visible” spectrum of light. However, they could see into the UV spectrum, and all of these blank white walls were actually extensively decorated in UV-visible paints that human sight simply can’t see
Saro13
2023-04-19 11:15:22 +0000 UTC2200 word update, new content at “You must carry your luggage from here,”
Snekguy
2023-04-19 03:18:06 +0000 UTC2800 word update, new content at “All will be explained soon,”
Snekguy
2023-04-18 04:20:20 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at 'As they neared the ocean'
Snekguy
2023-04-16 01:46:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'David cursed under his breath again'
Snekguy
2023-04-15 01:31:43 +0000 UTCYesssssss, now it’s time to force myself NOT to constantly update my feed for this story,and give it a few days to build up. I read to fast and you make the stories too good.
Indexo's Vault
2023-04-14 13:03:33 +0000 UTC
