Friendly Competition - Remastered
Added 2019-06-02 21:52:36 +0000 UTChttps://pastebin.com/HsLMqTi6
Here are the first 7000 words of Friendly Competition, extensively edited and expanded upon, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 2. This story was in a far worse state than I initially assumed, so I'll be doing a lot of rewrites to bring it up to speed. It's still a very short story, so it shouldn't take more than a few days. The cover is ready to go, so I'll be releasing the Retail Ebook once it's finished.
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Finished! The original post has been updated with free versions of the Ebook, and the Retail version is on the way.
Snekguy
2019-06-05 19:42:43 +0000 UTCAnother 5000 words, from 'She raised his hands' to 'He raised his hands' (weird coincidence lol)
Snekguy
2019-06-04 22:23:29 +0000 UTCAnother 5000 words edited, from Chapter 2, to 'She raised his hands above his head'
Snekguy
2019-06-04 00:00:08 +0000 UTCNice. Friendly Competition always deserved more love than it should. I mean one Borealan is awesome but two......there is no way you can get away from that. :)
CMed
2019-06-03 00:28:43 +0000 UTC
