Outpost Remastered
Added 2019-01-02 22:42:08 +0000 UTCHere's Chapter 1 of 'Outpost', a little under 15,000 words. This is another one that's going to take a lot of work, but I've been able to make some very substantial edits. I may also be changing the Hetero version to include more scenes with Runt.
Hetero: https://pastebin.com/QvQvyKfb
Bisexual: https://pastebin.com/45YK5CnP
Comments
Yay! This is one of my favorite of your stories so looking forward to it!
Sharktogonapus
2019-01-09 02:59:55 +0000 UTC10,000 words for both versions today, from Chapter 8 to Chapter 10. I'm hoping to have it finished tomorrow.
Snekguy
2019-01-08 22:39:34 +0000 UTC10,000 words for the Bi version today, and 6000 for the Hetero version, with significant rewrites to the Osha and Zagza scenes. From 'Three giant pairs of hands grasped at him as he came into range' to Chapter 8.
Snekguy
2019-01-07 23:43:05 +0000 UTC4000 words today to both versions, I went a little too HAM yesterday so I had a semi-day off. From Chapter 7 to 'what did it matter if he surrendered to the pleasure?'.
Snekguy
2019-01-06 23:03:33 +0000 UTCIt's really cool that you are going back to work on Outpost to rework runt or femrunt (Shrimp).
CMed
2019-01-05 23:41:30 +0000 UTCOkay, today we have: -Bi version: 4500 words of brand new content with Runt, starting from 'Schaffer achieved some level of sleep' and ending at Chapter 7. -Hetero version: An entirely new chapter with 6500 words of new content for femRunt, along with a 20,000 words update that starts at 'Zagza and his cohorts returned not long after' and ends at Chapter 7.
Snekguy
2019-01-05 23:02:57 +0000 UTCWhile I don't personally read the Bi stories myself (no appeal), I do appreciate the amount of effort that goes into writing two versions of the stories, so that people who are interested in that can read them if they prefer. Also, I have to admit I got a chuckle out of the phrase "I've made the Bi version a little more gay", mostly because I can still remember when "gay" was used by kids to almost exclusively mean "lame". Good to see that it's done a complete 180° in at least some cases.
cittran genericlastname
2019-01-05 04:50:42 +0000 UTCThanks for the catch! That's actually beyond the point that I've edited to so far, I'll be tackling that when I get there.
Snekguy
2019-01-04 23:34:23 +0000 UTC15,000 word update, just to the Bi version today. From 'Zagza and his cohorts returned not long after' to 'he doubted that sleep would come easily.' I've made the Bi version a little more gay with some more gratuitous descriptions, and I'll be adding in an all-new femRunt scene to the Hetero version tomorrow, which is why that's been delayed a little.
Snekguy
2019-01-04 23:30:16 +0000 UTCRunt trailed after Schaffer, seemingly unsure of himself in this new environment. at 646 here is a he/she typo.
rocks217
2019-01-04 23:14:50 +0000 UTCOkay, we have another 15,000 words today. I messed up yesterday and edited chapters 1 and 2, not just 1. So if you begin today from Chapter 3, and end at 'The sooner he got out of here, the better.' then you'll be all caught up. I've also begun to change Runt's gender in the Hetero version, please let me know if you see any rogue pronouns!
Snekguy
2019-01-04 00:56:51 +0000 UTCPossibly in Outpost 3. I've not decided what the plot for that one will be yet.
Snekguy
2019-01-03 16:42:23 +0000 UTCThanks for the catch, I'll clean that up when I update today.
Snekguy
2019-01-03 16:42:00 +0000 UTCchapter 2 is repeating a part of chapter 1 btw
rocks217
2019-01-03 16:22:47 +0000 UTCWill we ever get some backstory on Scar?
Terminal_Boy
2019-01-03 09:37:58 +0000 UTCReally looking forward to this one this was the first one of your stories i ever read
Sharktogonapus
2019-01-03 03:21:41 +0000 UTCYeah that's what I would be changing. Shrimp is just Runt, but genderswapped. So ideally the the Hetero series will have a female Runt, and the Bi series will have a male one, rather than the Hetero series having a male Runt and a female Shrimp that materialized out of the aether one day.
Snekguy
2019-01-02 23:58:53 +0000 UTCI know they're just gender-swapped versions of the same character but any chance of Shrimp showing up in Outpost for the hetero version? It feels a bit weird to just have it as that for the sequel but she, as Shrimp, doesn't exist in the first.
Aurius
2019-01-02 23:22:36 +0000 UTC
