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Look Again

Hey everyone, I made a quiet update to the comic a while ago, I'm not certain how many people noticed, but depending on when you began reading the comic, LOG:01 may be slightly longer than when you looked at it. I added two pages since I moved on to LOG:02. The first smooths out the scene on the plane at the beginning, explaining why Getta doesn't freeze to death in frozen wastes. The second page addresses the complaint that you don't get to see what Bonnie discovered at the missing team's camp site. Both pages were done when I was already well into LOG:02 so the art is more reminiscent of the second chapter, but I think overall it makes the first chapter a better read. Recently I've been considering adding these to my art galleries, tho that would mess up the submission sequence. So, for now, they're exclusive to my site.

Look Again

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If I had the time, there's a lot I'd redo in LOG:01. I was still feeling things out at the time, including developing the look of the characters.

I'd love to go back and redraw most of the first chapter, and if I ever get a publisher for a print version I might! However, until then I'm trying to focus most of my efforts on pushing ahead, making future chapters better looking.

Oh wow! I hope you do that with the rest of the scene.

Johnathon Grosse


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