Chapter 24 of Jay and Carly!
Added 2019-11-14 22:07:05 +0000 UTCHope you enjoy guys. The interaction between Je
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I like the two combined, personally.
J B
2019-11-17 22:45:18 +0000 UTCI had a similar thought. Ultimately, I felt like the two subsections would have been too short plus the second one would have been almost entirely sex (which I've been trying to avoid). I could stretch both of them out a little but I'm not sure that makes it better... I don't know. I'll think about it. Curious what the rest of you think?
2019-11-17 21:24:35 +0000 UTCExcellent as always; That being said, I think maybe this one has too much going on for just one chapter? Maybe consider splitting into 2 chapters, with the cliffhanger right when Rebeccah calls Jay for help?
MisterSunshine1029
2019-11-17 06:55:04 +0000 UTC
