TSWWS Ch. 3 pg 4 Final
Added 2017-12-06 05:24:39 +0000 UTCYaaaay! Page 4 is in the bag! :)
As always, thoughts, critiques are most welcome, especially regarding dialogue.
Thinking I might work on some color stuff for a change next...
Comments
You got it! ;)
WereWorld
2017-12-06 21:05:42 +0000 UTCThe dialogue works real well to establish Ash as a rebel - the pot story, bad language, etc. I'm guessing you are setting her up as sort of an "Evil Ed" character.
Agent00Soul
2017-12-06 16:16:28 +0000 UTC
