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Loona vs Nima v1

Loona and Nima get zapped by 2 halves of a spell from a rogue tome. Nima loses her form, Loona gains more of it!

This is about the whole duration you see before you. I know 12 seconds seems rather short, but I just want it to be short and sweet <3

AUDIO HERE VVVVVVV

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zTz7f4ieDoYgqQsn3kg7KA_9g-t7WJL3/view?usp=sharing

Loona vs Nima v1

Comments

Same here. Giving my two cents, and no deal breaking. And definitely not trying to point fingers at anyone right here or now.

Mr. McTIM

Im just giving my two cents on him bringing up pacing in his animation. And even then its not a deal breaker because the animations are still top notch as well as superb sound effects

Jarrett Cox

Do what you feel is most comfortable for you. If you want it longer, than go ahead. It's your animation after all. And I do like a longer paced sequence for things like this. I'm just weary about some past encounters I've seen about animations before. Where other animation artists were frequently pestered about making their desired animation lengths even longer. When the length it was at was their choice, others kept bothering about it too much. In some cases, it did ruin the artists drive for making more animations. Though I've yet to see anything about that happen to you, from what I could gather.

Mr. McTIM

Eh, the hissing is a little loud. But other than that, yes, I'm super super happy with it. Glad you are too! <3 <3 <3

Bif

Love how the SFX and voiced are implemented. ^^

Keiros

I would recommend that cause there some animations where i wish there was a bit of build up to

Jarrett Cox

Doesn't feel rushed? I'm glad you say so~ I'm still worried if I could pace it a little better and give each scene more time to sink in.

Bif

And the sound also carries my motivation to finish it~ lol

Bif

Between every big Loona animation, is a bunch of short ones~

Bif

Thanks! More to come ^w^

Bif

Boy, for only twelve seconds, there sure is a lot going on within it. And though it's fast, it doesn't feel rushed either. The sound effects and the voices are very well-paced too. It makes me more anxious to see how well they fit into the animation. Especially knowing how smooth you make the flow of the animations.

Mr. McTIM

The sound effects alone carry the short run time

Jarrett Cox

Good little short animation Bif, it looks like a good on can’t wait for the end result

D3v1ant_Us3r

Maybe a reverse effect for Nima perhaps? Only time will tell

Pingpongballz

She's a bg character I borrowed. I gave her a name and everything lol Now she's important

Bif

That's exactly where Loona lives at all times~

Bif

VERY quickly. Mayhaps I should make a part 2? We'll see

Bif

She's background hellhound from the show. She didn't have a name or voice before, so I gave her one ^^

Bif

You know it~ It's always that damn book, and yet, I get the feeling the Hellhounds started it~

Bif

Really fun idea looking forward to this!

BigPen

Nima never heard of but this is interesting

Angel Melendez

hell yeah, squish city

tubby squirrel lover

Lol I like the scenario. It's kinda funny how it quickly escalated

Pingpongballz

Where is Nina from?

Gnarly

12 seconds of bliss. Also I hope that rouge spell or so came from that book Loona is always dealing with.

Somecoolguy99


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