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[Comic] A Star Is Porn Page 02 - Revised Sketch

Right after uploading the sketch of the second page, I had an idea of putting in Nights reaction to Ricks comic, instead of showing a boring door. Let me know which version you guys like better! :3

[Comic] A Star Is Porn Page 02 - Revised Sketch

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Sorry I keep getting distracted by Rick and Night's bulges :/. And here we have maybe the one thing I'd have made a point about with your previous version. That 'training' jab just begs a reaction from Night, so I'm very glad you included it here. On the other hand, that's two pages with a Night reaction face so you might want to use that more sparingly. It's a lovely reference though, no complaints there. Also I love the use of pron this early in the comic, I did not expect it, but it's awesome. Let's get the viewers a taste of what's to come. I'd say this version is funnier, even if it does feel a bit the same as page one. And I really hope the door gets an appearance on page three, 'cause I really liked it! "kitty" :3

Siber

Oh hey it's my favorite meme xD

Sebin

He got Night there 🤣

Howlrunner

Definitely better to get night making that face

Vulan Washburne


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