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Chapter 82 - Hunted

Mirian tried to figure out what in the Gods’ names had just happened. She’d won. She’d finally fucking won. The Divir moon had stayed in the sky another day and then—

Then Nicolus had shot her.

Only, it hadn’t been Nicolus. But then, who in the five hells had it been?

“Mirian? You okay?” came Lily’s voice.

“No,” Mirian said with a sigh. Dying was always something of a shock. When she woke up at the beginning of the cycle, she almost always made some sort of noise that her roommate picked up on.

She looked around her dorm room. Same as it ever was. She picked up her spellbook, and with a wave of her hand, she telekinetically shut off the water heater on the top floor, then used the tin under her bed as fodder for a metal plug, heating the metal until it was soft, then funneled it up through the holes until she sensed it was by the roof. Then she shaped the tin and rapidly displaced the heat so there was a nice tile there. The rest could wait until Archmage Luspire’s scribes updated her spellbook with shape wood.

Lily stared at her. “Since when can you do that?” she said, mouth agape.

“Time loop,” Mirian said, quickly dressing into her Torrviol Academy uniform. “I’ll explain later. I have to go stop a bunch of spies and then… look, I’m not crazy. I’ll talk to you later. Good luck on your exams!” It won’t matter in the end, she mentally added, and then rushed out the door.

***

Normally, she killed the first spy by pulling him off the roof, then stopped the second one as he broke into the Myrvite Studies building, then stopped the third spy four days later as he attempted to ambush and kill Professor Jei in the Underground. 

As she walked with Jei through the Torrviol Underground, Mirian gave her the usual explanation. “It’s just the one spy, and he only has the one lightning wand. Once he’s captured, the spies go into hiding, and I work with Magistrate Ada to bring about their mass arrest.” She paused outside the secret passage and lowered her voice. “Ready?”

Jei nodded.

Mirian cast a grounding ward on both of them, then opened the door. Jei strode forward while Mirian crept around to the side as she usually did, waiting for the spy Idras to launch his desperate ambush.

She only had a moment’s warning that something was wrong. She felt the tingle of arcane energy building up behind her, and then the fire ray seared through her back.

The now familiar feeling of lethal pain ran through her, and she fought through it to look around. As she did, she saw more spells flash around her. She saw the silhouettes of at least six people, hoods covering their heads. Fire and force spells went off all around the room, directed at Jei, who deflected the flame spells, but wasn’t able to stop a force slash from taking off her arm. As her mentor collapsed to the ground screaming, a cloaked figure approached her, gun raised. A spell had distorted his voice, but she could still hear the accent. “Just give up,” he said, and shot her.

***

Mirian sat up from her bed. In all her time loops, nothing like that had happened. Nothing. She was trembling, she realized, with fresh adrenaline—and fear. What was happening? What had changed?

The answer was starting to tickle the back of her mind. A thought she’d tried to dismiss as foolish. Something she didn’t want to be true because it would change everything, and she didn’t want to change everything. Everything had been going so well! She’d stopped the bloody Akanans, brought their airships down from the sky, and shattered their army. She’d saved the Divine Monument. She’d saved Torrviol!

It can’t be, she thought.

Lily said something as she dressed, and Mirian didn’t remember what she said in reply. She was too focused on what she needed to do.

She made sure the two first spies were dead and jailed respectively on the first day. She recruited Nicolus to her cause that evening, but this time, the next day she handed Sire Nurea a list of the spies to start keeping an eye on before they were arrested. “And if you have any contacts down south, I need to know how the Persaman revolt near the border is going.”

“There’s a Persaman revolt near the border on top of all that stuff you just told us?” Nicolus said.

“Yeah. And if you don’t have a trusted source, a newspaper will do. Though I never really did follow up on what you know about the Syndicates.”

Nurea and Nicolus looked at each other. Nurea raised an eyebrow. Her ward said, “I didn’t tell her about it.”

“Not in this timeline, anyways,” Mirian confirmed. Actually, it had been Nurea who’d let that nugget slip.

Then Mirian worked on a new schedule for Jei. Even with preparation, she wasn’t stopping six people who had spells and firearms—not with just the two of them. Later in the cycle, she’d have more people who would believe her about the time loop, but it was still too early. Professor Torres, for example, usually only really started believing her when all the spies were rounded up.

All her previous planning had been in service of winning the Battle of Torrviol. She hadn’t planned for—whatever this was.

As to what this was, she was still hoping she was wrong.

On the 5th of Solem, Mirian and Jei avoided the Underground entirely.

***

Mirian didn’t wake up on the 6th of Solem. She woke up on the 1st again, disoriented. She looked over to Lily, then up and the ceiling. I already fixed the ceiling leak. That’s the first thing I do, she thought, and then she realized, fuck, someone killed me in the night.

That was disturbing as hell. She hadn’t even heard anyone. And that meant…

Mirian didn’t want to think about it.

She rushed to kill the first spy, then spent a great deal of time pacing about in the garden outside the Myrvite Studies building thinking about what she needed to do.

She recruited Nicolus and Jei again, but this time, she went to Valen.

“What are you doing here?” Valen said with her usual phony disgust.

Mirian pushed her up against the wall and aggressively kissed her, then as Valen stood there, dazed, Mirian said, “There’s more where that came from, but I need your help.”

Valen tried to act casual, like her breath hadn’t just been taken away. “Yeah? What makes you think I want you hanging around me?”

Mirian locked eyes with Valen, then whispered, “I know how to make you squirm.”

The other girl let out an entirely undignified noise, then breathed, “Since when did you…”

“Time loop,” she replied, backing away from her. “Only there’s a problem. New development. I’m being… hunted. My room’s not going to be safe to sleep in anymore. I don’t know how soon he can find me, but I’m not taking any chances this time.” She looked over at the empty bed and said, “So I’m going to sleep in your room.”

Valen made a face. “You’re going to sleep one building over?”

“In disguise,” Mirian added on. “I’m a bit less of a moron than I used to be. Please don’t lecture me on spycraft, I’ve already heard it all.”

“Yeah? Let’s see it.”

Mirian opened up her spellbook and flipped to the major disguise spell she’d just finished scribing earlier in the day. Then she channeled, weaving the spell with her eyes closed as she visualized the light construct she was making and the new sound she wanted her voice to make. Magic was all horrendously complicated, and only the years of practice made it easy for her.

“Call me… Vera,” she said, voice now higher. The illusion she’d cast had a lot of small changes, and was mostly based on the Akanan disguise she’d practiced. Her skin was paler, her hair dirty blond instead of black, and her eyes faint blue instead of their usual gray. She’d also changed the structure of her face.

Valen looked her over. “Well done,” she said. “Vera,” she repeated. “And you have… a story to go with her?”

“Not really. I came up with it a few hours ago. I can be your cousin who’s visiting. Or a transfer student.”

Valen tapped her chin. “No one would believe ‘cousin.’ Transfer student, then. From…?”

“Westshire,” Mirian said. At Valen’s skeptical look, she added, “It’s a real city in Akana Praediar, and the tutor I learned Eskanar from told me a bit about it. And none of the spies skulking around Torrviol have been there.”

“Since when do you speak…? Prove it. I want to hear it.”

In Eskanar she said, “You’re a terrible little goblin-person but I’m glad I get to see you again. I don’t want you to die in battle, I want you to live. Even if you are a pain sometimes.”

Valen nodded thoughtfully. “Well, that was probably Eskanar. If you said ‘hello, my name is Vera’ really slowly I would understand it.”

Mirian smiled and held out her hand. “We have a deal, then?”

Valen took her hand. “Welcome to the Torrviol Academy, Vera,” she said. Then, licking her lips, she said, “Now, we do roommates a bit differently over here in Baracuel…”

Mirian ran a fingernail around Valen’s chin, then brought it up so it rested on her lips. “Oh, do we?” she said, smirking.

***

The problem with relying on a major illusion spell was it was mana intensive. Mirian’s auric mana had grown substantially in the past four years, as had her spell power and efficiency, but there was simply no way she could maintain it all day. She settled on maintaining the spell any time she was moving out in public, then let it drop when she was inside a classroom or back in the dorm. She had a newfound respect for Professor Marva. She wasn’t sure how the illusion teacher managed to maintain complex illusions for multiple hours, especially since she knew they didn’t have enough spell power to use a spell like levitation for any length of time. Were they just that specialized? They obviously still had a lot to teach Mirian.

Lily wasn’t happy that she’d moved out, nor was she happy with Mirian’s refusal to tell her any of the details. Mirian didn’t even want to explain that it was for Lily’s protection. Whoever was hunting her had found her dorm room; they obviously knew that Lily was her roommate, and she didn’t want to give them any reason to target her.

 Since she was being hunted, she decided to lay low after the first two spies were dead and captured and wait for Nicolus to get back to her about what was going on in the south. She decided she could still probably go down into the catacombs and get the wand of levitation. She could, by now, kill the bog lion that nested down there on her own, she just needed a nice incineration ray spell in her book or something equivalent.

Mirian headed through the secret passage in Bainrose Castle. As she rounded the first corner in the catacomb, she felt the sensation of arcane energy spiking as a ward triggered—

***

“FUCK!” Mirian said, sitting up from her bed.

“Mirian? You okay?” Lily said groggily.

“No! Dammit! Five bloody hells!” She tore off the covers and paced around the room. “He set a trap. He knew! What does he know? How does he know? How long… when… dammit!”

“Are… did you have a bad dream?”

Mirian let out a breath of air like she was a steam engine. “Yeah, that must have been it. I’ll tell you about it later,” she said, and was still buttoning up her uniform’s coat as she stormed out of the room.

This time, she didn’t kill the first spy, and didn’t capture the second one. She’d lived long enough to see that someone had snuck Ayland out of prison anyways. She did warn Jei about the ambush, and did get Nurea to start investigating the spies, but she quickly found a problem: Nicolus and Nurea were being watched. Nurea could find several of the spies easily because they were observing her. They didn’t seem to care she knew it, either. It was nearly impossible to track their operation under those circumstances. Valen also noticed she was being watched as she tried to get more information from her network of rumormongers, which meant Mirian had to be more careful about her disguise. That also made meeting up with Nicolus that much harder, and she found that once Nicolus started meeting with Xipuatl, the spies marked him to watch too. Overnight, the entire network was pointing itself at her and her allies.

Without any sort of way to get Captain Mandez in jail for treason early on, he’d have no trouble breaking his agents out of the town jail either. The problem was also that these changes were happening extremely early in the cycle. They started following Sire Nurea by the 5th of Solem.

So Mirian went to class like a good student, and relied on the fact that the spies didn’t actually have anyone in the student body or among the professors.

Class was interminably boring. She’d gone from getting tutored by Archmage Luspire himself to—this. Sixth-year basics. And they were basics, she understood now. At least Viridian’s lecture would still change each day, though she felt bad that the spies were back to killing all the myrvites in the Studies building again.

On the 8th of Solem, Nicolus slipped her a newspaper on his way to go drink with his buddies to celebrate the quarter ending. It was fresh from the presses of the second capital city, Alkazaria. 

She read it back in Valen’s room. The headline read, “Catastrophic Defeat! Perfidious Persamans Ambush Army and Overrun Border Forts! Alkazaria Could Be Next!”

The article itself didn’t have any of the information someone actually planning a battle might find useful, but it was clear what had happened: The Baracuel armies by Rambalda had been ambushed and routed. Suddenly, the rebel group Dawn’s Peace had gone from being an ineffectual guerrilla group that was easily put down and nearly annihilated to an invincible army that seemed to know the Baracuel army’s every move, every weakness, and every secret.

Almost like someone leading them had foreknowledge.

Mirian crumpled up the newspaper and said, “Gods’ blood,” then stared at the wall, though her eyes didn’t see it.

 The story was so drastically different than it had been so many cycles that there was no denying it.

There were other time travelers in this loop with her. How many, she had no idea.

And at least one of them wanted her out of the picture.

Comments

It's the 12 worshippers in her dream. That's why people assume

Andrew Logan

Not if your opponent also has infinite tries...

BeepBoop

Dunno. I guess my sense is that the new scenario happened too fast. I felt like I could have used a breather or some kind of ‘payoff’ following the successful finish of the battle & prevention of the apocalypse.

Ez Abc

There being another looper was foreshadowed fairly consistently throughout the first 70 chapters via plot hints, and extremely heavily in the most recent set of chapters, "She was kneeling in front of the statue of the Ominian again... but unlike all the other times, she wasn’t alone. Some four dozen others knelt, their faces and bodies obscured by the deep folds of robes and cowls" (ch 80)., When I read that scene, I took it as the author straight up telling us there are multiple loopers. If you are surprised by this "twist", you just haven't been paying attention while reading or have been skipping chapters

Josh Lu

Hmm, the most important question is, how far apart does their loop start, and what happens when the other dies? I actually don't see the benefit of killing her; he can only get her out of the picture by somehow getting her out of the time loop. If he is still in the same loop when she is killed, it would just mean she has infinite loops to win until she does, and he dies and can also start looping again, ad infinitum... if his trigger is not death, just killing him once is enough until she is killed again. And you can do these speculations endlessly because there are just too many variables.

Tetsuki

... why do people assume that there must be *several* other time loopers besides Mirian? Just because there are several attackers now, that doesn't mean they're all time loopers. It could be that there is only one other person who does also loop, and the multiple attackers are there simply because they listened to that one person. We also don't know whether or not the other time looper(s) have been looping just as long as Mirian, or if they only started looping now. I'd guess there probably is more than one deity who can send people back in time.

Branwen Cielocanto

1. you're still making assumptions here and stating them like facts. just because they're hunting Marian now doesnt mean they want to destroy the world. they could have literally any other motivation and they just don't want other time looper around to mess with events. presumably Miriam will go on to do much more disruptive things worldwide as she gets stronger and literally anything she changes on a broad scope would affect the other time loopers eventually.

Luna

I think she should probably use a few runs running around and checking all the roofs for holes like hers. It is obviously related, so if everyone starts at the same point, she could find some loopers with that. Unless they can and will fix the holes quickly.

Olavi Kaukamieli

Infinite time and infinite tries probably leads to a success once at some point if there is literally any chance. :D

Olavi Kaukamieli

1. We don't know they are _trying_ to destroy the world. If they were, you'd think they already won, because they did it. If they keep succeeding, maybe they are actually trying to do something else? Like possibly trying to ascend to godhood in some way we don't know, probably related to complete understanding of magic. Maybe they don't care about the world as they are leaving it behind, or they think they'll have reached godhood in the real run.

Olavi Kaukamieli

1. the goal of the defence was the prevention of the destruction of the divine monument. If the person responsible for that is also in a time-loop they should notice that the destruction brings down the moon… After all this is the first successfull defence and the moon doesn‘t come down and only now is the other person hunting Mirian. 2. Yes she has a time-loop but that‘s no longer an exclusive advantage. When the opposition has the same it is questionable how she can leverage anything to her advantage. Her starting position is simply too powerless/ lacks influence and ressources. Don‘t missunderstand me, I look forward to how the author will navigate this situation. It‘s just that the deck seems to be pretty stacked against Mirian. I also like when storys have completed story arcs and this „end“ is not at all satisfying imho. 3. I wonder how that interacts…….

Jo

just chiming in to say that I enjoy this new development and look forward to what you do with it

Luna

I love the plot twist. The there were so many hints in the past and it finally feels like this big web of conspiracies is finally ready to be untangled. This mysterious faction which might plays both countries. The non-typical (hijacked?) Akanan spy cells. The Ominian "Dreams" which already pretty much told us that there are more people than Mirian. The necromancer who can manipulate the soul and these changes might be transmitted to the next repetition. The murdered government agent and the murderer is still completely unknown. The inconsistencies with the repeated timelines. Also two professors are sketchy as hell in my opinion, because they behave differently in each timeline. So many loose threads who finally need to be untangled by Mirian. This is definitely one of these books you have to read a second time and think "but of course. That was so obvious in hindsight!". I really like these kind of books. :-)

Exandra

1. we don't know the time looper is the one destroying the world. 2. she still has the time loop as one can see in this chapter. 3. probably the other time looper was unaware of her until she stopped the moon from falling.

Luna

I’ve really enjoyed the lack of enemy loopers in this story. Seeing Mirian use time travel to grow, explore, and solve mysteries was already complex enough; this new development just makes it so much more stressful and forces her to start rushing even more than before

Eyo

I don't know what you mean. A different voice, sure. But they were seen something they shouldn't and might not have thought it through. Is [Puppet] something presented earlier that I have no recollection of at all?

Olavi Kaukamieli

This looks interesting. Hopefully the stress from being hunted will help Miriam find a way to overcome it.

Theboy Inblue

But in the 4 odd years shes been in the loop she barely progressed. Now she will struggle to even survive a loop let alone study and progress

Rex Martin

she's still diligent, smart, and in a place stuffed to bursting with magical knowledge

George

At this point isn’t her only advantage (time loop) gone? Not sure how its possible that she can win now

Rex Martin

Assuming they are not just very incompetent, I can think of four possible explainations: 1: Her soul is protected so they can't. 2: They are religious, not a necromancer, and believe necromancy is unforgivable. 3: Killing her by mundane means has a chance of killing her for real somehow. 4: They have a win condition, and don't need to kill her, just stall her.

11037

While I don't agree that this development destroys the foundation of the story completly you have to see several problems with this development: 1. why would any timelooper try to destroy the world. After all, they would die too..... 2. Mirian starts at such a disadvantage that she needed the timeloop to even have a chance. If she doesn't have that how is she supposed to make progress? 3. why is she encountering this only now? There are probably more that I just don't think about of the top of my head.

Jo

You assume that other loopers are there to save the world, however we still don't know anything about the cause of the moon falling. It could very well be a group of time loopers blowing up different divine monuments. Everything we know about the collapse so far shows a well orchestrated and timed series of events, exactly like what Mirian does to the spies, except on larger scale. Mirian saw 47 cycles of the moon falling, then stopped it in 48th and immediately someone started hunting her. So far evidence is that Mirian found one of her main enemies.

CherMi

I think it was clear he was turned into a [Puppet].

lenkite

Did the battle in Persaman really change in previous loops ? I thought she just distinguished real information from the propaganda before. But yeah, if there are others looped in to save the world, then she really doesn't *have* to do anything. Freed From Responsibility, celebrate! She can just focus on her studies, capabilities and knowledge. Her workable purpose can shift to figuring out where her family is and ensure they are safe. No real need to win the battle in Torrviol. She is not a Baracuel noble and Baracuel nobility is just as corrupt as anywhere else - who cares about who wins power.

lenkite

I don't quite underdstand why she still trusts Nicolus. He should be a suspect for being the missing superspy. Maybe he wasn't all the time, but in the end of the winning loop he clearly was.

Olavi Kaukamieli

The big question is if she ever was the only looper. The changes to the battle in Persaman are being mentioned for quite a while. If you keep in mind how long she needed to get things started towards turning the battle of torrviol around it wouldn't be strange if they started at the same time or earlier then Miriam. I agree with some this seems like a strange/unfounded development, but I think that is largely due to the fact nothing is known about the time loop and she has no point to start with. Now that she knows there are others, maybe she has a chance to learn something if she can meet a friendly one.

Enthernal

So how did suddenly a bunch of other people get looped when she was the only one before ? Does the [Necromancer] have a soul/memory mark on her after killing her several times ? Or have other folks also been TRULY looped ? If there are other folks ALSO suddenly promoted to PRIMARY time loopers, then I see this as simply an impossible mission since she has no authority to change anything as a student and other folks have years/decades of actual preparation that does not get destroyed by the loop but only simply restored back to prime functioning. They can also leverage their greater knowledge, greater power and far more extensive authority better. She only has a month of action and even less when she can get immediately assassinated. Besides, if there are other loopers with MORE power and authority than her, then why do they want world destruction or the moon falling down ? They can convince or stop the Marshal and can easily solve the leyline issue and Mirian can simply retire from the story. Saving the world is NO LONGER her responsibility. Its now up-to the folks who have real authority and wealth to effect change. Does Mirian really care who is in charge ? Maybe she should spend a few loops keeping her head down and doing NOTHING to see what is the end result for those loops. The other powerful loopers will also quickly realize that destroying the [Divine Monument] causes the moon to fall and will take measures to solve it. As long as there is some incremental progress to ensuring the world doesn't end made by the other loopers, she doesn't have to *do* anything. Trying to have zero casualties for her friends and professors is now effectively impossible unless she can make herself the only looper again. She can just focus on her studies - maybe take new courses. Why bother with doing anything now that there is effectively a distributed responsibility amongst many powerful loopers ?

lenkite

The airship and the fact that she only seems to start seeing divergence 5-6 days in makes me suspect the other loopers don't start the loop nearby. At first I figured the other looper would be the necromancer, but if they were a necromancer why wouldn't they try to mess up Mirian's soul? For that matter it's odd that they don't try to arrange for that to happen even if they aren't necromancers.

Bremen

It's like we're reading different series. Why would it make Mirian's actions pointless? Before this, she never could interfere with the moon falling, but last loop she stopped it. So now that secret and suspicious organization that wants the moon to fall apparently takes actions against her. There's plenty of foreshadowing: small airship, massacre in the capital, drastic reaction to Nicolus'es letters to his uncle, something weird in Akanan's chain of command, the way everything is stacked against Mirian. Probably plenty more I'm forgetting now. There could be plenty of explanations why they actively interfer only now and who they are is for Mirian to find out. And honestly even if there wasn't any of foreshadowings, we're 80 chapters in and they're wonderful. If it's not enough to trust the author, I don't know what is.

CherMi

Thank you for the chapter. So there are several time loopers and apparently only Mirian works against Akanans. The times Mirian heard them, they had accent, so they're likely not local. This finally gives a theory about that small airship, it's likely used by one of the other time travelers. Personally I welcome this development. Mirian was fighting that war for 4 years, but mostly she relied on others and brute forced situations with time loop. Now this gives her a reason to become powerful herself, and not with half-measures like training for years, but desperately like going and fighting monsters.

CherMi

I disagree, I say let 'em cook, you have no right tel *tell* a writer what the *must* do with *their* story, if you think you can do better, go and write it, if you don't like it, stop reading. This is not constructive criticism.

Signspace

Ok I'm out. I thought the assassin was the double agent, not this. This completely shatters the premise the series was built on so far. And it's way too far into it to be doing that. Especially in such a drastic way. I mean it makes the entire series up to this part almost entirely pointless. You either need to retcon this and the fact that the moon doesn't fall in the last chapter, or go back and rewrite a ton to make it much more obvious what is going on so readers are not so blindsided. And even if you do the latter I'm still out because these types of stories don't work out as they can never live up to themselves in the end.

PlasmaticPi


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