Charity Case Ch7:Pg7 process & high res
Added 2021-02-02 16:56:14 +0000 UTCThe initial script and sketch were a lot more argumentative, but I felt like a toned down approach was more impactful-
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Julie: So don’t defend me, tell him he should kick me out. Teach me a lesson!
Andrew: You want to just throw the last two years away?
Julie throwing their hands out and looking down exasperated: YES
Andrew: Louise! Talk some sense into your son!
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I also *really* want to go back and edit the supermarket argument/phone call from chapters ago, because it feels so out of character now :')!
Comments
Thank you!!!
Malacandrax
2021-02-04 15:21:20 +0000 UTCI like the more restrained version!
Azou
2021-02-02 17:24:18 +0000 UTC
