Version 0.5
Added 2017-08-05 22:04:42 +0000 UTCHi, guys. First of all, I'd like to deeply apologize for the delay. I didn't want for things to take this long to do (I had to root out a ton of errors and crashes that appeared after updating Ren'Py to use the new UI and that ate up so much time e-e).
Still, the update is finally here. Here's what you guys can see with it.
- Day 8
- Two CGs.
This update is a little shorter than the last one, but then agan, the last update was quite a bit larger than the previous updates xD
I hope you guys enjoy this. Thanks a bunch :3
Windows & Linux / Mac
Comments
To be fair, I only proofread Day 8, I didn't mention anything before... I mean you were there as I was sloooooowly scanning for mistakes & pointing out oddities, so you alreaady know.
Vic Viper
2017-08-07 06:11:46 +0000 UTCSure. I actually had Vic proof-read for me before I released the update, but I guess there's only so much a single person can spot. Still, thanks a bunch ;3
Basket
2017-08-07 02:40:22 +0000 UTCThat means you get to see the new CGs <3 I honestly love the CGs so much xD
Basket
2017-08-07 02:39:23 +0000 UTCYou know I honestly don't mind starting over as it was so well written
MoreStuck
2017-08-07 02:30:47 +0000 UTCSo this was an interesting update, fun to get to know your classmates a bit more since your interactions have largely been with the three main characters till now. A little on the short side like you said, but had some humerus moments (most notably at the end heh). One issue which I can imagine you already have a plan for, is Akiyoshi needs an icon/portrait like the rest of the characters have when they talk, because with his sprite in that position his tail covers part of the text box, and occasionally obscures a few words. Starting over wasn't too bad though it did take a bit longer to get through to the new content, I did notice a small continuity error with the protagonist however, though I'll send you a direct message in regards to that. And as Vic already pointed out there are quite a few typos and spelling errors scattered throughout the novel, though most of them are the kinds of errors that wouldn't be readily apparent to someone who didn't have a native grasp of English with context syntax and tense, the most common one I noticed was using breath instead of breathe. So I'd say using a google doc wouldn't be a bad choice, or if you'd prefer a more hands on approach I'd be willing to offer some assistance (I'm sure some others would as well).
Richard
2017-08-07 01:25:34 +0000 UTCFor those who might have gotten a headache at the idea of starting from the beginning (cause all saves have been erased), don't forget there's a "skip all" option. <a href="https://i11.servimg.com/u/f11/12/86/06/41/skip_a10.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i11.servimg.com/u/f11/12/86/06/41/skip_a10.jpg</a> Got to test the update before the release and spellcheck a bit, though again, English is my second language as well, so if you guys find more feel free to report in your comment. I think we should make a Google Docs page where everyone can report mistakes and edit at their own leisure. Just gotta say... that I might have to change the protagonist's name on my end *wink wink*.
Vic Viper
2017-08-06 07:22:34 +0000 UTC
