Naruto Hokage (English) (Español)
Added 2017-01-22 21:53:00 +0000 UTC
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pag 70 to 88 END
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CaseOPictures
2017-08-05 12:13:02 +0000 UTCI didn't throw the first insult but the moment u mention an idiot like trump and told me to join him was already an insult, but i will not play your little childish remarks because Patreon is not the site for that and the author of this story doesn't need pointless arguments from readers like you and me, I am not a writer im a reader my opinions are my own, you got a problem with that, BITE ME !
BigBallENRGY
2017-01-23 18:35:37 +0000 UTCoh so me stating whether something went good or bad makes me a liberal. how cute you want make this about politics. A and B grades where I am at 3.0 GPA. so let's talk about you. do you do anything? do you do fanfics or fan comics? do you ever take criticism or reviews to heart? do you pay attention to plot holes or if something doesn't sit well cause I don't think you do. you're not making an argument on the good or bad points on this story. if you all you got is insults then you don't have the right to make a review. best you can do is say you like it but that's it.
Freddy Gutierrez
2017-01-23 16:53:42 +0000 UTCI dont think the people here are saying that his material is bad, its great which is why were here. But the ending of the story just seemed weird in my opinion, there couldve been so many directions that it couldve went, like sakura doing something absurd, after witnessing what sasuke did to hinata. The idea of this manga was just purely sexual and one of the best series(good job btw) to end with them fighting, Just takes the theme away. Hope you continue this series though felsala, keep up the great work.
Plink
2017-01-23 08:20:23 +0000 UTCOh great thats all we need a freakin Hillary liberal cry baby who wasted so much time stating unimportant facts on situations I mean come on its just a story, for Christ sake I can tell you aren't getting good grades in college.
BigBallENRGY
2017-01-23 06:57:27 +0000 UTCno one is misunderstanding the end. the ending you put on there is just so god damned forced and barely at what was this chapter 5 and you barely reached a middle point in this could've been good or really bad. if you have trouble making plot structure or something then you need to either take more classes or ask someone to be in charge of the story writing for you and you draw it out. a comic whether official or fan made has to keep it's structure from the art style to plot structure of the story intact that if one or the other fails you make the whole project into a failure. before you go around claiming to do other projects you need to take time to consider your short comings and what you did wrong here then assess them and learn where you need to improve at. from my perspective your main problem is that you barely tap into a plot structure. when you started this one I'll be honest you really just rushed into the smut without trying to settle the reader into it but you made a small bit of improvement over the course of it and this chapter felt like this would be the point where you show your fans where your mettle is at. needless to say you failed when you tripped at the forced ending here. so take the time to take a break and look over your work and see what you can do to improve your weaknesses. if you can't do story structure properly then you may need to stick to just single images. this is not to be mean but it's to give you an honest review on where you passed and where you failed at and how you need to improve.
Freddy Gutierrez
2017-01-23 06:50:32 +0000 UTCFOOL! if you can't even give an honest opinion on whether you did good or bad on something then you can't expect to grow or learn. you want people to give positive feedback no matter what then go hang out with trump and other people who prefer safe spaces. if Felsala does this whether as pass time or as a professional career especially in that case then you need to be able to accept you're gonna take heat if you make a bad choice for something, you're gonna get criticized, you may even get a insulted cause you may have botched up the end or the mid point of the plot that makes no sense to happen at all then how can one expect to improve as an artist. how can you expect to see where you messed up and where you need to improve if you can't brace yourself for negatives along with positives. the positives being is that this story was building up to something that could end up becoming all the more interesting and handled with more attention to detail and care along with taking a minute to look at where you can take it and the negatives is where we see a forced closed ending which by any manga standards fan work or official will have a negative impact on the overall story or have you not bothered to take your college courses to teach you this basic principal? it's so basic and necessary for anyone who either writes or draws that it should be second nature to expect it.
Freddy Gutierrez
2017-01-23 06:40:27 +0000 UTCand I look forward to, it keep up the good work
BigBallENRGY
2017-01-23 05:16:45 +0000 UTCI think some of you are misunderstanding the end of this comic, that this comic ended does not mean that there will be no more naruto comics, I will continue to make naruto comics, and improve, more characters, more stories, more hinata, more naruto , More SEX, more etc.... I just want to get better
Felsala
2017-01-23 04:46:18 +0000 UTCHEY HEY HEY HEY all you haters give Felsala a break, He or she did the best they could to draw 88 pages, and the first kind with naruto and hinata was real good the ending was a little OK, but I aint bitching about it, there other stories to try and practice makes perfect so give Felsala another chance and if not, then go jack off somewhere else .
BigBallENRGY
2017-01-23 04:26:39 +0000 UTCbrah i paid for smut not your shitty naruto vs sasuke fanfiction. really thats it? Will not be paying again.
sndbvfsij
2017-01-23 03:03:24 +0000 UTCI'm sorry, I knew some people wouldn't like the ending I did, I know I can't please everyone, I'll try to improve for the following comics
Felsala
2017-01-22 23:59:39 +0000 UTCThis ending made absolutely no sense
Plink
2017-01-22 23:42:27 +0000 UTCwhat? what kind ending is that? granted I didn't expect you to show the battle but you're really just gonna leave it like that? seriously at best this should've at least ended with either a semi good end where they try to move on or a bad end where Sasuke wins and fucks hinata in front of him as she gives in to the pleasure.
Freddy Gutierrez
2017-01-22 22:25:27 +0000 UTCEnd? So sad :(
NeekuArt
2017-01-22 22:06:26 +0000 UTC
