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The blow was precise and reverberated through the forest. The vehicle offered no resistance to the force of the giant’s cock swing. It soared through the air, covering hundreds of meters before crashing onto the ground.

The giant watched as the small car followed its trajectory, possibly one of his best hits this month. The car landed, bounced and finally came to a stop on the wide dirt trail. The giant raised both arms in the air and celebrated. His Deep voice echoed through the forest as he cheered in victory, he has surpassed his previous record.

However, in the tranquility of the forest, a sudden noise nearby caught the giant’s acute hearing. His senses were sharp and finely tuned to perceive the tiny world around him. He thought he heard a faint cry, not that of an animal, but of a human.

The giant scanned the lush and diminutive landscape, searching for the source of the noise. His trained eyes detected movement on a small rise on the hill, just a few steps away. He soon spotted a human lying on the ground, their backpack, a tent and other object too small for him to recognize.

The giant sighed at the familiar situation. It wasn’t the first time he had come across a human camping in that place, and it seemed like he found more of the as time passes. He composed himself and walked towards the human to inspect him up close.

Each step of the giant made the ground tremble, a completely natural sensation imperceptible to him. However, for the human, the ground shook violently with each step, noticeably accelerating his heart rate.

The giant notices the fear in the small human, who lay in a state of shock on the ground. He tries to retreat backwards clumsily in vain. The great beast covered the distance between them with just a few strides. He leaned over the human and locked his gaze onto the tiny being.

The human remained motionless, paralyzed by fear. He knew he shouldn’t be there, so far from the safety of Civilization, so deep into that forbidden forest.

Several questions flew through his mind: Why had he gone there when he knew he wasn’t ready yet? Did he really need the money that badly? Why did he feel this urge to get so close to the giant? Why couldn’t he just keep his damn mouth shut?

His mind and body were in total disagreement, feeling and demanding different things of him. To run, seek refuge, hide. To stay, wait, approach the beast. A feeling all too familiar to him, but one he couldn’t help but associate with anguish.

Silence and tension filled the air. Undoubtedly, it was the smaller of the two who was truly tense, being observed from above by a creature ten of times larger than him. The giant, on the other hand, maintained a stoic expression on his face—curious, intrigued by the human.

He had seen hundreds of thousands of humans in his territory, and yet he could still identify them. He could find differences in their faces and physical features. Their ways of acting and interacting. A quality acquired from coexisting with the small beings for centuries.

The giant analyzed the small human, mentally going through his physical characteristics. He had an athletic body, short and spiky hair, appeared young, around his late twenties, dressed in ordinary clothes rather than recognizable uniforms or attire. He didn’t have facial hair. However, his tender and youthful face stood put, capturing the giant’s attention.

It was the first time he had seen that particular human in his forest, and if it weren’t for that, he might have considered him a perfect snack.

The serene silence of dusk was interrupted by a distant blast.

BOOM!

For the first time in what seemed like hours to the human, the giant broke eye contact and turned his head over his shoulder. to observe the source of the noise.

A spectacle of lights illuminated the forest for a few seconds, leaving the small human astonished. The momentary flash revealed the imposing figure of the giant above him—muscular shoulders and chest, a pair of massive arms the size of buildings, a thick dark beard and weathered face. He was the giant who ruled and protected the region of Earth known as Guarida, the home of the small human.

The giant became absorbed by the lights. It seemed irrelevant that he had witnessed countless displays of lights and explosions throughout his life, from human festivals to natural phenomena. Each one remained a wonderful surprise to the long-lived being. Despite his colossal size and power, his face lit up like that of a child amazed by something shiny new.


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Thanks for reading! I must admit that I don't consider myself a good writer, I've written some basic scripts and storyboards before but nothing too outstanding. There must and will be some rough edges here and there for sure, but I hope that with time I can learn and fix them. Also, my mind is conditioned to write in spanish (my mother language) so translating has a part in it too.

The story is a continuous work-in-progress as I will always be fine tuning details and figuring out how to tell the story. But I have a rough idea of where it will go. There are a lot of funny and macro themed topics along the way as well as potential drama and stuff. I'm taking this first approach because I need to start somewhere. and keeping everything behind curtains until its done seems dumb and probably a counterproductive choice.

[06/23] First upload.

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Comments

he's a really big boi

Cochinote

totally, I gotta go with the flow and find a way that suits me better. Got some ideas for next posts like this... now I have to make them work which is the hard part ^^"

Cochinote

Thanks! yeah I think going standard comic format wont do it for me, I get stuck so easily. I'm gonna try different things until I find a better way for myself to tell a story. A lot of trial and error incoming haha

Cochinote

Omar stand , "So Big" 🫠

ReZy

I say go with the flow! Don't limit yourself to a "meta" format and just do what helps you feel more motivated with it. it looks super cool so far and I really want to know more haha

TitanLeon

It is a great story, very well written. I found myself intrigued. I love the details and look forward to seeing more. It doesn’t have to be standard comic format. I like the way you make distinct pages for each part. But that’s up to you.

Phillip


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