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Good ones!

Sam3DX

I added some. I like the idea of the guys being very chauvinistic to the women. I guess it means you feel less sorry for them! lol

Nice touch!

Sam3DX

Nice idea! I tried to add a few lines of my own to the document. I hope you like them ;-)

AgentX9

I'm copying everything I got to the google doc, you can check it <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qjOpr3oMq0pHJfFRFlQoCufO9oC-JHyBbvJqkCdYYXo/edit" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qjOpr3oMq0pHJfFRFlQoCufO9oC-JHyBbvJqkCdYYXo/edit</a>

Sam3DX

Sure! That's why I'm going to use a talk quite rare in compare with grunts and moans. And even in this case i'm wondering is it a good idea or not, but anyway we should try ;)

Sam3DX

IMHO you'll need to vary it quite a lot ,as hearing the same comment following the same move time after time could start to get predictable, tedious even. I'm sure you've covered this already but a good range of gasps, grunts, yelps etc denoting pain, surprise and so on can be effective (plus they can be used in response to almost any move). Interspersed with the kind of trash talk others have been mentioning.

Excalib

I thought it could be too complicated for many of us, but let's try this way <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qjOpr3oMq0pHJfFRFlQoCufO9oC-JHyBbvJqkCdYYXo/edit?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qjOpr3oMq0pHJfFRFlQoCufO9oC-JHyBbvJqkCdYYXo/edit?usp=sharing</a>

Sam3DX

it may help if you set up a Googledoc file and just gave us right to dump ideas in it? It would also help organize the various lines into categories that depends on the situation

William Duan

Good ones! Don't stop, we need many lines!

Sam3DX

Good lines! Don't limit yourself, we need more! Unfortunately we don't have a characters with history, you'll create your own character with own history. And the scenario of fight is "two character punching each other". It should not be a dialog, it's something to fill the gap after the punch delivering.

Sam3DX

After a solid cunt-bust, I love to see the female victim acts like a man got his balls serious hit.. slowly knees down, then buries her head on the floor, clutching her crotch and moaning in great agony etc.. so it would be nice to mock the victim with something like "you got balls? Bitch", "(Oh poor little,) Did I just break your balls?", "I'm gonna destroy your balls again and again you little bitch". This kind of phrase is especially good for mocking when the victim knees down and clutchs herself in great pain. Also this taunt can be used when the knee-down victim got her hair pulled up standing, then after the taunt the opponent delivers another vicious kick/knee/punch to the victim's crotch. Wow! On the other hand, something like "Oh, poor cunt, but I'm going to do this all day" can also be used for mocking after a cuntbusting.. What do you think?

It would be a lot easier if we have characters with backstory (I could think of a few nice wonder woman/batgirl/other character lines. Some generic lines would be: "Give up while your tits are still in one piece","I can do this all night/day","Get your cunt off my face (assuming we go for facesitting","let go of my boobs." It would be a lot easier to come up with dialogues if we know the scenario of the fight

William Duan