Ok I think I got a page layout sorted for the Embyr AV piece. There MIGHT be a page 2 if I can pace it well enough.
This is a slightly altered concept from the poll since I decided I want to focus more on the actual AV at the start and have the awkward public nature of the scene come in after.
The idea is the girl getting AV'd has been waiting all alone ina corner outside of the building. Noi where to run, perfect prey. However, as this second girl approaches and reveals she had received an anonymous love letter to meet here, she has now mistake Embyr as the sender. A good thing, as she's always kind of liked Embyr...Hmhmhm~
EDIT: I know it's hard to tel without sound effects and dialogue, but she's hiding the bulge the girl is making by clenching her muscles, both to hide her and silence her. Convenient, considering she's about to be approached.