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A Promise Kept - Chapter 80 - A Promised Epilogue

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Congrats on another story done. I've got to say, I think that that final battle sequence is one of my favorite's that I've gotten to read from you, so congrats. I will say, I feel like a flaw this story suffered from was creating interesting plot threads and just tossing them away. I feel like the greatest offender would be the Potter inferi being created and then just... being sent back. It was certainly a cool and unique use of the Resurrection Stone but the fact that Harry never actually had to face down zombie Potters feels like such a waste to have even suggested. More recently however, there was the fact that Winthrop revealed Harry's child and it was being built up as the worst thing possible if Voldie found that out and all it amounted to was a single taunt in the fight. Regardless, another great story and I'm excited to see more universal nonsense both with some good ol' fashioned time travel and whatever Boy-Who-Laughed is up to. Who are the other two he met up with I wonder?

champagnia

Like the crossover aspect especially in All for you, but hoping one of your main Harry characters from your stories and any future stories doesn’t turn out to eventually become this Death version of Harry. Would rather it just be like a couple flashback chapters whenever the big crossover eventually happens that explains the backstory. Definitely hoping it isn’t foreshadowing for the upcoming story and that Harry’s fate.

Yokai53

Will you post story of evil Harry? Plz don’t whitewash him

TyrantGod

You should be careful how you go about forging a multi-universe crow over. It can go MCU success or DC flopping

TyrantGod

Super excited for the crossover of all these different versions of Harry in the future! It's going to be amazing

Jon

I'm going to be honest. I don't enjoy the way you keep sprinkling these Voldemort is captured by evil version of Harry bits in every story. It ruins the closure of all the other stories impacted for what will likely never be a pay off. I don't find the idea of evil Harry appealing to read, and from the last poll it seems the other readers here generally agree. You could instead of just intro-d evil Harry catching other Voldemorts in dreams or short flashbacks in the story if it ever happened, instead of effectively ruining the closure of multiple other story's. Just my two-cents. I'll continue to read as always though, thanks for the chapter and the story!

Vninga

Reading a massive multi universal crossover would be awesome.

Jay

Harry Potter: Doomsday - coming in December 2028

dabolts

I enjoyed this story more than I thought. Was a bit dubious over the whole lilly surviving as haven't seen many fics do it well. I do like how its all set up for an end game style fic though. Hope we manage to all vote on that one soon 😂

DJ23


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