A Promise Kept - Chapter 79 - Retribution
Added 2026-03-20 14:00:14 +0000 UTCComments
Great final chapter! I think the Dolohov issue was the only major thing that needs fixin. Enjoyed this story a lot!
Finnspa23
2026-03-23 03:11:38 +0000 UTCBrilliant! 🥳
Keon
2026-03-22 18:07:09 +0000 UTCI viewed that as being specific to Hogwarts - Voldie has taken control, ergo Harry's uprising to take it back is a coup against Voldie's rule.
Paul McDonnell
2026-03-22 14:04:20 +0000 UTC“You must see that you[r] coup has failed, Harry,” Voldemort spoke... Tom's confused about the definition of "coup."
odzoo
2026-03-21 00:58:17 +0000 UTCAs others have pointed out, some continuity errors and more than a few typos, but damn, what an ending
Mandragoran
2026-03-20 18:09:44 +0000 UTCI hated the trope of everyone just standing around and watching. They should have been finishing off all of the death eater so they didn't have to worry about trials and them sticking around
Durdens Wrath
2026-03-20 18:08:10 +0000 UTCFilius couldn't have been fighting with Dolohov, Lily killed him earlier. And you had Bellatrix as Dora's arent instead of aunt.
Durdens Wrath
2026-03-20 17:58:09 +0000 UTCHi Dolohov killed by Lily before professors are released. in later scene Fillius is fighting with him?
Ramasamy Radhakrishnan
2026-03-20 15:49:23 +0000 UTCI love the depiction of Aurelius as Harry's ever loyal griffin. Like a cat you have to EARN their love and loyalty but when you do you have a friend for life.
Edward
2026-03-20 15:18:57 +0000 UTCAnd I JUST finished last chapter, oh what a treat!
Dave
2026-03-20 14:50:40 +0000 UTCSpotted a continuity error here: Flitwick squares off with Dolohov about 2/3rds of the way through the chapter when Lily had already killed him before the professors were freed.
Paul McDonnell
2026-03-20 14:29:51 +0000 UTC
