A Promise Kept - Chapter 16 - In the Summertime
Added 2025-08-14 13:00:14 +0000 UTCA brief summer interlude with some foreshadowing of things to come...
Comments
Why are you criticizing behavior consistent with what would be expected from the character? It is established that Lily is overprotective. Are you bitching about the attitude of a fictional character or that Lee is writing the character in a consistent manner? Neither is rational behavior in the review of a fan fiction story.
odzoo
2025-08-16 01:11:40 +0000 UTCI mean who really gives a shit about what Lily thinks of Harry's chosen occupation or job? It's his life to live not hers, she can give advice, but she doesn't get a say in what he gets to do with his life only he does. So live your life as ya see fit Harry and don't pay no heed to what others think of what ya are gonna do. Heck if it agitates and shocks them then all the better for it
TheShinobi
2025-08-15 19:18:37 +0000 UTCI love this story, do you already have a pairing for this one? Or are we waiting to see how things develop?
Ka Ro
2025-08-15 12:57:22 +0000 UTCMan seeing the familiar faces from other stories is great, I am really looking forward to seeing how this one continues.
Celexs
2025-08-15 00:54:43 +0000 UTCWhat year will he return to Britain I wonder
kevin joseph
2025-08-14 17:19:46 +0000 UTCI love seeing Reg again, and Lily and Harry are certainly going to have a confrontation about his plans once they are alone. Honestly at this point I am just curious as to what the plot will actually be. I assume it will be the Triwizard tournament to really kick things off, but after that I have no idea. Quite a few friends as well, but at least 2 different love interests with Gabrielle and Sabine.
Vrail
2025-08-14 16:53:17 +0000 UTC
