A Promise Kept - Chapter 15 - Pursuits
Added 2025-08-10 13:00:12 +0000 UTCAnother one in the books, and some bigger twists on the way...
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Like one comment said. I hope Sirius and Lilly stays alive and don’t get killed. Let there be one where they live pls
Preboo
2025-08-11 16:27:18 +0000 UTCI'm in the same spot as Sunny is right now. I'm really enjoying the Sirius arc but Harry is a bit too one dimensional at the moment. He needs some real hardship and trusting your writing, it will come eventually. I get the sense that Sirius will die before Harry is done with school, similar to William in WTRBA. Maybe you'll kill off Lily (Pandora Lovegood-esque?) as well, but I moreso feel that she will lightly parallel your Angelica Potter. Currently, Sirius's death would harden Harry but Lily's demise would break him totally. I'm still really enjoying the story though. It definitely lives up to your usual standards, imo.
Michael
2025-08-11 09:01:11 +0000 UTC
