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A Promise Kept - Chapter 10 - Security Measures

The twists and turns begin here...

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I'm a tad confused how the additional animals will increase security that would effectively stop Voldemort unless they bond with someone at the ranch and are as protective as the griffins.

Jordan Gunn

A potential Harry/Gabrielle huh? I don't mind that honestly, both young still and sorta new to school and that whole world and sort of outsiders in a way, also discovering magic and powers and all. Be good for them to bond and all. Plus I like the idea of the older siblings teasing them over it all. Can't say as I have seen a lot of Littlelowerpot fics, least not long or good ones so, if this is gonna be one then great! This is honestly why I always liked fanfiction better then canon of this series because of the limitless possibilities like this for different paths, pairings, stories, etc.

TheRonin

A good chapter! I like the concept of the ranch's defence being a menagerie of magical creatures. It'll be an interesting setting should you use it for a battle. Your concept of family magic was confusing, cause you had Charlus able to use Black family magic and he doesn't share any of their blood. Anyway, thanks for your work!

Sunny


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