Avalon - Chapter 16 - The Lady
Added 2024-08-25 13:00:05 +0000 UTCLots of fun to be had yet... the main bulk of the story will be coming shortly....
Comments
Really enjoying each and every chapter!!! They are so well written and fulfilling that even though I just want to read the rest of the book in one go I am still thoroughly satisfied with what I am getting.
Raghav Chaudhary
2024-08-26 10:17:04 +0000 UTCMerlin's character is very contradictory. You don't know what version you're getting, although letting Helena be killed for the simple reason of thinking that your ex teacher didn't tell u something seems sociopathic. The moments between Morgana & Harry are written well. Tho, I'm not sure if it was because Godric was caught off guard, but Harry able to land a blow seemed a bit soon. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next.
Sunny
2024-08-25 23:05:02 +0000 UTCMyrddin appears to be a sociopath in how he dealt with Helena's murder, but then he indicates that their is nothing he can do about Arthur falling for Guinevere. It seems like he could make her disappear without a twinge of guilt, if he thinks she is bad for Arthur's kingdom.
odzoo
2024-08-25 20:51:22 +0000 UTCYep... just more proof Merlin is an utter bellend!!!! >:-( On a lighter note, I am loving the development between Harry and Morgana. With their magic seemingly seeking the other's hopefully Harry will be able to confide in her what really happened to him. If tossing a large clump of horseshit at the head of MERLIN HIMSELF, it is clear how much he has grown to care for her, perhaps even love. It's not every day a guy could actually say he humiliated Merlin because he insulted their girl. Hopefully when he confides in her, and tells her just how much of a legend Merlin became in his own time, she may get an idea that the gesture was far greater than she is currently aware of. I still chuckle to myself when I imagine one day in the future, there will be a swear that says, "POTTER'S SAGGY BOLLOCKS!" or "What in the name of Potter's saggy left buttcheek?!"
Edward
2024-08-25 14:43:37 +0000 UTCMorgana is right, I think it is more that it will be her and Harry's journey that has only begun, already they are growing closer with each day with their magic even seeking each other out and from what have gathered from Morgana hers even yearning to be near Harry's. I foresee great things ahead for them together, there will be obstacles, but I am sure together they will overcome them.
TheSerpent
2024-08-25 13:42:00 +0000 UTCThe founders aren't wrong, Myrddin is so wrong in what he is doing and it will not end well for the magical world of what he is doing. Muggles after all tend to fear what they do not understand and they for sure do not understand magic, that fear can turn to hate and anger and the Wizarding World will suffer as a result, especially since they are outnumbered by the muggles. Bets to keep the two worlds seperate.
TheSerpent
2024-08-25 13:40:22 +0000 UTCMyrddin really is a bastard
James Shay
2024-08-25 13:21:20 +0000 UTCBit slower than your other stories. Still good but not as enjoyable. Hopefully things will pick up as it goes along.
Tim Willan
2024-08-25 13:16:55 +0000 UTC
