All For You - Chapter 42
Added 2024-04-14 13:00:08 +0000 UTCThings will become much more action-packed from here...
Comments
We need another era with a new villain!
Alex Lafrance
2024-04-16 20:24:05 +0000 UTCJust my point of view - I think Voldemort needs to be more of a threat, he is a bit of a joke in this story. He is called you know who or he who must not be named for a reason.A really great story needs a really great villain and the hero must have a real struggle and pay a real price. Maybe TBR has gotten a bit bored of him , but if he is very very scary, then Harryβs victory will be even sweater. The Hero has to fight by the skin of his teeth.
Harharryhar
2024-04-16 09:46:18 +0000 UTCOoooh an OC... Madam Dubois. How very exciting, and is she an original villain or simply another cog in this dark syndicate?? I feel like next time you do another time travel, you gotta change Harry's appearance either via a ritual or Death/Fate, cause Harry's looks always bait him out π. Lastly, I have a bad feeling that HE v2 is gonna die. The talk of balance makes me think it's gonna happen. It'll be sad, if it does, but Death always has their due. Anyway, thanks for the chapter and I look forward to the next one.
Sunny
2024-04-14 22:39:24 +0000 UTC
