The Sword of the Winter Rose - Chapter VI
Added 2023-09-13 19:53:20 +0000 UTCOnwards to Harrenhal with. few stops along the way...
Comments
Good chapter. As usual, Hoster is plotting and then stepping in it.
Steven Clark Moss
2023-09-26 21:36:55 +0000 UTCIs update still today
Mark Travis
2023-09-26 19:39:11 +0000 UTCI am absolutely loving this story, anychance you can add the prologue to the tabbed page?
David Jason Ezell
2023-09-25 18:49:07 +0000 UTCThanks for info
Mark Travis
2023-09-23 21:59:18 +0000 UTCI'm hoping to have one up Monday but Tuesday at the latest
Lee McCusker
2023-09-23 21:00:39 +0000 UTCWhen’s update
Mark Travis
2023-09-23 20:38:08 +0000 UTCI love the dynamic of Jon&Jon. Can't wait for more, every time you upload it's like the Christmas came early.
Thor
2023-09-15 09:52:13 +0000 UTCMore more more. This is the best ASOIAF/GOT fanfic I’ve read at it doesn’t even come close. Keep up the great work!
General Area 🫡
2023-09-14 14:03:31 +0000 UTCBut my good Baron, you say that like 10 chapters of internal monologue isn’t something we’d like. We crave the words m’lord….we crave them…
Sammy the Shark
2023-09-14 13:56:11 +0000 UTCHey, just wanted to give you the feedback that I very much love this fanfiction and that the whole world fits very good to your writing style. I'd love to read more of this in the future! Keep it up👍
Tom Franke
2023-09-14 06:49:32 +0000 UTCLove this story! Any chance of more frequent updates going forward, can’t get enough of it?
TJ
2023-09-14 04:07:18 +0000 UTCThis story is just so much fun, i look forward to every chapter, and always want more at the end of each one. They always seem to go by very quickly.
Mark Quaker
2023-09-14 00:50:27 +0000 UTCThis is one of the first ASOIAF fics I’ve ever read and I’m really enjoying it, can’t wait to read more, it’s a shame it’s only once a week! (Another reason I didn’t vote for the both option on the poll)
mike rhodes
2023-09-13 23:22:10 +0000 UTCJon hasn't really given much thought to Catelyn. He was distracted more by Baelish but we will get to his insights in the next chapter and throughout the story. If I addressed them all now, it would be close to around 10 chapters of internal monologue of every character he has met and interacted with 👍
Lee McCusker
2023-09-13 21:39:45 +0000 UTCI get not wanting to bog down the story in Jon mourning everything he lost. But I do think that in this situation, even not understanding the idea of parallel worlds, that he would at least give thought to his cousins not being born. On that same thread, is he not concerned that Lyanna not getting with Rhaegar means he’ll never be born?
Rick Malone
2023-09-13 21:37:16 +0000 UTCYeah it seems sketchy to us, who are familiar with alternate universes and time travel through fiction, but would Jon know and understand this to the point that the man famous for brooding wouldn’t have to chew on it for a while?
thevolunteer
2023-09-13 21:33:41 +0000 UTCI love this story and how things are changing, I hate Catelyn and I would be very happy if she didn't set foot in the North
Yomira Ullon
2023-09-13 21:06:48 +0000 UTCTbh, expecting the exact same children in an alternate universe is already kind of sketchy. Realistically, there's no guarantee of them spawning the same in the same order. It'd me ridiculous, but indeed we haven't seen Jon pondering that, I think.
Eric Lachance
2023-09-13 20:38:04 +0000 UTCThat never ocurred to me either while reading. To be fair though they didnt do much good anyway, with the exception of Arya.
Ondrej Mišo
2023-09-13 20:24:47 +0000 UTCLoving this story so far. One question though, has Jon acknowledged that Catelyn not marrying his uncle will mean his cousins are never born? I can’t remember if it’s been addressed in an earlier chapter, but his lack of thought on the matter was something that stuck out to me in this chapter.
Rick Malone
2023-09-13 20:19:25 +0000 UTCSeven hells this is great, can’t wait to see more!
Frodran
2023-09-13 20:17:52 +0000 UTCCan't wait for Baelish to die.
Yash Patwardhan
2023-09-13 20:06:45 +0000 UTC