Written in the Stars - Form the Shadows (Part Two)
Added 2023-01-29 14:00:05 +0000 UTCAnother chapter with more developments. The next will be much the same...
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Well, in this one, Albus saved Harry. He did not perform inadequately. He's and old man and does not have the elder wand, something he did have during the first war, and he barely managed to hold Volde ort off even then
Lee McCusker
2023-02-02 17:03:49 +0000 UTCIt's getting pretty annoying how in every one of your stories there's a fight between Albus and Voldemort. Albus always performs inadequately and is saved by Harry. I'm not quite sure how at this point in time Harry is able to perform better than Albus. I think this is one of your flaws. Harry never gets to a point of failing. Against the Dark lords I mean. He always draws or succeeds.
Rand
2023-02-02 17:00:51 +0000 UTCThis was an amazing chapter, as per usual. I can’t wait to read the next. Now that Voldemort’s exposed himself, things should turn far more interesting.
Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts
2023-01-29 17:23:15 +0000 UTC
