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BPE 18 - Mistakes were made - WIP

I'm checking panels and reviewing text before releasing the preview, then I've found a couple of faulty panels. You guys can have this one if you want ;P

I'll release the preview soon, but I want to add another internal review on the text first, I usually do 3 reviews on text before the proofreader, then a final one after it.

So, 5 reviews for a spicy comic? I'm a sick person hahaha.

Sorry for the delay but I had to do some overtime for finishing the script and test scenes for Cheap Tricks 6 remake, that one might go over 250 panels and I had a big rework on the scene's text (the original aged horribly) and scenes behavior (the new house is scaled up compared to the original so the POV tests sucked). Look at the bright side, the evening and morning scenes tests worked in the first try and we have another late afternoon dome working, though light poles work will not be done yet or it would delay the release even more... I have to test some new mechanics for the light poles setup that will be used on a future chapter of Domina's Valley, that will probably be done on the pause because it needs extensive testing and ain't sure the rig will be able to hold it.

For now, enjoy big Mel!

BPE 18 - Mistakes were made - WIP

Comments

You have got to recognize your queen to support her properly. This is Melissa. And Pheebs has the aquarium bikini.

Alex

The only downside of this picture is that we are denied the magnificent view of Ana Mel's beautiful face... But her not a even bit less magnificent view of her humongous bust is a great consolation for that ;) :D

Black_Templar21

Hope that's Phoebe growing even taller and bustier!

Wallace54321


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