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CC: Chapter 103 – Great War

“Senior, there is a problem,” former Vice Leader Tan reported. He was one of the cultivators who had decided to travel with me and the unofficial leader of the group. I was in the main cabin of my ship working on my cultivation.

The counter cube and arrays used to keep energy around the ship was about two thirds as effective as a nexus crystal. The movement of the ship itself was a major reason why energy was lost. Still, it was more than enough for cultivation, which made the cultivators on board quite happy.

“Speak,” I said. We had been traveling for over a decade now. There was a mortal crew that sailed the actual ship and the cultivators who handled expenses and other high-level issues. I had only been bothered three times in the past. Two of the times had been due to leviathan attacks. The third time was when pirates attacked. All of these events were easily resolved.

Right now, we were at port and would be sailing to the next canal, which implied there was a problem with the planned route. “The canal we want to take falls between two Empires and is currently the central part of their war.”

“Aren’t canals normally built through the middle of Empires?” I asked.

“The boarders have shifted over time. The Tree Empire split into the Leaf and Wood Empires. A pair of brothers over a millennia ago. The canal revenue was shared, but tensions have recently escalated and now there is war,” Junior Tan explained.

“Is the canal blocked in any way, or do both sides just attack whoever is passing through?” I asked.

“Both. To reach another canal it is at least two year trip,” Junior Tan added. That was how long it would take to reach the next canal. For a canal to be profitable, there weren’t that many. The journey had to be a minimum of a year away by ship. Even then they were often further due to terrain and political considerations at the time they were built.

“If the fighting stopped how long would it take to clear the canal?” I asked.

“Not that long. A couple days to a month. But the fighting would have to stop. Since it is a war between Empires, there are cultivators are both sides as well,” Junior Tan explained. That would be annoying, but I wasn’t going to make a detour.

I slowly got up from my reclining chair I was laying down on to focus on my cultivation. I picked up my sword that was set down on a nearby table. “Who controls the port?” I asked.

“It is split depending on which side of the canal. We are currently on the Leaf Empire’s side,” Junior Tan explained. I nodded slowly at this, as I made sure my sword belt was properly secured around my waist.

“Well, they are lucky then. We will support them in the conflict and punch through the canal. In return for our support, they will mobilize workers to clear the canal as quickly as possible from any blockades,” I laid out my plan for the upcoming conflict. “The representatives?” I asked while I put my large hat over my head to hide my face and my different appearance from these people.

“We can see the Lord Governor of the city right away. There will also be members of the Leaf Sect present,” Junior Tan said. I nodded at this.

“I will meet with them immediately. For nothing shall stop us,” I declared resolutely. Junior Tan sent one of the other cultivators as a messenger while the rest remained behind to guard the ship. We then proceeded to advance to the Lord Governor’s fortress. The guards quickly made way as we advanced to the great hall.

I counted ten cultivators in the room as well. This was clearly a key city for the Leaf Empire to have so many cultivators stationed here. It made sense, since it was one of the entry points to the canal, which the war was over.

“Announcing, Senior Yuan Zhou of the Heavenly Alliance,” Junior Tan said. Everyone inclined their heads even the other cultivators. I guess word of my cultivation had been conveyed.

“Greetings Senior Yuan Zhou. I am Lord Governor Ting, a representative of his Imperial Majesty of the Leaf Empire,” a man on a throne wearing ornate armor had gotten up and inclined his head towards me.

“I am Junior Po of the Leaf Sect, Senior Yuan Zhou,” the elder cultivator who was clearly in charge inclined their head towards me as well. It was nice to be the top cultivator and get a lot of respect.

“I require passage through the canal on my journey to the Great Desert. Since I have arrived in your Empire first, I shall aid you in return for clearing the canal as quickly as possible. My understanding is that the Wood Empire has amassed cultivators and soldiers on the opposite side of the canal in force?” I asked.

“Yes. We have reached a stalemate with the occasional raid going back and forth. If either side begins amassing soldiers in one location to cross, the other side will as well. While footholds have been gained in the past, the cost in cultivators, soldiers, and wat material has been immense,” Lord Governor Ting explained.

“The other issue is that each side has a rapid response force of their strongest cultivators. In the event that either side crosses to the other side of the canal, then that rapid response force will strike,” Cultivator Po explained.

“How many cultivators are in this force?” I asked.

“Around a hundred,” he replied. I nodded slowly at this. It would be a pain to kill that many, but it would be no threat.

“Easy enough to deal with,” I replied. There was shock across the room.

“Forgive me senior, but your level of strength…to kill that many cultivators?” Cultivator Po asked.

“I could kill a thousand cultivators without breaking a sweat,” I replied without lying. “I will act immediately and expect the Leaf Empire to follow up.”

“What exactly is your plan?” Lord Governor Ting asked nervously.

“I will assault the city across the canal, killing the cultivators and soldiers. Your forces will move in and seize it. Then I will be advancing my ship up the canal, while clearing out the opposite side of any resistance. Once we reach a blockage, you will have your work teams quickly remove it, while I remove any opposition. If you wish to take territory or make other gains, I do not care as long as the work crews move at a rapid pace,” I declared.

“You plan to take them all on yourself? That is impossible!? Even for a senior in the Soul Enlightenment Realm, such a thing would not be possible,” Cultivator Po said. I began to draw out my sword and the tension spiked in the great hall.

“I will not cripple you for your offensive words, but I will teach you a lesson. Defend yourselves,” I said and moved. The stone floor shattered as I kicked off of it. Cultivator Po was barely reacting by the time the flat of my blade struck his gut. He folded over my blade and went flying into the wall behind himself with a crash.

I then casually cut down and deflected the thrown metal weapons two other cultivators unleashed upon me. I moved once more. I kicked one, who went flying into a wall and used the pommel of my sword to hit the other. Their eyes went cloudy as they collapsed on the ground, bleeding from their head.

One by one, the cultivators of the Leaf Sect were taught a lesson in manners and the gap between heaven and earth. The entire conflict took less than half a minute. I calmly walked back to my original position. The Lord Governor quickly got on his knees and kow-towed, touching his head to the ground.

“Forgive this worm, for he did not see your greatness,” Lord Governor Ting said. All the guards and other people in the great hall quickly copied him.

“You may rise. I will attack immediately. Rally your troops and workers,” I ordered.

“At once, as you command Senior Yuan Zhou,” Lord Governor Ting quickly said. I departed the great hall with Junior Tan right beside me.

“That was nice of you,” he said, since I hadn’t killed the other cultivators.

“I want to keep moving as quickly as possible. That means making one side win as quickly as possible and making sure our way is cleared. That is also why I am attacking immediately,” I replied.

“Do you require assistance?” Junior Tan asked me. I considered that question carefully.

“Anyone who wants to fight can, but we need to guard the ship. Bring it over once these people start sending troops and other cultivators. You can assist then,” I replied.

“Do you want me to arrange a boat to help you cross?” Junior Tan asked me. I shook my head. I had an alternative. I didn’t like doing this for long distances since I couldn’t stop, but for the mouth of the canal, it would be easy enough and create a huge impression on the enemy forces.

“Then I will return to the ship to make arrangements, with your permission, Senior Yuan Zhou,” Junior Tan said. I gave him a nod and a hand wave and he left my side. No doubt he would be moving the ship into position to get a good view of what I was about to do. That was why I didn’t rush.

It would probably take at least half a day for this city to start moving troops and for the cultivators to recover in order to assist me. I slowly made my way to the side of the city facing the canal and the city on the other side.

The distance was quite large. I suspected they built both cities and the canal at the start of a river in order to make construction easier and to go with the natural terrain that had been here however long ago. There was no docking on the side of the cities facing the canal, since they would be exposed to long range attacks from the opposing cities. Even if there was peace, the canal was not that wide. I would say that three ships would be able to comfortably pass through side to side. Four or five would be a very tight squeeze.

I exited through a gate in the wall without being stopped by the soldiers present. Leaving was not an issue and I clearly looked like someone important. Another reason I didn’t mention for attacking right away was the element of surprise. I had no doubt that both sides had spies. If I waited, then it was conceivable that the opposing forces could make things slightly difficult for me by grouping togeather.

Standing on a large concrete block at the side of the canal, I looked across the water to the opposing city. There was a slight breeze and only small waves. The thing about the Great World, was since there was no moon or rotation, there were no tides. The waves were either caused by the wind or external forces.

The Turbulent Ocean at the start was clearly not powered by the wind with those skyscraper high waves. My guess was there was some minor oscillation at the edge of the Great World’s bubble that caused such movement and why the edge of these bubbles had water and not land. Water would absorb any transmitted force much more easily.

I drew out my metal sword and I heard gasps from the soldiers watching from the gate and the wall, clearly wondering what I was about to do. I used my free hand to make sure my hat was securely on my head. Once I was sure it was snug, I kicked off the ground and flew forward. As I began to descend, I kicked down at the water again, spreading out energy from my foot.

A huge concave disturbance formed in the water as I gained elevation once again. The water rushed to fill the gap I had left behind shooting up into the air as it converged from all directions, slamming in the center and then moving upwards, like a pebble dropped into a pool. Three more times I kicked off the water itself, making my way across the entrance of the canal to the city on the opposite bank.

As I landed on the shore and I gathered my focus. “One Swing To Sperate Heaven And Earth.” The words helping me focus in order to use the energy as efficiently as possible. A blade of energy exited my sword and struck the gate and the soldiers standing in front of it. They let out screams of shock as their bodies separated into two halves, along with the wooden gate and a portion of the wall.

The wall itself didn’t collapse, since it was thick enough I hadn’t cut all the way through, and was supported on the sides. I rushed forward and slammed into the gate, burst through the wood and then went through the tunnel that was built into the wall, slamming into the next gate. I burst through as well and into the street as there were screams and shouts.

I moved over to a group of soldiers and easily moved between them. Heads and limbs were quickly and easily separated from their bodies. I went to one soldier who had lost their hand. “Which way to the palace or the place where your leaders are?” I asked who was on the ground clutching his stump.

“Center of the city!” the soldier blabbered out. I turned away from him and set off. There were shouts of alarm traveling through the city. But I was too quick. I ignored the civilians and the occasional soldier as I made my way to the most important looking building.

I probably should have asked before for directions before I started the attack, but I wanted to move things along as quickly as possible. Also it wasn’t like finding the people in charge would be that hard. I arrived at the tallest building with its own wall and soldiers guarding it. The symbols of the Wood Empire were everywhere.

Normally it would have been a Kingdom controlling a city, but canals were important enough and valuable enough for Empires to take control of them directly. Since this was an active war zone, they would have consolidated command of the surrounding areas as well.

“Halt-“ a soldier tried to say, but I swung my blade and decapitated him before he could say anything else. The body remained upright as blood fountained out of the man’s neck. I moved through the open gate cutting down several more soldiers, without hesitation and reached the building itself. Swinging my sword, I easily cut through the wood without having to expend energy.

Bursting through I kept moving forward, cutting down everyone in my path. I soon arrived at a great hall that look similar to the one from the Leaf Empire that I had just been in a short while ago. It made sense since these two neighboring empires had history and probably similar cultures. While there were different color and banner choices, no one was about to redo the actual concrete that made up the structure itself unless there was a very good reason.

“What is the meaning of this!” the person on a throne at the back of the room shouted and stood up. I counted three cultivators in this great hall.

“I am Cultivator Yuan Zhou and I am here to kill you all,” I declared. The three enemy cultivators acted immediately drawing their metal blades and rushing at me. They were at the Nascent Soul realm, which was a joke. I swung my sword and easily moved around their attacks. Their blades were easily cut apart and I delivered fatal wounds onto all of them.

While I took a bit of care since they were cultivators, there was no difficulty. The gap between us was just too big. This happened in seconds as everyone in the great hall was trying to process what exactly was happening. I killed the person in charge and moved onto the soldiers. Already people were fleeing and I let them go.

In under a minute, the great hall was a scene of carnage and I felt sick. These people had done nothing to me. The only reason they were dead was that I had stopped in the Leaf Empire first instead of the Wood Empire, and I needed to travel through the canal.

I had considered just traveling up the canal, but fighting both sides wouldn’t have accomplished anything. Especially if there were blocks that needed to be cleared. While I would assist in clearing anything in my way, it was better to ally with one side to make both sides fight each other.

Killing people was easy, far too easy. But killing hundreds, or thousands, it would be a waste of energy. My goal was to use as few projected slashes as possible and rely on the innate superiority of my blade when attacking. Also, there was a small but not insignificant chance that both sides might team up to attack me. It was better to have a clear ally right from the start. They would not risk upsetting me since they would already be gaining massive advantages by joining the attack and seizing the canal.

Eight cultivators rushed into the great hall a few minutes after I had finished my massacre. Six men and two women. Their martial robes and the symbol of their sect making it clear they were cultivators. Also, I could see the small bit of energy inside their bodies as well.

There was no need to say words to dead people. I launched myself towards them as they brought up their swords. I easily cut them down before they were even able to counter attack. The first corpse fell to the floor just as I finished beheading the eighth cultivator. The rest fell to the ground in the seconds afterwards. Despite the massive mess I had made, not a single drop of blood marred my robes.

I swung my sword, to remove the blood on it, splattering it against a nearby wall. I then exited the great hall as soldiers rushed towards me. I didn’t bother asking for a surrender. Something I had learned about the Great World was that they didn’t have slavery. There just wasn’t enough food and the poor people were basically slaves regardless.

Also there was a long history of spies, betrayals, and national loyalty. All of that combined togeather to create a strong anti-slavery culture, which was horrific. While many idiots might have thought not having slavery would be a good thing, it made any kind of conflict extremely brutal.

The bandits I had killed earlier did not have good morale. They were desperate and surrender meant death. With no slavery, no kingdom or empire was about to feed or take care of hundreds or thousands of prisoners. That meant the losers were summarily executed. If someone was a noble, then they might be taken prisoner for a large ransom.

But the common people had no chance. Even the civilians would be heavily purged of all men to make way for people from the opposing force. Women would be given to the soldiers instead of money, along with housing and land, taken directly from the populace. Nobles didn’t like paying their soldiers with money, which was why they got the spoils of war.

In smaller conflicts this wouldn’t happen. Nobles would just be replaced and only a small portion of the population. But since it was a conflict between empires with standing armies, it was total war. It was all or nothing for every single person on both sides.

All of this brutality could be laid at the feet that there was no slavery. Without any way to make use of the losers, it was better to execute them all to prevent future banditry. That was why what followed was horrific and something I hoped to avoid.

Soldiers, civilians, women, and even children rushed at me once I had exited the main building for the city with whatever weapon they had. The richer people were probably fleeing, but the poor had to win or die. That meant killing me.

It was a human wave tactic. “One Swing To Sperate Heaven And Earth.” Over a hundred people died in that attack. Adults were bisected, while the children were beheaded. I hoped that I made a strong enough impression that these people would turn around and realize that it was futile to attack me.

“He is probably exhausted! Keep attacking!” That shout and similar ones went up across the crowd over the screams of their dying comrades. Hundreds more people charged at me, knowing they would die if they didn’t win. My heart hurt from all the deaths, but this was the consequence of warfare with cold weapons and there being no chance of surrender.

I swung a second time as the people closed in, trampling on the bodies of their comrades. More people collapsed to the ground bisected. In fact the ground was no longer visible from the sheer amount of blood and viscera covering it. I felt incredibly sick. I hated this. But there was no better alternative.

Even if I had tried diplomacy, it would have taken years and been easier to find another route. Any non-violent alternative would have taken far too long. The ultimate leaders, the Emperors, were not close to the front lines. Pausing a conflict on such a scale was not a simple matter either. And I would have to enforce the peace. Also, the canal passed through too much territory. Only the Emperor on either side would have the authority to grant passage.

All these lives were not worth my time. That was what it ultimately came down to. It was easier to kill these people in order to gain passage rather than going around or finding an alternative. It was heartbreaking, but I refused to be delayed for years.

I swung a third time as people rushed across the corpses beneath them. Instead of being cut around their cut, many were cut off at the groin or their thighs, making it take longer for them to bleed out. The screams were unbearable, and while they didn’t harm me physically or my cultivation in any way, they impacted me emotionally. I had to force to keep my bile back. Several of the people had dived into the piles of corpses dodging the attack and kept rushing at me with whatever they had in their hands.

It was almost like they were zombies, but I could see the desperation etched into their faces. There was no other alterative but to win. They all knew that, which was why they kept rushing forward. The first to reach me was a child with a wooden stick in their hands.

I swung and the small girl was instantly killed. While I would like to call this a massacre, it truly was a battle. The field of corpses slowed down the charging people enough, that I could cut them down as they reached me, building up a wall of bodies.

They screamed as they rushed me, fear gripping their hearts, but they had no choice. One after another, it didn’t matter, I cut them all down. When people came at me from behind from the main government building, having climbed over the walls, I cut them down as well. When arrows were sent in my direction, I easily knocked them out of the air.

This was a city with at least a hundred thousand people. I had probably killed two thousand by the time I didn’t see anyone else rushed me. There were mounds of corpses all around me. The one patch of ground that didn’t have a body laying upon it. Everything else around me was blood soaked with the occasional pitiful cry or scream coming out from someone who had still yet to die.

I heard shouting in the rest of the city. Cultivators and soldiers were probably landing already. I hesitated. I didn’t want to kill any more people. But I had started this path, I needed to finish it. I quickly crossed the field of corpses on the street and made my way back towards the canal. I had been hoping against hope that the people wouldn’t have rushed me, which was why I hadn’t killed them while racing towards the administration building. That had been a foolish thought.

Now I cut down anyone I came across. Each swing of my sword added another victim to my tally of kills. Eventually I reached a line of soldiers and people rushing towards the canal and walls. I cut into them from behind and kept moving forward.

Even with large numbers, these people still couldn’t win and I always had the option to retreat. Slowly but surely, I cut my way through to the gate I had entered the city earlier. With my attack, the soldiers on the other side of the gate along with the cultivators of the Leaf Empire were able to push through.

I advanced at the front cutting down the people in front of me, the soldiers spreading out behind me in a wave to attack people rushing in from the sides. With people supporting me from behind, the battle proceeded more quickly.

That was when I noted several of the cultivators I had been traveling had arrived behind me, covering my flanks as I went through the city in a large loop around the main building, cutting down anyone I came across.

I had looped through the entire city back to the gate when there were no more people to kill in front of me. The soldiers and cultivators from the Leaf Empire would finish off the rest.

“I am done. Lead me to the ship, Junior Tan,” I gave out an order. The cultivator inclined their head towards me and led me back. The rest of my group followed as well. I could see the distaste on some of their faces. None of them had participated in a total war between Empires.

Once we made it to the ship in the port, I noted more ships were ferrying across soldiers to enter the city. Lord Governor Ting came off one such ship with his personal guard. He bowed deeply towards me. He had probably been waiting for my return if I had to guess.

“Senior cultivator Yuan Zhou, thank you for your assistance,” he said.

“I plan to rest and the move up the canal. Have you assembled work teams to help clear it?” I asked.

“They stand ready. As we move up soldiers will also cross and the army will follow along the opposite bank. We will sweep up along the entire canal. Word has already been sent to the other garrisons,” Lord Governor Ting explained. I nodded at this. At least he was on top of everything so things could keep progressing quickly.

Comments

Well, this has been a waste of money. The month I paid for had no new posts.

BookDragonling

Discord is prob the best answer

신현준

His getting shit done mentality doesn’t bother me at all. Do what he’s gotta do he doesn’t have time or energy to fuck around

E

Like yeah this some bullshit. Idk why he won’t just say that here so we don’t get scammed out of the fee. That’s probably the point tho

E

I plan to rest and the move up the canal > then

SevereMaisJuste

boarders > borders

SevereMaisJuste

Bruh

Toby Lechtenbeger

Another unexplained hiatus as far as I can tell. Last disc message I saw from the author said he's going to ignore admin stuff, and focus solely on writing

Draddock

Did I join at a bad time? I caught up on CC and see that nothing has been posted for a week. Obviously that's not a crazy long time but my addiction says otherwise.

BookDragonling

Anybody heard if the author’s on break? Hope nothing serious going on for them

JoMo

Trust me I've noticed. This is the one that's driving me most crazy, since it isn't just a misspelled homonym, and a clear copy paste

Oliver

He also writes togaether instead of together. And it’s not like that’s a one off thing he has been doing that consistently since systematic lands. I hope it’s just his grammar program being stupid

Doghunter888

fix your copy paste of his sword swing, one swing to SPERATE heaven and earth, driving me crazy SEPERATE is the word you want.

Oliver

Thanks for the chapter

신현준

Wars can have massacres, infact a lot of massacres happened in times of war. Killing lots of defenseless people does apply here, because they are so much weaker than Yuan. In this situation the war had a stable position, with 2 sides in a defensive setup. Low mortality rate in the foreseeable future. But then a walking nuke comes, and instead of trying literally anything diplomatic simply slaughters the military forces and civilians of one side.

da Finnci

I would be interested to see if there is some reflection on his part either during or after this arc. I can get doing what you need to do to survive and if you’re powerful and desperate the thing you would do become more and more insane. But when the desperation ends, Will he have to grapple with the things he’s done that evidently horrify him enough to make him want to puke? Is this a heart demon creating thing? Or will it just be another thing that happened aka, I’m sorry but meh.

tehlu

I really think he should have at least try diplomacy with the wood empire, even like a "take your army and elites and follow me and the leaf empire so I get an escort of both empire, or I just kill you all" Then they would have had a choice, here it's just random killing

Lijwent

It’s not really a massacre, it’s war????

tehlu

Its a harsh chapter, but the harsh reality is that the MC is on a time limit and doesnt know how long he will be stuck on the great world. He also is 1500 to 2000 years old and his perpective has grown colder. The two empires are also at war, one side will have to win anyway. I dont have a problem with this chapter, thanks foe the chapter.

HenryMorgan

Wait, sorry Draddock, I didn't see your entire comment before now. This is a crazy take. I'm sorry, but this is a crazy take. I know the main character is dehumanizing them by calling them frogs at the bottom of the well, but these are people. And do we really have any reason to believe that he wouldn't be able to order them to keep peace while he moves through? That is obviously not the morally best thing to do, but it is way better than slaughtering everybody. The whole idea about this cultivation society is the more powerful person has seniority can basically demand outrageous things and people just kind of do it. Besides, even if you want to argue from a purely logical and übermensch mindset, you could make the argument that this was stupid. Energy is king. Not even trying to use a diplomatic solution that doesn't waste energy before going out and killing the mortals seems stupid. The main character gives the excuse that he wouldn't want both sides to turn on him, but I fail to see why he would even think that likely. From all we have seen of cultivation society, that isn't how the structure works. In the end of the day, I just don't want to spend my time with a character that, when a push comes to shows, turn to murdering innocent people. You can even call them children. That's perhaps a bit aggressive, but compared to the main character, maybe it's not untrue. He murders them because it's inconvenient. You can argue that it's logical or within his character, and that's fine. Maybe you're right. I don't think so, but that's fine. I just don't want to read a story that goes in this direction. In the end, all I'm saying is not necessarily that this isn't a story that's not working. I'm not saying you couldn't justify the character going in this direction. I don't think it has adequately been done. I don't think we see our main character going power-crazy and killing people as soon as he's on top. I don't think that has been justified. You can make the justification that he's pressed on time and afraid of dying and stuff like that, but I don't think that has been shown well in the text. Beyond that, it doesn't really matter. I don't want to read a story where the main character, as soon as he's pressed and afraid of dying, resorts to murder. I think there was other solutions that he didn't explore or even consider, and to me that is unforgivable.

liv

Yeah Alba, that's true. My point wasn't really about that are Illustrious main character but more about a real-world hundred years old But that certainly didn't come across very well. And yeah, he is certainly super fucking mortal Way beyond a hundred at this point

liv

Draddock I obviously disagree, but more power to you.

liv

Redbreaker I actually think he has stated multiple times that he isn't necessarily afraid of death, but he will do everything in his power to reach immortality. That's not really the point I'm saying. What I'm saying is merely, in my opinion, this is unforgivable. I don't think that the character that we saw grow up on the continent, who traded, whose main idea was to use the cocks of civilization to improve his lot in life, would, when given power, resort to massacres. You may disagree with this, that's fine. In the end, we don't know how the human mind would react to 2000 years of trauma. It is possible, perhaps even likely, that a person like this would be the outcome. But I'm just not interested in reading a story in which a person goes around massacring people because he cannot be bothered to talk with them. At this point, his actions is indistinguishable from that of a villain, and I don't see any realistic ways of redeeming him. As such, I'm done with the story. I have no problem with anybody who isn't, or who can look past this part. I would question you if you don't find this immoral, but that's neither here nor there.

liv

I think Redbreaker has the right take here. 1500+ years of scraping along, slowly altering his morality. Last chapter YZ talked about how he could barely remember his time on Earth, and even the continent was more than 1,000 years ago. Also this serves to illustrate how when YZ is in the position of his elders, he's not much morally better than them (maybe slightly because he doesn't go for murder first most of the time). I think YZ's reasoning with the time pressure considered is able to be empathized with. He doesn't know how long it'll take to get to the Great Desert. He doesn't know if he'll find a solution at the Great Desert. Or if he does find a solution, how long it would take to utilize? Even if he's able to advance in the great desert to a high level right before immortality, how can he escape the Mechanical Layer? His ship is broken on the furthest edge. If he manages to find a hole dropping into the firmament, how would he survive there without being an immortal? Without even knowing how to get back to the Forever City? There are SOOO MANY unknowns for YZ to make it to immortality at this point. 2 years could be the difference maker. Not to mention even if he did sail to another canal, there could be a similar or worse situation there as well. As for diplomacy, it's possible it could have worked. But I don't think it would have worked without either a significant amount of death, or time spent. If diplomacy did work, who's to say one or both wouldn't try to take advantage of the chaos to attack, thus leaving him back at the position of having to slowly clear the tunnel himself with time wasted. So YZ made the decision that his time was more important than the lives of frogs at the bottom of a well. I think with all the above considerations, I don't find it an unreasonable choice.

Draddock

I never got into Systemic Lands, simply because the MC is a psychopath murder hobo from the beginning. Now this story becomes the same? Why? The appeal for me has always been the world building, but this is just unnecessary. He finally reached a point where he is the person in power. Great! So why would you make him a murder hobo? My heart hurts while I attack and slaughter civilians without warning. Buhu, no slaves equals I have to commit atrocities. Poor me...

da Finnci

Agreed. The man's a murder hobo just because he can't be bothered to use diplomacy.

Overclocked

This disgusted me

Overclocked

He is not 100 btw, more about 1500

Alba

Overall, to me it's not really a problem if he becomes a villain but it does feels like he has become worse than Michael at this point, but maybe that's the point; I can understand why others may drop it here since it does feel like he is not himself anymore p.s. ty for chapter

Alba

I prefer this to the nationalistic consume everything and bring peace to the world bs china pumps out.

Justin Roberts

I think you're missing the progression of the MC because it's not in the direction you want to see. MC is... 1400 years old (at least maybe over 2000 at this point) and every time he advances to the next level it's crowded and controlled by his seniors and he barely able to make thin margin scraps at great risk to himself. Now he's suddenly in a world where he is the senior powerhouse but it's a low energy void and if he doesn't leave he will die of old age because he's not like yet immortal. In a place where he has the strength to do/build/be whatever he wants all he wants to do is leave so he can continue cultivating...

Redbreaker

If cultivating was a thing. You should never join the combat side of it.

Thundermike00

"Even if there was peace, the canal was not that wide. I would say that three ships would be able to comfortably pass through side to side. Four or five would be a very tight squeeze." Hmm, for the old canal at the extremity of civ area, i can understand, but seem a bit small to me personnaly in the wide aspect here, after all its been thousands of years of use, and its a major and main axe of travel/economy/etc for their territory with a huge huge population, only 3 ship wide of passing seem a bit too little? If they are others aspect/reason/cause to make it like that yes, but i was seeing it bigger after all this time and importance it had and so increase in traffic it get Also they are using sail... so these canal need to be big or you just can't use them with sail most of the time (and canal and lonnnnnggg between two ocean) (or i missed something in previous chapter about the Great World and a aspect of major and constant same wind direction it had and so canal are build in some specific place for using this characteristic constant direction of wind so ship can use sail in the canal in both direction “You may rise. I will attack immediately. Rally your troops and workers,” I ordered. and soon after "Another reason I didn’t mention for attacking right away was the element of surprise. I had no doubt that both sides had spies. If I waited, then it was conceivable that the opposing forces could make things slightly difficult for me by grouping togeather." A little miss of author? :P "All these lives were not worth my time. That was what it ultimately came down to. It was easier to kill these people in order to gain passage rather than going around or finding an alternative. It was heartbreaking, but I refused to be delayed for years." Yeah fucked up, can also add that because they already at War, and its total war here for the poor sod commoner, its about to happen on one side anyway in the end, so dead aplenty adn extermination is inevitable even if he go away or try others slow approach, so yeah it come to 'not worth his time' ultimately in the end, reality and the cold rational needed over it can be so sick sometime

Zarik0

Okay so I'm cancelling my membership and I won't be reading this anymore. Here's my 10 cent as to what I thought about this and the general direction the story has been moving. I really liked the story in the early days, really enjoyed the forever city, thought it was quite interesting and unique in a lot of ways, but at this point the main character has just turned too far away from everything decent and humane. I get wanting to depict how a person's view changes throughout a long, long life, but that's one thing and this is another. I don't expect 100 years old to be mass murderer and I don't particularly enjoy it in my stories. This whole massacre feels like a fundamental betrayal of his character. The whole idea of him is to trade, to cultivate, to use the cogs of civilization to improve himself and everybody around him. What happens when trade breaks down is violence. In this chapter the main character has been given all the power and he massacres everybody because he can't be inconvenient with finding another solution. Heck, it might even have been easier to just tell them both to postpone the war while he sails through. I don't know, it feels like there's more options than this. even if it turns out that the place is influencing our main character in some ways or shape or something else is afoot because he seems quite different ever since the entering I feel like this is just a step too far I cannot forgive what he has done nor will I excuse it at this point he's a villain who deserves to die he might be worse than any demonic cultivator we have seen in this story at any rate this is by far the worst atrocity committed in the story and it's done by a main character. I don't feel like the story gives this weight enough for how monumentally it is. In the end, I just don't like the main character anymore. I can't empathize with him and he seems to be genuinely evil at this point. Considering that he's the only constant in the story, this is an absolute deal-breaker. Love the setting, hate the main character. P.S. The rant about them not having slaves and it being horrific is such an odd take, I can't even.

liv

Sad story

hachetnif


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