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B5 Chapter 515: Tyrannomachy, pt. 1

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Thanks for the chapter!

Leigh Micheletti

so, I am rereading crucible. and found this passage TL;DR Kaius will get a material for his sword from the tyrant. “As for finding the required materials? Yes, it will be difficult — but by no means impossible for someone like you. Sufficient Guardian rewards at a deep enough layer are the obvious, boring and slow answer. Hunting dragons and similar greater beasts with such close ties to mana is the quick, dirty, and dangerous one. But, they are not the only options. There is at least one other major challenge you will likely encounter on your current course — if you play your cards right, it will give you what you need.” Kaius froze, narrowing his eyes as he honed in on the way she had stressed ‘challenge’. The ascendant’s expression was frozen in a knowing smile — adamantly refusing to expand more, despite his obvious interest. Likely couldn’t expand more, he realised with a start. She’d already mentioned several times she was bound to multiple rules, both similar and different to the ones he assumed Ekum operated on as a ‘Watcher’. If directly explaining exactly what the challenge was violated her duties, it made it all too easy to infer. After all, beyond Crucibles and Guardians, there was only one major challenge he could think of. One that had also come with the phase change. Tyrants — though he still knew nothing of what they were, other than monsters of great and terrible power. A goal then; a worthy hunt, if it would let him advance his blade that much sooner. Xenanra winked — drawing a wide grin out of him.

shawn greer

TFTC. I wonder you the 2 will be - Ro and Reirker or maybe Dross?

Robert Gardner

So close to the end of the tyrant! Her leather and chain armour was torn in half a dozen places, -> in half in a Disgust flare, stoking the heat that pulsed -> flared

DeadicatedReader

Love the vibe overall, and the story! But parts feel authered/artifical. Why 2 (specifically 2) without essence? Why was kaius so sure for multiple chapters that the main fight would happen now and prepare accordingly? Feel like the same (great) flow could happen a touch more naturally

Reodude

TFTC

Talmor

Disgust flare, stoking - I think this was supposed to be flared?

Kyle Oathout

earth and stone with. Smoke - This doesn't feel quite right

Kyle Oathout

so, return to ashen fields part one and only :P oh that tyrant needs to die.

shawn greer


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