Here's the sketch of the new page...
something important about this page, it's the look of the outside, doesn't seem very high view this time, like from the Consortium building... they're somewhere else in the city.
something interesting too, is that the original page had a "FOE" label at the back, that I decided to swap for the Project Prime logo in the actual page... originally, in legacy, I wanted this base to be completely under FOE control, but later in the story I scrapped that idea, but still, there are FOE guys around there from time to time.
also fun thing, is that I kept calling doctor Berit as "Angela" in the scripts... idk, I forgot she was called Berit in the wiki XD.
also, you'll see how the comic page structure becomes more conservative in layouts, as I'll stop experimenting that much with weird shapes and such, and just focus in make the paneling effective.