Derideal 11-51
Added 2023-01-31 15:27:40 +0000 UTCAlpha will get scarred by these patches, what could it mean for him in the future? we can't know for sure.
UP1- a couple of text got fixed, thanks @twilight!
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really, they both doesn't know much about love
Andrés Barra
2023-02-01 14:28:13 +0000 UTCNot really, the nsfw stuff isn't exactly canon and part of the story.
Andrés Barra
2023-02-01 09:38:42 +0000 UTCHer posture is pretty unmistakable but I love Alpha's innocent response
Kit Foxboy
2023-02-01 05:44:45 +0000 UTCoh okay, is that mean you will be re doing the nsfw pics as well?
John Doberson
2023-02-01 05:10:24 +0000 UTCThis page was made around 2015 or 2016 originally. I fixed a little this one for the new version of the story. And I also included this last sequence in the Alpha x Ivory nsfw comic for context
Andrés Barra
2023-01-31 23:01:48 +0000 UTCCoundn't said better myself
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-01-31 22:02:16 +0000 UTCdidn't you make this page before?
John Doberson
2023-01-31 21:24:34 +0000 UTCHumans are just selfish bastards, the xeno are just casualties, victims caught and just forced to deal with their sh*t
Andrés Barra
2023-01-31 19:34:48 +0000 UTCWhatever Laura says about this situation, i'll support it. If she agrees, I'll agree with it, and vice-versa. I just won't listen to Adam, at least until the end of the story, because of the whole brainwashing, slave master ordeal going on at the moment. If you wanted me to hate everything humans/The Consortium are doing to Adam, Laura and Ivory and their people, to selling them like property, torturing them like psychopaths, turning them into weapons of war and being brain washed slaves who obey their orders without question or free will from people who hate them, to even the name Xeno, congratulations. You hit the soft spot for absolute burning hatred perfectly. No story wanted me to see its development so badly like this one. Can't wait for new chapters dude!
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-01-31 19:26:34 +0000 UTCwhen the episode ends, you'll decide if you want it to be canon or not. it's up for readers
Andrés Barra
2023-01-31 19:04:48 +0000 UTCNevertheless, super adorable and cute! These two are such a great couple! Made me feel lonely ngl 😔
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-01-31 19:02:46 +0000 UTCI can feel Laura wanting to materialize in the room rn and just slap Ivory before she can get any "bright" ideas. Also, i wonder if this makes the NSFW comic you did a while ago canon 👀
TheNat'LaGuy
2023-01-31 19:00:20 +0000 UTCWell, in previous pages the scientist said to have used FOE experimental implants to save his life, since he couldn't regenerate fast enough this time. These implants are something unique, which is going to be explained a little more in the next episode
Andrés Barra
2023-01-31 17:00:43 +0000 UTCSo...Alpha is an Android the whole time? Or is this Alpha a fake body, while his real one is somewhere else?
Shadow
2023-01-31 16:57:14 +0000 UTChaha, I don't think many readers didn't expected fun time after this
Andrés Barra
2023-01-31 15:40:45 +0000 UTChaha, and so the scene leads to the AD comic XD I'm expecting a cut scene in the next page XD
Arcticfox
2023-01-31 15:32:45 +0000 UTC
