Deku Cucks UA Chapter 8 Preview
Added 2023-09-10 21:58:37 +0000 UTCI know a lot of people have been patiently waiting for the next chapter of "Deku Cucks UA". I'm super sorry that work on that fic has been slow lately, and I'm super grateful to everyone for waiting so patiently! A while back, I hit a roadblock with chapter 8 because I wasn't sure I was happy with how it was turning out. However, I want to finally overcome that hurdle and manage to get the chapter out, so I thought I would share the current WIP with my Patrons and ask for your thoughts. Some of my concerns were about whether or not the Sports Festival portion felt substantial enough and just in general the pacing and the set up of the upcoming sex scene with Izuku and Mei cucking Iida in Mei's lab. My idea was to make it like a competition where Mei has them use some of her sex toys to compete after Iida lost in the Sports Festival race, and of course Iida loses to Izuku once again and then proceeds to also lose his girlfriend. So just any thoughts or feedback on any of that would be helpful so I can finally get work on this chapter moving again!
Comments
I do have some experience beta reading if you don't mind my help.
Shigiya
2023-09-16 01:44:48 +0000 UTCThank you so much ^^
2023-09-11 23:49:32 +0000 UTCI liked the direction you took for the set up, the pacing feels nice and even though the race isn't that long, it doesn't feel rushed. All around, very nice.
Titan
2023-09-11 09:03:43 +0000 UTC
