Library Cleaning WIP 16
Added 2024-08-04 12:54:06 +0000 UTCHey!
This week I animated up to the point where the second mouse girl is in Lily's mouth! I got started working on the actual swallow animation yesterday, but it wasn't looking right, so I decided to save it for next week to avoid rushing through it.
So the next thing that will be animated is the camera switching back to view Lily from the outside and then show her swallowing the second mouse girl!
After that I'm thinking about showing the internal view again, and I might use that internal view as a transition to show Lily right next to the third mouse girl, or maybe having caught her already!
After the third mouse girl, I am thinking of having Lily find a large group of mouse girls and animate her rapidly swallowing them! I might use some animation tricks to show Lily swallowing a bunch without it being a ton of work on my end. Like maybe showing Lily grab three mouse girls at once and then just animating her throat showing them go down. That way I could animate Lily swallowing like 5-10 more mouse girls, and it wouldn't me take a ton of time to animate. It would also keep the animation interesting in my opinion!
We'll see, I'm still thinking about it! That's all for this week though!
See the full WIP video with the MEGA link or the attachments!
https://mega.nz/file/DyxH3I5C#lzdjWKQPoCBrp0c0N6CqnznCHIXpllQ6uJl_xvQYWiE
Comments
Oh having the third mouse girl lead lily to more of them is a good idea! I'll have to consider doing that!
Sikru
2024-08-05 01:52:13 +0000 UTCBased on what you've said about Lily's hunt, she's going to be quite well fed. Hope she doesn't get a belly ache. Something I thought of when it shifted to Mouse02's perspective is maybe have the back of Lily's throat flex or open a bit the closer she gets to it when she enters her mouth. Like she slides Mouse02 into her mouth with her finger pushing her further in, throat opening to accept her next snack as she's about swallow. Looking forwards to how she'll react to seeing rest of the mice, as it's likely Mousey III that unintentionally leads her to the rest of them, or close enough that the buffet is now open.
NotHere03
2024-08-05 01:22:13 +0000 UTCIt wasn't an intention of mine to specifically hide the prey's face. I just chose to focus more on Lily instead for this part. I do think that a section showing the prey's face would have been good for this part! I'll keep that in mind for later!
Sikru
2024-08-04 15:23:20 +0000 UTCYou also seem to intentionally hide the prey’s faces. Is that for a technical or stylistic reason?
Vore_Lord-16
2024-08-04 15:13:58 +0000 UTCYeah, most likely. When I get to the end of the animation I normally look for things like that and try to fix them. That one mouse girl at the beginning of the WIP video does look pretty stiff, so ill be looking into improving that. Thanks for the feedback!
Sikru
2024-08-04 15:12:15 +0000 UTCThe preys act a bit stiff. Will they look more actively frantic at some point?
Vore_Lord-16
2024-08-04 14:59:50 +0000 UTCI reckon. And that POV section of the second mouse girl going into Lily’s mouth has not only reminded me a bit of the full POV section of a viewer going into Maria’s mouth in the previous animation you did, but it has also got me coming up with an alternate section where I was in that animation, willing to get eaten by Lily which you might have already read in my comment above before I explained what I liked so far.
Jeshua Paterson
2024-08-04 13:25:01 +0000 UTCHaha, yea I would like to include a bunch of mouse girls if possible! Like I mentioned in the WIP, I am interested in doing a rapid vore section where she is just swallowing them left and right. That was an idea i had since the start, but i kind of forgot about it for a while!
Sikru
2024-08-04 13:11:04 +0000 UTCIf I was in this situation: Lily: You’re such a cutie. I can’t wait to have you in my tummy. Me: And I can’t wait to be in your tummy! *Lily giggles and purrs as she then licks me and then slowly puts me headfirst into her mouth* Ahem! Alternatives aside, I love this view of the second mouse girl going into Lily’s mouth. I wonder how many mouse girls she’ll have by the end of this animation. I guess we shall see as the animation progress on your end.
Jeshua Paterson
2024-08-04 13:04:12 +0000 UTC
