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[PSR][Sale] Hekapoo Marco Arc
Added 2023-01-11 03:21:13 +0000 UTCUpgraded by Hero, who wanted to see the story of the Hekapoo Marco story coloured
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I do agree, and certainly not trying to sound mean or anything. It's an easy trap to fall into to use ellipsis more than needed as they tend to feel right in comic writing, but they actually should be used quite sparingly
Malkai Wot
2023-01-13 01:10:50 +0000 UTCI like your stuff, but some criticism, you can't use an ellipsis at the end of every sentence as a replacement for punctuation. It makes a panicking character seem like they have the tone of Darla, disinterested in the everything in and around them. There's a major difference in a character going "Please Glossaryck, you have to help me change back, Star's gone insane trying to get me into a dress..." and "Please Glossaryck, you have to help me change back, Star's gone insane trying to get me into a dress!"
RubyDead_Queen
2023-01-11 07:44:25 +0000 UTCjust keep the submitted text to a single image, there were like at least several images in the last one that could have spawned an image snapshot for that moment in time :3
Running Toaster
2023-01-11 03:50:50 +0000 UTCOh WOW. JUST EPIC. Here the one who commissioned this story. Thank you very much Hero for requesting it in color. And I must add that I have not finished yet, there are a few more to finish the story of Marcapoo. But little by little.
polonsus
2023-01-11 03:32:15 +0000 UTC
