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They Chose... Poorly! [Complete]
Added 2024-10-31 07:00:07 +0000 UTCBro and Dude... I mean, Jed and Jonas find out just how poorly a choice they made...
Bro and Dude... I mean, Jed and Jonas find out just how poorly a choice they made...
Comments
Well, I'd always be open to penning another tale.
MrInternetMan
2024-11-04 23:44:13 +0000 UTCThe names just slipped in :D
Tyler Adams
2024-11-04 23:28:33 +0000 UTCI mean, I wouldn't mind seeing the other "Bro" and "Dude" again....
MrInternetMan
2024-11-01 21:34:53 +0000 UTCCool, I'm glad you don't use AI. There always seems to be some glaring inconsistencies with AI that even a less talented artist would never do. Again, I'm not 'dissing' you or trying to mock anything, and I'm probably hyper-sensitive to anatomical inconsistencies because it's been part of my job for over 30 years, but the way the 'external obliques' (obliquus externus abdominis) are depicted, probably starting from page 12, but starts looking super weird around 19 and is insane on 23, is anatomically not possible and is melting my neurodivergent OCD brain. I'm just really triggered by these pictures and I'm hoping to provide information that might help your models look more 'realistically unrealistic', and potentially more attractive, in future depictions. Rectus femoris - the 'six-pack' (actually 8) goes vertically from the top of the pelvis, at the bottom, to the ribs and sternum, just below the pecs, at the top. This is what most people think of as 'abs', but it's only one of four major muscle groups. The other three groups are attached to the sides of these and wrap around the waist to the spine and lower ribs at different angles, with each separate muscle group forming a different layer with slightly different functions. They are postural and endurance muscles that are mostly always active, so they don't grow so much, like arm or leg muscles might and would never bulge out so much on someone with this sort of physique. In fact, bodybuilders often try to minimise how big these muscles are, so their waists look smaller, which makes a bigger contrast with their upper body. The top layer of these three 'side-ab' layers, the 'external obliques', wrap from the front and sides of the pelvis upwards and back to the spine and lower ribs and STOP THERE. The bulge above the front of the hips depicted in the picture corresponds to them, but they are a thin sheet of postural muscle that helps with breathing, twisting and bending sideways at the waist and stabilising the pelvis and spine. They are 'slow-twitch', postural/endurance muscle and don't grow as much. Any bulging there would normally be subcutaneous fat (which I don't think you were trying to imply) and they don't wrap around the top of the rectus femoris as depicted in your picture. They also don't connect with the latissimus dorsi like they seem to do in your image. The 'lats' are one of the top layers of muscle on the back, whereas the obliques (and transversus) are the bottom layers, and there are other layers of muscles between them. The lats go from one point on each upper arm, under the armpit, to attach to the shoulder blade, lower spine and back of the pelvis. The fibres of lats and external obliques are pretty much perpendicular to each other in the small area where they overlap and contract at 90 degrees to each other, so they could never connect. There is always a distinct demarcation between the lats and the torso muscles because of this, especially in subjects who are (a) lean; and even more so, when (b) the lats are well-developed. The only thing that blurs this is when there's a lot of subcutaneous body fat, which your (male) character doesn't have. Sorry to go off on a rant, but to me, this takes a lot away from your artwork, which is normally at an astronomically high standard. I'm just trying to be helpful, not critical, especially since I'm probably disappearing soon (and this sort of defeats the purpose for me disappearing). So, I'll try to disappear now and stop being a pain. (A massive hail storm just started here with golf ball sized hail coming in at 45 degrees - Go Straya! - so I'm probably going to die anyway.)
Kaffeyette Lektor
2024-11-01 05:52:46 +0000 UTCIt's a possibility :D
Tyler Adams
2024-10-31 18:45:11 +0000 UTCWho's saying he won't after a little fun in the graveyard :)
Tyler Adams
2024-10-31 18:44:56 +0000 UTCI made those abs super crazy myself, and I've never used AI in my art. Never will :)
Tyler Adams
2024-10-31 18:44:21 +0000 UTCI'm quite happy with their choices :D
Tyler Adams
2024-10-31 18:43:38 +0000 UTCSo, it turns out they didn't choose so badly after all.
pmsrw3
2024-10-31 14:05:06 +0000 UTCThose two dude-bros were not the best examples of the male gender, but to be fair, they weren't equipped with a lot of processing power, skills or knowledge - as dumb as two boxes of hammers - and, " when the only tool you have is a hammer, then every problem looks like a nail." Lilith, on the other hand, may have been traumatised and abused, so she's got that excuse, but despite having knowledge, intelligence, skills and powers, she was even worse. Her male character looked creepy-nasty (axe-murderer eyes) and what was going on with that right latissimus dorsi and external obliques (abs)? It looked like those two muscle groups were merged into one like in ' The Blob' or a Neill Blomkamp horror sci-fi, despite their fibres being mostly perpendicular and not overlapping much at all, except along the spine. Do you use AI in the rendering process now, because that's the sort of thing you see in AI art where body parts of a similar colour get merged when they're close to each other? I'm not meaning to be critical, but normally, your art never does anything like that. Sometimes, things are of unnatural proportions (sometimes, deliberately so), especially on the hyper-muscular male bodies, but I'm guessing that's built into the models. This just looks strange. If it's not AI and it's the model doing this, then that product needs some tweaking,
Kaffeyette Lektor
2024-10-31 12:04:13 +0000 UTCI mean, given the difference of being fucked senseless and beaten to death, I'd say they did choose the better option. Maybe there'll even be new lives inside them once the sex is done. XD
Teysia
2024-10-31 10:24:11 +0000 UTCMeh. I don't know. I kinda think she should have just gone "enjoy your lives, I'm gonna find another pair of Bros to change."
Skippy Hugo
2024-10-31 07:20:55 +0000 UTC
