Community Review - Trinity's Trinkets: Enjoyable
Added 2021-01-25 08:01:00 +0000 UTCHey everyone! This campaign is only successful because of your support, and I want to show you I value your continued support by giving you a place to give constructive feedback on completed comics. I'm a huge believer in Adam Sessler's Five Star System, so that's what we'll be using here.
★★★★★ Exceptional Comic; A true must-read
★★★★☆ Great Comic with minor issues; Lacks that "certain something"
★★★☆☆ Decent Comic; Nothing special, nothing awful
★★☆☆☆ Severely Flawed Comic; Not recommendable
★☆☆☆☆ Truly Awful; No Redeeming Qualities
Please feel free to share a comment as well with things you liked and would like to see again, or maybe something that didn't quite click for you.
Thanks for your support, and here's a closer look at Gina from the comic :)
-Tyler
Comments
Happy you like the ending, it was once a lot more bleak :)
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:08:10 +0000 UTCAfter Costumed 1&2 I kind of got burned out on mind altering stuff, so it won't be around too much :)
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:07:44 +0000 UTCI left that vague on purpose, as it was originally spelt out that this was indeed a new reality that "Mika" was not part of. Felt too bleak, so I left it vague for readers to fill in what happened.
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:07:03 +0000 UTCI mentioned this in another comment, but originally it was shown that this was an entirely new reality shaped around Gina, leaving Mika all alone in the original reality not knowing what happened to Benji. That felt a little too bleak for me once it came down to it, so I left what happened exactly a little more vague and focused on Gina's happiness.
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:05:45 +0000 UTCThis was always meant to be a shorter comic as I don't like slow mental changes (it can come off as torturous sometimes), and I actually really like the hair :)
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:03:48 +0000 UTCThis isn't the last you'll be seeing of Trinity's Trinkets :)
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:01:37 +0000 UTCI like Mind Changes sometimes too :)
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:00:33 +0000 UTCI can see where you're coming from. The ending was once a little more bleak with Mika coming home and finding all traces of Benji gone, implying Gina had slipped into another reality leaving Mika alone. I changed it because I felt Gina finding a measure of joy with her job and "Mike" was a better note to end on.
TGTrinity
2021-01-25 22:00:11 +0000 UTCI like the comic, but as other have mentioned the Mike/Mika at the end was a little off. I was all onboard with the changes to self, but didn't really like how it changed Mika to Mike as she was not involved with the item. Didn't really seem to fit the story of one person using an item to change themselves but in fact they changed the other person as well. I would have liked it more if the other person accepted the new employed lover.
Cyber_Wolf
2021-01-25 21:22:57 +0000 UTCI liked it very much. I enjoy when the mind changes too.
maven poulter
2021-01-25 21:21:07 +0000 UTCReally enjoying the comic and look forward to more in this series, at least I hope it becomes a series.
Bob Fink
2021-01-25 15:28:30 +0000 UTCKind of echoing Faye and Ray. It all felt rushed for such a short comic. I would have rather seen him transform a few nights in a row and wake up wondering where the props came from with only brief memories of the night before and growing to accept that this was the way it should be. Also, her hair seemed off somehow. Not because of the cut or style, but just not your usual high end product. Part of me thinks you didn’t really like it fully either which is why this is the first comic you chose for polling. Any truth to that? 🧐
RyPaCo
2021-01-25 15:28:03 +0000 UTCI liked the comic, but that ending lost me. Mika got dragged into this whole thing right at the end and it just felt forced. Obviously it's a short form comic so the more complex narrative isn't possible, but it just felt off.
Faye Fatale
2021-01-25 12:41:21 +0000 UTCIt's not clear if Mike was Mika, I mean, it seems logical, but we're talking about magic, so, anything goes. For all we know Mike was another one of Trinity's customers with a desire to bang a hot exhibitionist. And if Mike was Mika, that sort of negates Gina having a healthy relationship. Since, her wish 'overwrote' significant parts of Mika.
Ray
2021-01-25 12:28:54 +0000 UTCI liked it a lot, I liked the ending, the only thing im not a fan of is the mind altering stuff but overall great comic :D !
Nemea
2021-01-25 12:25:10 +0000 UTCI liked the comic overall, and it's a fine work, but not really my favorite concepts. I didn't expect the ending tho, so that was fun.
Jacob Keller
2021-01-25 09:46:02 +0000 UTC
